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Posted: 13 years ago
is maan really in luv with sam??
i hope its not..
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Beautiful one...😛
please continue...
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this is awesome di,,,
thanks for pm
and plz cont soon
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awesome, beautiful update
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Lovely update.
It's very funny that she is a veternery doc.bechara maan shock pe shock lag raha hai use
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Posted: 13 years ago

...this 4 u...😛

just ur update...
really ...dear..😃.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi again,
I am sooo sorry for the very late reply, i just read all your updates. Your story made me watch ala modalaindi, I love that movie. Your story is more amazing. Keep on going.Plz update and i will reply this time and that too first. Can I call you akka.
-Mishti
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part 24


Scene changes

kidnapper n maan

So'...where did we stop? Maan'... geet n a tamil girl..

Hmmm..chal continue kar

My frnds got very angry..that I dint tell them about kavya...'then one day we went to Kurnool'...red cross society conducted a flood relief camp...'I went to cover the news for my channel...'

Scene changes

Maan was covering the whole scene...'suddenly his camera showed geet with few local children...'he again turned his camera to confirm it...'he was elated to see her'...nothing could expresses his inner desire at that point of time...'without sparing any moment'...he went to talk to her'...

Geet..!!! what a surprise??

But she completely ignored him'...she went to her small tent n he followed'...

She was packing few of her things

U r ignoring me? You don't seem to remember the friends who carry your shopping bags'...

U just don't talk to me'...did you even know how many times I mailed u? I even called u infinite times'...did u reply to anyone of it?

Saying so she stepped out

Maan dint know how to convince her'...he thought and got an idea

Satya was furious'...her eyes were red with anger'...none knew how to convince her'...suddenly one got a brilliant idea'...geet do you know what that idea was?

Geet turned to see him with furious eyes

Maan immediately started tickling her'...

Geet couldn't be angry anymore'...she started laughing'...

Hey..finally satya laughed'...

Finally they sit near the camp fire

How is dev?

Geet ignored that question

Will you atleast send me your wedding card?

She now looked at him with blank eyes...'maan again misread her eyes...'

Are you already married or what??

Geet smiled at her foolishness that maan would understand'

Dev and I broke up

Ohh..'i..'I am sorry

Maan wasn't unable to look into her eyes...'

Its ok

But how did it happen?

It's a long story'...it just dint work out'...that's it...

But no regrets...we are much happier in our separate ways...

Maan thought to lighten the mood

Don't worry geet...'fate decides everything...'he was just too lucky to escape'...

I wonder who is the next victim'..

Geet was amused'..she couldn't believe what she heard'...she was angry and happy at the same time..within a moment she started hitting maan

Stupid..'!!!

Enough geet'...zor se lag rahi hai'...

She again saw him with furious eyes and they both burst out together ...laughing...'

OMGG maan'..!!! Pata nahi kitne din ho gaye aise hasse hue'...

Tabhi'..do laugh more'...you look so cute while laughing'..

bas bas...i cant handle compliments from u...

hey..time kitna hua? tumse baaton mein time ka toh pata hi nahi chala...

whats the time?

10:30

geet made a puppy face...at that point of time she had nowhere to go...

maan wondered what happened

by the time i will reach city..it would be too late...

where are you staying now?

not yet decided

but i am...

maan said that with a huge smile on his face...actually one of his collegue had to stay at that place to cover more story...so he had an extra ticket left to hyderabad...

in about 3hrs...they finally reached his home...

he opened the house with his key and they both sneaked in...he showed her the room in which she would stay...[that dint had a washroom]...but geet thought it was simple and a cute one...

she was admiring the room when maan said

everything is okay..right? u must be tired...sleep happily

lets meet tomorrow morning

good night maan

next morning geet woke up lazily when she felt something on her fingers...she opened her eyes and saw a dog licking her fingers...

she was fond of dogs...she was glad seeing it...

hiii

she picked it up and asked...

who are you?

on its belt there was a slip of paper attached securely...

whats this?

it was a slip from maan...

good morning geet...i am going out...will be back in a while...stay in the room...if mom sees u...i will surely in trouble..

by the way...he is chocolate

she saw chocolate...

hiii chocolate

she started playing all sorts of games with chocolate...room turned out to be a complete mess...but none was in a mood to stop...

it was afternoon now...

geet's stomach started sending signals

maan...where r u?

chocolate...where is bathroom?

chocolate ran in the direction of it

whereas geet tried to be as noiseless as possible...

but maan's mom caught her...

what are you doing?

geet was petrified to see her...


thats it for now

this update is dedicated to my dearest friend n sis...silky...she is the one who reminds me of my ff's...n eagerly waits for them to read...she is the sole inspiration to me for whatever i am writing n whatever i will write...i hope i am making this worth her wait...

n recently added to that list is khushi...who just reminded me that i had loads to write...lol...



