MG FF Jaisi karni waisi bharni Pt 6,7,8 Pg 26 12/6 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: XXXYYYZZZ

Awesome part... loved it

Thanx a lot swthrt
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56

Interesting... But i hope geet will forgive him at end... Plz

Thanx a lot swthrt
Forgive lets c how the stry goes
Nt sure yet😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: kkaavvyyaa

Awesome part... loved it

Thanx a lot swthrt
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

its very diff... i loved the concept...

n the 2nd part is tooo romantic n awesome
add me 2 PM list

Thanx a lot swthrt
It shuld be diff reading same thg ull get bore na😉
Will surly pm u
Thanx agn
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: nazsij

it was really good...different and interesting one...pls add me in ur pm list...

Thanx a lot swthrt
Wil surely pm u
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

PS

1st Who ever wants PM add me to ur buddy list or when i send the request plz accept it
2nd Only those ppl who comment on present update will get pm in next update
No intention of being rude its jus why waste others time when they arent interested in reading it
3rd Plz give some ideas of wat u wanna read in next updates
I cant write witout ull giving me ur views ideas
Plzzz
If ull are nt giving than i myt end this FF soon
Edited by -afsha- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87

Part 2 -pg 9

Part 3

Knocking at the door he entered the room without waiting for the response

Geet's back was at the door and she was fidgeting with her hook of her bra

Maan shook his head she always had problem with that She had already woren her shirt but in hurry she had not done her hook correctly and now she is doing with the shirt on her and her hands reaching her back trying to correct it

Maan stood there remembering how in past this moment made him realize Geet was something more than friend to him
Flashback

It was mid of 2nd year of their college a seminar was going to happen

College started from 7am and finished at 1 pm but that day with seminar being there and presentation next day Geet's group stayed back and didnt went home as they thought its waste of time and with Geet being the group leader she wanted everything perfect

It was 6 pm in the evening and the seminar was going to start in some time

Geet's group went ahead to take seats in front row and Geet was checking the things

It was getting dark and Geet had switched off classroom light as she was leaving

Before leaving she saw around no one was there and think of doing the thing which was irritating her from morning that her bra hook which was open

She only knew how she managed it the whole day

Taking her hands behind without removing her top she tried to put it

But it wasnt happening she was asking lord why did he gave her hands which are so small that culdnt reach her back and do what she wanted to

She was fidgeting when she felt someone coming and she turned around to see her best friend Maan there

G:Phew its you i thought someone else came

Maan was in other group so he didnt meet Geet after the college hours

He came down as her group members were up in seminar room but she wanst there

M:What are u doing here and why are lights off

G:Woh i was leaving but thought of completing this little work can you help me out

Maan without thinking said yes

Maan and Geet were friends for more than 4 yrs they had met in the 1st yr of college in start it wasnt that good relation but later on they hit it off

Maan moved forward and asked Geet

M:What you want help in

G:Put my bra hook

Maan's mouth fall open in shock mana they were friends and shared almost all things but this was first time she asked something like this

Geet was girl that if someone unknown or unknowingly also touched she use to rub that part with her hands and than rub her hands to jeans as to remove that touch

She didnt like anyone touching her even girls

Maan hesitantly moved his hands forward Geet had left her shirt down so Maan slowly slid his hands inside

He made sure her jus what needed that was his fingers touch her

He slowly moved his fingers, her skin was so soft he was tempted to do so much but still he controlled thinking that he was being an idiot for thinking about his best friend like that

Slowly sliding his fingers he reached her bra belt

He took both the sides got them and hooked it

Geet was unknown to what feelings she aroused in Maan

In start she felt something but she shrugged it off thinking its just that some boy is touching her first time

Maan ever so slowly got his hands back down Making sure that this time his palms also got the feel of touch her skin he knew he was wrong taking advantage of the situation but what could he do if she was arousing feelings in him which he himself didn't knew

He was still hypnotized and Geet turned said thanx a lot gave him a friendly hug and went to the seminar

Maan stood there seeing her go he so wanted to take her in his arms n crush her in his chest and never let go

Maan's phone vibrated and that got him back. He shook himself

Maan self talk:Maan what are u thinking if Geet ever got to know that your thinking like this about her she will break her friendship with u nope you cant do this but whats this new feeling why i want her jus wit me today also when she was with her group and that boy was getting close to her why i was feeling jealous and angry just wanting kill that boy and hide her from other guys eyes whats happening to me

