MG FF Jaisi karni waisi bharni Pt 6,7,8 Pg 26 12/6 - Page 18

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmake11

beautiful song

i hope they sort out soon
uff pari she better not add
some salt so it can turn worse
than before
lovely part
love it
waiting next part
thanks 4 pm

I was tensed whether ull will lik it or nt
Thanx for liking it
Pari
Pari was jus herself Maan's carelessness caused the MU
Hop he solve it soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: namita25

amazing update...

loved reading it...
thanks for the PM...

Thanx a lot
Ur Welcome
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Posted: 14 years ago

Note

Hi guys I knw im late agn
So instead of one im giving ull three updates
Hop no one will be angry on me now
Sorry
N check previous pages i replied to all ur comments
Hop ull like the updates
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 5 pg 22

Part 6

Maan saw the change in Geet the moment she heard Pari's voice

I closed my eyes thinking my one silly mistake caused me this much

Geet's face was blank as if she her body was there but her mind was somewhere else

Which was right She was in the past thinking about the party

Mr Mishra was telling her something but she wasn't replying

Mr Mishra had asked them to join other couples on the dance floor

Geet being in her own world didn't replied and Maan knew until someone shakes her she wont be out of that moment

He slowly takes her hand and she jerks out of her thoughts and sees her hand in Maan's

She looks up as if questioning through eyes and Maan slowly from his eyes shows her Mr Mishra

She gets what the thing is and nods her head her in yes

After so long also they had that same understanding which they had in past

Maan takes her to the dance floor

The song going on was said and romantic both at the same time

kuch iss tarah teri palken meri palkoon say mila day

Aansoo tere saray meri palkon pay saja day

Mujh ko to tere chehray par ye ghum nahi jachta

Jaiz nahi lagta mujhe ghum se tera rishta

sunn meri guzarish issay chehray say hata day

They were moving slowly on the song

Geet was avoiding looking at Maan whereas Maan was just looking at her as if saying her that he truly meant what the song lyrics were

Geet could feel Maan's stare on her so she turned to see him and got lost in the love that his eyes were showing her

Maan looking in her eyes saw there were questions still there

He slowly from the waist bought her more close and said

M:That day what you saw between me and Pari wasnt what you were thinking

I think about her as my small sister and she knows that

She was drunken and wasn't be able to walk so I helped her and I was just making her lie down on the bed nothing else

I never knew you would have created crack in our relation or I would have cleared whole thing to you then and there

Geet was in awe She knew she was wrong when she didn't confronted him but she acted after seeing all the things

Both still moved slowly to the song

Kuch iss tarhaan teri palken

Meri Palkoon say mila day

Aansoo tere saray

Meri palkoon pay saja day

Tu har ghari, har waqt mere saath raha hai

haan yeh jism kabhi door kabhi paas raha hai

jo bhi ghum hain ye tere unhe tu mera bata de

Maan slowly kissed her hand meaning to say the same thing

Kuch iss tarhaan teri palken

Meri Palkoon say mila day

Aansoo tere saray

Meri palkoon pay saja day

Kuch iss tarhaan teri palken

Meri Palkoon say mila day

The song came to an end but still they were in the same posture

Pari came to them

P:Hello Dreamy she said joining both here hands in clap and similing widely

Maan saw that Geet wasn't trusting his words yet there was still some doubt in those eyes and with Pari coming there Maan knew she wil just walk away without listening anything further

Maan and Geet moved back

N Geet stared at Pari than Maan

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Part 7

Geet tried to walk out but Maan held her hand

Geet stared at the hand than Maan

Maan avoided looking at Geet spoke to Pari

M:Hello Pari and congrats for the marriage sai Maan similing at her

Geet went rigid at the news n Maan felt it He gently tightened his hold on her hand

She was gawking at Pari with wide open eyes

She couldn't trust her ears

Pari who was busy looking at Maan didn't saw Geet's expression

P:Thanx Dreamy and yup I wanted to Thank you for that night also

You helped as I was full drunken and asked my dad to cum n pick me up later

After that Dad got angry on me and asked me to Marry whomever I want

My choice was you but you were already taken away and was madly in love with Geet she said pointing at Geet and similing

Geet tried to smile which she felt was harder than anything right now in the world

Pari again went on talking to Maan

P:Toh I asked my dad to choose and he choosed Brij for me and Im very happy

Brij meet my MR Dreamy she said turning to teh guy who was standing nest to her and obeserving everything

Brij shook hands with Maan and said

B:Im hell jealous of you she is my wife still she goes gaga about ypu infront of me and laughed

Maan smiled at Brij and liked his easy going nature

Brij was called by someone he turned asked for a minute

Turning to Pari he said

B:Challe we have to meet others

Pari smiled and than she moved ahead and hugged Maan

P:Thanx a lot for being there for me and helping me she said with tears in her eyes

Geet was shocked to see their relation

She was just a spectator for so long though Maan was seeing her every reaction

Pari than moved to Geet and hugged her tightly

P:Sorry for always flirting with your husband but what can I do he is my Mr Dreamy and will always be

Ur lucky that he loves you a lot warna no one has rejected Pari Gupta but he did because he loved you and made me his small sis which i didnt liked but i would never say no to my dreamy so accepted it

I wanted to be his lover but i got to be his sis n i love it
Because anyhow he is loving me and im happy wit that
I wil always be thankfull to him for being with me and even helping me choose the perfect husband for myself

