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Another FF - yipeee!! :) Grt start!

OMGGEEE i had goosebumps asi was reading this...!! my god that was sooo awesome mann..!!

fantabulous as always !! please update soon x

Liz that was simply AWSOME.....after sooooo long i'm reading somethin on maaneet that took me to the early months of the show....but trust me yr writing is way better.......off to read the rest of yr updtes....This is fantastic....can u post a part every hr........😆

OMG Liz!!! AN OS!!! UFFFFFF I LOVED IT!! aaaaa.. wait, I have to breathe before I continue commenting.

LIZ!!! This is such a freakin' fun and amazing OS!! I loved the entire depiction of the wedding hall, the celebration at the beginning, AA + Geet dancing, the opening where you mention what the grown ups to the kids are doing, er... LUCKY 😆 Pinky + the rest of the guests mega-interest in Maan - hayyyyyyyyye! it's all just So PICTURE Perfect. And then... Maan's gaze on Geet, her being very aware of being watched, the mini hide and seek game, being trapped by Maan... OH LIZ!!! As soon as you stopped the part, I actually grew as much impatient to RE-Read it than I did for another part. UFFFFF... HOW do I explain to you just how fabulously you write - and just how much I love everything that you have going on! I swear my brain cells are flying around in random directions at the moment cos I'm feeling overly dazed and just am blown over with this this OS. Both parts aaaaaare addictively, outrageously FANNNNTASTIC!
Oh I canttttttt wait for you to continue!!

Random note: I L-l-l-l-lovvvve "Sadi Gali" so it was a lot fun to see that included 😆

LIZ!!! You're freakin' brilliant..!!! LOVING this!!

i'm really enjoying the OS. can't wait to read more. update soon.

great update

OHHHHHHHH!!!!!! OMG OMG!!!!

Pls dun leave us hanging like that!!!!!I can't breathe!!!!!!!!😳

Awesome Yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pls continue!!!!!

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ooohhh wow that was an amazing part.......

mind blowing & awesome one yaar
loved dis os very much
waiting eagerly for d nxt part
cont soon