Maan shook his head trying to remove that thoughts and started walking to seminar room still trying to get those feelings and touch out of his mind and heart

Flashback ends
Maan came out of his thoughts when Geet again said that same line which she always said when she was in this situation why my hands are so small
Maan smiled n went near her he slowly took the belt and match the hook with its hole
Geet froze with his touch

She knew he was helping her but how dare he touch her

Geet instantly turned around and Maan who was busy in doing his work didn't see that cuming his finger remained where they were that's below the belt which made Geet come more near to him

Maan saw the anger in her eyes and he knew he did mistake by doing what he did

Geet with anger in her eyes

G:How dare you touch me Didnt i tell u never touch me

Maan felt bad seeing that anger and hearing those words

M:I was jus helping u he said voice slow and obvious with guilt of doing the thing what she didnt like him doing

G:Oh helping me right the same way you were helping that chick Pari in her bed right

Maan stood frozen with guilt and pain she still made him feel as if all things happened just yesterday but it was more than a year to that thing to that mistake of his to that one thing which changed his life

G:I had asked for time and the time was for 1 yr im staying with you because i promised Dadi to never leave his grandson or i wouldnt have seen your face after what you have done and we did have made some points before staying together and the main was you will never touch me against my will

How could you touch me with the hands you touched that girl she pushed him making him tremble on his feet he was shock She didn't spoke to him and if she did it would just have been single words like yes or no or sometimes nod this was going on for months he just forget that she would react like this way

She pushed him bringing both the hands on his chest he trembled backwards his fingers which were below the belt with impact came infront in the sides under her bra he removed his hands before things went out of hand

Geet shivered with his touch he still have the same effect that on her that he had in past she hated him for that she hated herself for that still ignoring she continued her shouting

How could you just get out of here just leave me Maan before i do something idiotic with u LEAVE NOW she shouted with tears rolling down her face

Maan walked back without a word feeling the pain and guilt all came back after the long time

It was actually long they never spoke and he never did what she didn't wanted him to do

Now after so long the same outburst the little hope which he was getting for some time he finds that missing after what happened now

He was dying already for what he did he got what he deserved for his mistake he got the biggest punishment that he lost his child

He lost his baby before it would come in the world

He lost that happiness of being father he lost the love he would have got after the baby would have born he lost the only thing that would call him dad who would play with him put small fingers in his mouth who would laugh when his stubble would touch their face he lost it just because of his one mistake he lost it

He broke down in his room crying like a child

He have no one to give him support all loathed seeing him

The owner of multi millionaire company had no one with his one order he would have gotten thousand of things but he couldnt get one that was love he is dying for the love he dieing to be the same old Maan Singh Khurana who had friends, relatives and most important wife who loved him a lot

He lost all things

Its so true when you have things you dont value them n take them for granted but the moment u loose it you get the importance of that thing in life

Same thing happened with me i didnt valued the love i had and took that for granted and here I am all alone with no one not even my shadow with me

Here is part 3

I dnt wat it is

Hop ull lik it

Gallis n all criticism is more than welcome

Plz reply truthfully

Plz its sincere request

Edited by -afsha- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
awww so Maan cheated on Geet n that's the reason she moved away from him...poor geet...
maan will surely will have to make a lot efforts in order to get Geet back in his life...
wanna see what's gonna happen next ...
update soon...
Edited by namita25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
loved the update...
well maan cheating on geet thats something i always hate to read but yeah many ff writers write it...but slowly they make things better...
so i am hoping the same from u...
well u know though ardent fan of maan i still think he did something which hurt geet...
so he deserves this pain...
she always gives back everything to him with her extra love in it...
so the pain he gave she has to give it back to him...
but pl not the same way he did like cheating her...
that wud tarnish geet's character...
something like her getting friendlier with other ppl more than him and giving them the importance when he shud b the one...that wud kill him thousand times...
well ppl r always like that...when they hv everything with them they just dont mind it at all...when they lose it then they get to know how precious it is...
some more pain and then i wud prefer to start with the damage control and him winning her back...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
maan will have to truly work hard
awesome update
very well written

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