She said softly still hugging Geet

Geet jus put one hand on her back and nodded her head as if agreeing

Pari pulled with tears in her eyes and smiled

Brij put a hand on his wife's waist as he saw her get emotional

He nodded his head as if asking permission from them and left side hugging his wife tightly to give her his support

Pari leaned in him taking his comfort

She had got best husband who knew everything of about her and accepted her with the same way and thanx to Maan who had helped her in choosing

She will be grateful to him all his life

As Pari and Brij walked away Maan turned to see Geet

Who was staring at the way Pari and her husband went

Maan slowly slid his hand on her waist as they strted walking in towards the food counter

He gave her time

As he knew her mind was processing all the things that jus happened few minutes ago

He knew when she wil get all things clear she will some where open up a lil to him

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Part 8

They left the party within half an hour later from meeting Pari

He had taken her to the food counter to have food but she denied and walked away from there

Maan left her but kept his eyes on her

She met some few people who came in her way as she was trying to go out

Maan moved to her lil later an asked them to excuse them

With his hand on her waist he guided her to the door of the party hall

They left the party but only after meeting Mr Mishra as they didn't wanted to be taken as rude by him

Maan was driving the car and Geet was in her own world

She was same from the time Pari had left

Geet was gng through her thoughts

She had reacted after seeing all the things but she was proven wrong

It wasn't her fall also as Maan never tried to clarify his relation with Pari

Geet many times had asked him indirectly about him and Pari but he never replied back and shrugged it off saying she was thinking a lot

Geet remembered the past where Maan had promised her that she could ask him anything and he would always reply her without making asking why

Flashback

Geet was avoiding Maan from few days

Maan tried to ask her but she always said nothing and walked away from there

They came to a trip from college

It was camp trip they were sitting around the fire and playing games

Geet was avoiding Maan hence she sat with her other friends while Maan purposely came and sat opposite of her as to try and find out what the problem is

The game was passing the passing

Maan who was busy seeing Geet didn't saw that bottle which they were passing was in his jands

Whole group cheered and asked him what he wanted to do

He didn't said anything but just kept staring at Geet who tried from all her will to avoid and not to look at him

Geet's friends had saw the change in her and palnned to cheer her up

They asked Maan to sing

Maan wasn't that good singer but he wasn't that bad also

Maan after thinking a lot choosed a song which would help him say to Geet what he wanted to

Tere gham mera gham ek jaise sanam

Tere gham mera gham ek jaise sanam

Hum dono ki ek kahani

Aaja lag ja gale di jani

Tere gham mere gham ek jaisa sanam

Tere gham mera gham ek jaise sanam

Tere gham mera gham ek jaise sanam

Hum dono ki ek kahani

Aaja lag ja gale di jan

Toote hua dil ki kashti ko tufan mein kinara mil jaye

Tu tham le mera haath agar dono ko sahara mil jaye

Dono ko sahara mil jaye

Tere gham mera gham ek jaise sanam

He sang the whole song looking at Geet saying her what she meant to him

Geet couldn't take that any more tears started to come out from her eyes and she ran away from there

All clapped for Maan after his wonderful performance

Maan smiled at them and ran in the way he saw Geet running

Geet stopped far from all crying her heart out

Maan came behind her and stood there

She knew he was there behind she turned and hugged him with all her strength

Her hands around his neck holding tight as if afraid that if she let go he will go away leaving her

Maan tried to soothe her by rubbing his palm on her back

He knew there was something wrong

She was hiding something for him but what

It was half an hour and still Geet was crying but she was lil calm now

Maan took his hands to her hands holding them trying to remove from his neck to ask what the problem is but Geet wasnt ready to leave

She nodded her head in no

M:Plz jaan look at me he said be so soft as if he was hadling a small child

Geet wasn't less that any child her moods swing her carving her habbits all were lik small child

That's why he use to call her his bacha or jaan

Geet slowly loosened her hold n slowly strted moving back

Maan held her shoulders than cupped her face

Wiping away the ters with his thumb he asked her

M:Geet can u tell me now what the problem is

Geet looked at him with her eyes still teary her lips in a pout

After seeing such a cute face Maan was in love with her all over again

He smiled seeing her face n asked her again

Thats it

This is part 8

Next update will continue frm this part
That is flashback
Phew i wrote so much today
Better i get long comments hehehe
Edited by -afsha- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update
Finally all the MU is cleared
Glad day pari is married & made geets anger reduce
Can't wait to see wat geets reaction is
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
super updates...1 misunderstanding is cleared...
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy jaan yayyy MU is finally cleared!! omggg itne saare parts?...wow u made me super freaking happy today!! aww pari was soo cutee in the update...you just nailed her character!...just like the show, she gave up Mr. dreamy for geet but in pari style😆 aww maan is sooo understanding!!...he is not even angry at geet...just silently tolerated eeverything she said and even now he is waiting for her...pati ho to aisa😍
and the flastback was soo adorablee...hayeee now only if msk could sing a song for me😉
i can't wait to see the maaneet confrontation coming up...i am sure its gonna be passionate☺️
but yes, do make maan torture geet a bit for not trusting him and jumping to conclusions straight away😉😆
loved the awesome updates!!
thanks for such a lovely treat!
love youu!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...

loved all d 3 pARTS .. ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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