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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Finuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu----------- myyyyyyyyyy shinuuuuuuuu
wah wah kya update hai janu
simply rocking...........
awwwwwwww i loved ur writing yaar- u portrayed the nature of a conservative muslim family very beautifully.

hey i loved Dadi here- she was supporting Nupur and praised her
its really very nice
but i was shocked with shilpa auntys word- i really didnt expect it frm her
but may be this is d reality- but i think now everyone(actually most of d ppl) wants a learned and working girl as wife and bahu....
i loved ur update sweety
wow nups was trying to make a rhyme by using maynks and her name
its so cute
beautiful part
keep it up

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

hey fia api🤗
hayeee kitna acha lagaraha ek saath sare updates😳
kya update thi..😃
mayank's mom was nice..but thodi thodi nice..not puri puri🤣
par mother-in-laws to aisi hi hotin hain..kind of irritating😆
bas mayank acha ho to baat banjaye😳
nupur ki halat aisi hogayi hai ------>🤣🤣
but true..usne to dekha bhi nahi mayank ko..shadi kaise hosakti hai😲
now waiting for mayank's entry😍

and just loved this part
mayank....nupur maynk......hmm rymthing tu horahi hai....😆

continue soon
love
tasfia

😆

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drmaha

@drmaha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

tht was so real dear.......🤗🤗

i truly loved it.......

dil hurah atha k update khatm hi na hu......

hum yuhi padhtai rahay padhtai padhtai rahay aur bas padhtai hi rahay ..........🤣🤣🤣

ap k likhanai ka tareeqa hmay buhat poasand aay a..hmarai dil ko chooliy apnai fizza ji.........😍

dadi was sumwhere strict but cool dude also.........🤣👍🏼

hmai umeed hai k aab apko hmse yeh gila nai huga k hm apko late comment kertai hai ya res ker k daiai hai..........😳

mayank miyaa kab samnai tashreef layei gai....handsome tu hai kahi kharoos na hu.........😕

khush rahay aap fiza jii......🤣

lots of love........🤗

jaldi wapes aayei nupur aur mayank ko lai dobara.........hm apki rah daikh rahay hai ............

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

why girl always has to do this..........why girls always compromise herself by marrying someone to fulfill her family's wish............i can't understand this.............. its really scary........

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samira

@-Samira-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

mind-blowing update Fazu i wasn't expecting those words for shilpa aunty 😡 but hope hamara mayu will be different thanks for the updating soon hun 🤗 n the pm

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Loved Nupur character, and Mayank Nice name haina Nupur..😳

Nice part..loved it

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Awesome ff Fiza... Bohat acccha likhti hai aap, aapke dusre ff bhi acche hai lekin un sab say accha yeh hai... Aur ffs likhey urdu main..

About the story, i think Nupur is living like any ordinary girl. But she's a obedient daughter, I think she will marry... But Mayank seems like a great guy... Continue soon...

-Laiba

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

Bohuuuuuuut acha update kiya hai fizu...🤗
Jitna hi sune hai Im impressed with mayank...He seems charming and modern...😳😳
But shilpa aunty..😒.I always admire her but here i didnt like her thoughts...Hope she'll understand with time being...
Vaise dadi ws superb.😎..Dadi ki umer bohut hai par khayalat ekdam modern hai...Nupur ke dadu jaise nahi hai...😡😡
Fizuuuu im waiting for mayank...Kab karwa rahi ho mulakat hamari hero se.😍😍..Nupur also waiting na...😉
Jaldi jaldi le ayo usse...

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: jiya_angel
reserved!!

*edited*

yayyy!! here also me first!!🥳
and i loved it... nupur's character is just wow!!😃

but i was so hurt with Shilpa aunty and dadu's words

but I guess aisa hi hota hai

nice part fiza...

and the last line was so cute😳

thnx for de pm🤗

~jiya~

ya ya...congrats for cuming first ....

thnks ..im so glad tht u liked her

yaar stop considering here shilpa anty as MJHT one....she wont be..i warning u all....

hmm wasy zayada taar yeahy larky ki amay asay hi hoti hain...X ray layti hain ap ka...

lolz.....thnks for liking last line

at the end of the update a prefer my readers smiling faces

lov ya

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: achoose

nice update fiza.......

everything seems so real............i cud imagine the whole scene.....

and thanx 4 giving the english meaning of some tuff words...it really helped me..........

am eager to read more..

love u...tc

hey ashu

ohh im sooo glad tht u found it so realistic

lol😆

i told u na..this ff is with english subtiles.....when i write it ....its seems so funny....n if it helped u ....thts gr8...cause i dont wont to lss my so close readers

i'll upadate soon

lova ya too

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