FF: Yehsa ye pyaar hai...Chapter 45-End.

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VRITIKA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Wndrful part dear.
awsm nd fantastic.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika

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Gals

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Nice Update.. Loved Abhiya.. Wats wit Karan..?? Carry on..
Thanx for d pm..lolz.

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MR.KooL

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

Awsum update and lets see how abhaya more forward together.

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mangona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

hey im new i luv all the chapters plz send me pm wen u next update plzplz

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568470

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

Chapter 15:

Karan moves forward to Piya and Abhay!....

Piya is sacred that What will Karan do? Abhay is holding Piya's hand to make her relax!

Piya(scared):Karan! Tum kya kah rahay ho! Mein Jhoot.......

Karan(screams):Haan! Tumay sab pata hain! Ziyada hosheer mat bano!

Piya looks at Abhay! Abhay is holding Piya's hand tightly!(soo romantic....) He is holding her hand so tightly that no one can even move her from Abhay!

Abhay:Kya kay rahay ho Karan?

Karan(evil smile):Wah! Abhay Tum....Tum Dono acting badi achi kar letay ho........Actor ban joho tum dono!

Piya and Abhay holding hands and staring at Karan....

Karan:Piya! Tumay Pechlay Janam Ka Kuch nahi pata? haan!!

Abhay gets to know that Karan know that Piya is aware of the reincarnation!

Abhay:Haan! Pata hain Piya ko!

Karan:Ho! I see!Is liye tum dono hath mein hath liye kay chal rehay thay!

Piya(gathered some courage):Haan! Kya kar lo gay!Mein aur Abhay Pyaar kar thay hain!Aur haan muje tumaray genonay sach kay baray mein pata hai!

Piya shows bravery! Abhay is happy to see Abhay being strong!

Karan:Bout Acha! Ab aur maza haye gah! Tum dono ko joda karnay mein!

Piya hugs a small hug to Abhay to show that no one can separate them!

Piya:Kabhi nahi! Hum hamesha aak hain!

Abhay and Piya hugs infront of Karan!

Karan:Wah!

Karan claps with a evil smiles!

Karan:Bout maza haye ga!

Piya turns to Karan!

Piya:Haan! Bout maza haye ga! Tumay hartay dektay hoye!

Abhay:Haan!

Abhiya stand infront of Karan!

Piya:You know Karan You are a LOSER!Get it!

Karan gets angry!and he moves his hand to hurt piya!

But Abhay stops him!

Karan:(Shouts)YOU BITCH PIYA!

Abhay gets angry and raise his hand to hit a punch to Karan!

Piya:Nahi! Abhay! Kotay bok thay hai!Humay un ki tara bok na nahi chahey warna hum mein aur un mein kay park ho ga!

Abhay takes Piya in his arm and moves to his bike!

Karan:Ab Tum dono bout pechtaho gaye!

Piya and Abhay sits on Bike and sped away infront on Karan leaving him burn with anger!

Precap: Karan is drinking bear in his house and is burning with anger ! remembering Piya's word!

How was it!

Edited by AbhiyaFan_Qusim - 14 years ago

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

nice update.

one suggestion: pls try to have dialogues more in English as reading Hindi in Roman script can be quite difficult since there are so many ways to spell a Hindi word using English alphabets.

Edited by dishu8 - 14 years ago