Originally posted by: smanchik

Hi again,

I am sooo sorry for the very late reply, i just read all your updates. Your story made me watch ala modalaindi, I love that movie. Your story is more amazing. Keep on going.Plz update and i will reply this time and that too first. Can I call you akka.
-Mishti


sure...😃


Originally posted by: mishti.muna

really awesome..
little bit confused...how dev come to know about calls?
so,plj recover the confusion...next part


if you remember...geet doesnt have a mobile phone...most of the time she would try to call maan infront of dev itself...like she did in the scene...

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

ab yeh sam kaha se aagaya yaar..!

awesum ...agar geet ne dekh liya toh maan ka kher nahi..😆
i hope geet vl soon b bak..


dont worry...we will get rid of sam in the most unique way possible...



Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

actually it seems dev s so understanding..

he s trying to make her feel the difference b/w luv and friendship..


ya...he is very mature...there would one more time where geet herself will go n meet him...do wait for that...it was awesome scene in the movie...



Originally posted by: ritzy09

yaar inki love story kuch zayda hi complicated hai...awesome update...waiting for complications to get resolved soon


it will take time..but it would happen soon...



thank you so very much for reading this part...

i hope you all like it...

press like button

please dont forget to comment at the end...😊








Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, brilliant part
loved it
continue soon



Originally posted by: maneetlover1

I saw the mve alamodalindi.and i appreciate u for the attempt




Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...






Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

loved it!

continue soon!


Originally posted by: ananya95

awesome updt
lovely
so dev & geet broke up
poor maan was so sad
geet must realize her love
poor rano
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm


Originally posted by: piya-

Awesome update dear

love-Piya




Originally posted by: -Nilam-

Beautiful one...😛
please continue...


Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

is maan really in luv with sam??
i hope its not..


Originally posted by: ananya95

awesome updt
just luvd it
awww geet is so confused abt her feeling
omg she asked her dad to divorce her mom how naive can she be?
luvd how her dad made her understand
omg is maan really in luv wid sam or just convincing himself lyk geet
luvd maan yash sam convo lolzzz
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm


Originally posted by: vibhashekhar

Awesome update dear... Loved the discussion between geet and mohinder





Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...



Originally posted by: -knirwal-

nice conceptdi ...me will read it






Originally posted by: piya-

Amazing update Sai dear

really enjoyed reading
sorry like button not working ... will try to press later on
love-Piya


Originally posted by: -Nilam-

Nice update...
but little confused ...suddenly new girl Sam😲😕
waiting for your next update...



Originally posted by: maneetlover1

Awesme... superb...thanx for pm


Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, beautiful part
loved it



Originally posted by: spvd

part 22
WHAT?
Maan is dating Sam?
nice part...
cont soon...




Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...


thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...


Originally posted by: zaara2212

buddhu geet you love maan 😲


Originally posted by: sweetysaran

nice one ... i liked it...




Originally posted by: -Nilam-

lovely update...
waiting for the next part...
please update soon...


Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update loved the flashback scene



Originally posted by: spvd

part 21
nice part...
so is Geet's marriage called off?
cont soon...


Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update



Originally posted by: nahtani88

Amazing Update
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM


Originally posted by: sarkh26

awesome update

loved the song
pls cont soon



Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Thanks 4 da pm n lovely update!!!


Originally posted by: piya27

wow that was a laughable part


i was laughing all the while and after that also

continue soon


Originally posted by: seemamary

Lovely update, continue soon.


Originally posted by: -knirwal-

this is awesome di,,,

thanks for pm
and plz cont soon


Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, beautiful update
loved it
continue soon


Originally posted by: ritzy09

good one...loved Mohinder's talk


Originally posted by: nahtani88

nice update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm



Originally posted by: mishti.muna

really great..
cont soon...


Originally posted by: Minnie.

good on ya dude awesome post bless ya thanks for pm


Originally posted by: maneetlover1

Lovely update.
It's very funny that she is a veternery doc.bechara maan shock pe shock lag raha hai use


Originally posted by: spvd

part 23
nice part...
cont soon...



Originally posted by: mishti.muna

really funny...lovely...


Originally posted by: ananya95

awesome updt

just loved it

omg they r back to betting with their gang lolzzz

wat happened to geet

maan is dating sam but does he really luv her

cont soon'

thnx 4 d pm





Edited by millie_maaneet - 13 years ago

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