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Pyaar main dance.


Chapter 16



Geet and Pinky was still getting ready and out side Maan and Adi was going crazy bcs they have been wating for them one whole hour.



M:- Pinks Geet are you ready yet pl i am tired of wating.



A:- Maan why do you always call Pinky Pinks?



M:- Why are you getting jealous?, Maan said and gave him a big smirk.



A:- N..nn..oo not at all.



Maan gave him a big grin but the grin faded away when he saw them. He was so tired of them bcs of them Geet hadnt time for him. And Adi was near to punch them. Maan thinked abt yesterday



Flashback:


Geet and Pinky jumped down the sofa and ran to them. There on the entrens stood Vicky, Yash and Dev. If tht was not enough Rajiji was also there.



Dev, Yash and Vicky was Maans brothers. All the three was triplets Geet and Pinky had always been good friends with with Yash and Dev bcs of they always played pranks on Maan and Adi. Three of them was styding out side india bcs every one was tired of there pranks so they send them away. Vicky loved to play pranks, but he had his limit. He was not like Dev and Yash just need somthing little to irettate Maan and Adi.


Rajiji was Geets sister, she also lived in HP but when her parents died the family missbehaved very much wih her, so Mohinder bringed her with him. But still Geet didnt know anything abt HP bcs everyone had promised tht she will not know anything abt them. Everyone in Handa and Khuranna family knew what intions Handa famaily in HP was. They wanted money. And they could go any limt over to get money. And they had already diceded on Geets 18 birthday they will get her married and sign papers so they cant take over the Handa impire.




Pinky and Geet was so happy to see them and ran to them. Yash and Dev opend there arms to take them there. But both past them and ran and huged Rajiji.


On other hand Yash and Devs mouth was open. And Maan and Adi couldent hold there laungh and laungh at them. They came to them.


D:- Hahaha, very funny bro and Adi bro, pl you can laungh more if you want.


And thts what they did.


Then Pinky and Geet to them and Hugged them and both of them (Dev and Yash) gave Maan and Adi a evil smrik. Then Vicky and Rajiji came and hugged Maan and Adi. Adi and Maan has always treaten Rajiji as there little sis, same with Yash and Dev, not Vicky bcs he secratly loves Rajiji. No one knows bcs every time they meet each other they fight, Maan always takes Rajijis side and Geet takes Vickys side. Then they all four have a fight on tht.


Sometime later Nandni and Meera came also. Meera and Nandani was Geets cusin sister, which lived in Delhi but didnt meet each other so much bcs of they lived so long from them. And secratly Yash and Dev liked them.


Geet and Pinky was really excited for there birthday know, just tht they where missing there parents.



All got and sat on the couch and disscused things.



D:- Guys what theam are you guys having.


All four at the same time


MAPG:- Bollywood and Dance.



Y:- i think it better if you just have a dance theam.

D:- He is right. Bcs of if you going to have bollywood theam, then do you have too look like a actor or actress, then it will be hard fo you to dance.


G:- Maan i think he is right, what say guys.



M:- Yeah he is right.


Then they satred dicsuss what they ae going to whear. They disced to go to the mall and look for some clothes. They dicssed to take there privat bus ( yes guys they have there own privat bus bcs of how many they are when they are out on picnic.) they toke the little bus and went away.



Ok tht was todays update, i have toughts to end this ff bcs, i feel like no one likes this ff, i dont ethier get so many comments, i know tht i am a bad writer, if you dont like this ff pl tell me i will end it right away


Love Amina

Edited by Dansindiadans - 14 years ago
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Sorry guys for a late update, i was little busy at home then i was not feeling well either, but i am back with a new update.

And one more thing, IN my FF will Vicky be Salman from Dance India Dance,


and Rajji is not the same which was in the drama, in FF will Khusbooo from Dance India Dance



Pyaar main dance



Chapter 17


They came home from the shopping and all of them sat in the living room.



D:- Girls pl show us what you brought.


All the boys agreed, but the girls didnt want to show, bcs the wanted it to be a suprise.


So all of them went in to Geets room.



And the boys sat still on the chouch and was sulking.

After sometime they all was sitting and eating there dinner. Maan and Adi was glareing on Dev and Yash, bcs of Geet and Pinky was sitting besides them and Feding them. Pinky and Geet always fed both of them, so it was a rutine for them. Maan and Adis rutine was giving a galre at them. Adi and Maan didnt hate them, but the problem was Geet and Pinky gave them to much of atention more then they gave them two. After dinner Yash and Dev was teasing the abt Pinky and Geet. After some time Adi and Maan said



AM:- Yash, Dev


DY:- Yes, bro.


M:- Run.


Then both of them run bcs then Knew tht was going to "hit" them if they didnt ran.


End of flash back.



M:- Pinky are you ready bcs i need to talk to you, Nandani, Meera and Rajji



P:- NO we are not read, Maan do ont thing call us on the phone we will talk to there.


M:- OK. Come lets go we need to talk to Dev, Yash and Vicky too.


They got in there room, and they three boys was still getting ready.


M:- Guys i need to talk to you, then he called up the four girls too and said


M:- Anything can happen today, they can kidnapp Geet today so pl be with her today.


Everyone said


:- OK.


They boys went down to the party.


On the party was all friends of Maan, Geet, Adi and Pinky.


Maan had black suit with a blue shirt, Adi had also a balck suit with a purple shirt, the triplets had aslo a black suit on but diffrent colors of shirts, Dev worn a Red shirt, Vicky worn a white shirt, and Yash worn a balck shirt.



Some time later Sameera walked she had a white simple dress on her.

Every boys mouth fell open when they saw her. She just smirked and walked up to Maan and Adi, and Gave them there b'day persent.



S:- Happy birthday, well where is th girls which you was so proud of. PL dont say tht they didnt have any good clothes to wear on the party. And gave them a smirk.


Then everyone looked at the stairs. And then again all boys and this time girls mouth fell open when they saw, Geet, Pinky, Nandani, Rajji,Meera and Nandi walking down.


Geet worn a sexy short blue dress,

Pinky also a short ans sexys dress but puprle,

Meera worn a sexy short very very drak puprle dress,


Nandani a sexy short red and Pink dress

and Rajji also a short sexys dress.

The biggets thing with all this dresses was starp less and short and sexy


The five boys mouth was haning open, they got to the five girls and asked


ADMYV: What are you girls wearing?


G: A dress, what eles?


M:- Couldnt you find any longer dress and which didnt show so much>?


All the other boys agreed with them.



G:- You guys are really over proctive. And they all went of.



Geet got up to Sameera which right now was fuming in anger.


G:- Hi sameera, oh is tht for me and Pinky, ohh tht was so kind of you. And i hope you are injoying the party. Geet toke the persents from her and walked away. with a smirk on the face.


So tht was todays part, if you give me longer comments and more then i will do the parts longer, i know tht i am evil😈, but kiya karo hak banta hai😉, one more thing my PM list is up side down, tohes how wants PM, say it in your comment, then i will add you, hope its ok wit everyone



Amina




Edited by Dansindiadans - 14 years ago

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