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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
congrats on new thread and thnxxx for this wonderful super long update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: LadyArwen

"she just removed maan's hand from her waist and runs from there. But maan take it wrongly" Maan did not understand her coyness and shyness that is why "he does not understand her"... why would she feel coy or shy because she loves him... its her innocence which makes her blush into a plush red and hide it from him as well... he doesn't seem to get it... secondly, "ridiculous" because however harsh be somebody's past love in his present heals the wounds of past and Maan could try become more gentle and reduce his anger so that he can think calmly... well guys i did not say anything to offend u or the characters... i love the characters myself (kind of addicted) but still sometimes i feel like that so i spoke up... well "PrithviSanyo1" and others please please please don't take anything to heart...


well thanks for point out ur confusion but maan didn't misunderstood her, he thinks may be he hurt her publicly by dance with her.
he feared about hurting her,he understand her innocence , here wrongly mean, he feared, scared about to hurt her, rejction,
he know how is geet and it's their first public dance as couple
where does he take it wrong like he misunderstood his geet's innocence
he understand geet's shyness, innocence so that he thinks may be in his love he took wrong step
read this part
After the Dance geet feel shied and embarrassed, she just removed maan's hand from her waist and runs from there. But maan take it wrongly and think may be in his love he took wrong step and went to bar and want to drink where some girls r try to flirting with him. Maan didn't pay any attention to them.

and then when geet goes near to maan , that time maan want to make geet confess but never want to hurt her.
before hurting geet, maan will prefer to die there.
maan's love or can I say depth of love will come in coming parts more.
Geet also know it and there tears not for maan's anger cause she can't see any girl near to maan.
till now they don't confess their love openly , they know they feel for each other, care for each other, respect each other but still, have to wait and after the confession many equation will change more.
maan never angry on geet but yes geet angry or can we say jealous to see those girls try to flirt with her hubby ,yes maan want to make geet jealous, cause he want to know geet's heart .
in maan's dream , also maan can never bethink to hurt his geet.
geet is life, his heart how will he hurt her ,

and for the maan's anger, temper, well some time past left a strong scars on human mind.
it's take long time.
maan lost everything in the name of so called marriage with sameera in his past.
sameera destroy his family ne by one
his parents, grand mother every one dead , sameera cheated maan now think hwo might be felt maan.
maan fight alone, accept anjali as his own . he is still fighting , sameera and like her others also want to create problem in his life.
he loves geet but he feared may be one day geet will leave her.
maan is very vulnerable condition now
he may be physically strong but emotionally very week.
he needs love in his life.


any way hope I clear the confusion


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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
awesome part luved it do continue soon ..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
congratulations for the new thread
awesome update ,
very cute maneet moments
geet's loves maan's car🤣
nice precap
thanx for the pm
continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
just awesome yaar aur precap tu waowwwwwww plzzzzzzzzz update soonnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
wow i loved it !!!geet drunk !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
Nice update
Continue soon x
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
Awesoooooooome........
Superb........
Fab.......
Loved the upd.
Thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79

hey dear


4 the new thread hope u have many many many many more

wat to say

a flying kiss right on your both the cheeks as a thank you

u made our wait just so worth it that we may never regret you made us so addicted you made us so much wait for it you made us go through so much pain u made us angry happy sad emotional with each and every part of yours
today i dont wanna talk about the part that how much i liked it or how much i loved it i just wanna say how much i liked the way u wrote how much i loved the way you made me feel today their love their care as all that was happening infront of me i so much wanted to feel watever was going thru them u wrote it perfectly portraying every emotion just so perfectly a husbands concern a wife worries a husbands care a wifes insecurities a husbands jealousy a wifes determination a husbands passion a wifes love

the way maan showed his concern to know what was sais to his wife with what her wife was accused he was so eager to know that even to know the truth he had to show anger to his life didn't mattered all he wanted to know was how dare anyone say her and she was trying her best not to pour out her heart out on him which she wanted so desperately but still didn't wanted to make him upset with her problems their cute fights simply resemble their pure cute innocent love both unaware about each others feeling completely but still never fail to make other proud of their relationship which happened to be unconditionally the jealousy which make them more vulnerable 4 each other the demand in each other rises more and more the right they have on each other getting stronger as time is passing the hold they get on each other is just highly commendable but i so want them to confess soon now as it seems difficult now to wait further for their confession geets humor was awesome at the end instead of confessing her love for him she was doing that by saying its his car that was quite hilarious infact the whole part was sumwhere with the emotions deep within

i loved their closeness scene the way they lose each other i just that i cant explain but wanted to tell you how much i liked so gt a light on it but cant explain

all what we needed all what we demand till now u gave us and still not failing to give us what we want so desperately that too with such a beautiful part that too written so beautifully
how to tell how to explain how to show how to know how to exclaim how to proclaim that how much i loved the part
i wish if there could be a love button instead of like button to be hitted i would have hitted that love button 1000z of times just to tell you that how much i loved your part

u made us wait so much u tempted us so much but at last I would say all it was worth the wait the temptation every bit of which u were making us crazy u made our day and night with ur update and that too this long what more we can ask for but still we are the greedy 1 and want you to update the next part soon

as the precap making me more eager to read it just now but as we are helpless and all depends on you
so thank you so much sweet heart 4 giving us such an beautiful part i really loved it

keep writing as its only you who can give us such a long update nd non of others

god bless you

thnx 4 the pm

nd here is the poem 4 u 4 ur next part 4 their longing

LONGING

Tell me what I'd have to change. Who would I have to be
To slip into your arms; for you to make sweet love to me.
Must I climb the highest cliff; swim along the ocean floor
Crawl over broken glass - would you demand that I do more?
Could you take me as I am, with my issues and my flaws
Pull me to your chest without a hesitation or a pause?
Slide your hungry tongue between my parted lips.
Run your anxious fingers along my quivering hips.
Wrap me in your passion, expose your every need.
Press your steamy lips to mine, every secret freed.
Sprinkle your tears across my cheek, confess every desire
Moan my name, call me yours, and set my soul on fire.
Need me more with every breath that slips into your chest,
Please me nightly, miss me daily, never compare me with the rest.
Grip my wrists; look in my eyes, and say the words I long to hear
Kiss me roughly, and weep my name, forever hold me dear.
Do I ask for wishes that could never quite come true?
Is my sin, my greatest fault, that I can't stop loving you?

Edited by muskaan_cute19 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
awesome update continue soon diii!!!

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