pyaar pyaar aur sirf pyaar LAST PART AT 71 - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago
this is so awesome
loved it
and yes...
koi baat nahi yaar
u enjoy with ur daadi
update kuch dino baad de dena😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update short though but it's okay. love it though

koi baat nahin have fun with ur dadi and get back asap u can😉

can u pls pm me when u update next
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow dear...thanx for updating...Though it was short,I loved Geet's teasings..hehe...ok dont worry...Have a good time with Dadi..
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Posted: 14 years ago
really awesome update iread in one Go superbb :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
plxxx add me to the pm list luvd d story...
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Posted: 14 years ago


Hi, i am back with a new update.


Pyaar main dance.


Chapter 15.



One week later


it was the day before there b'day and everyone was busy with the peretions.



On one side Pinky and Adi was helping each other.

And on the other side Maan and Geet was to distroy for each other,


the fight they had back one week before was not over yet and Pinky and Adi was so tired of there never ending fight tht they stared ignore them and there fight.


Adi and Pinky had stayed back at KM, just for Maan and Geet, bcs they where afraid tht both will kill each other if they leave them alone. Both of them regret tht both stayed at the KM. Bcs they where tired of there fight.



It was lunch time and everyone was stting and eating there lunch, and chatting. Maan and Geet ignore each other and talked to Adi and Pinky. Then the phone rang and Adi got the phone and past it to Maan and Geet and said tht it was to both.


On the phone was it Daadi, Rano and Mohinder. Adi telled them abt there never ending fight and he and pinky tried to pach them. But all there efort got in wain so he called them up and sad the whole truth. Maan put on the load speaker.



D:-Maan and Geet. What is this what i hear, you are fighting again. For a silly joke. I had thinked tht you both where grownups. But it dosent look like tht. Pl end your fight now. Adi has said the whole truth to me.


Maan and Geet give Adi i-will-kill-you look. And Adi smiled and had it hard swallow hes lunch.


D:- both of you stop giving him threaten looks. And if you dont end this fight then i am sorry to say tht i have to send one of you away from each other.


Daadi known this would work, how much they fight the cant leave without each other. And daadi was right.

MG':- NOOO! Said at the same time.



M:- Daadi ma, we promies we will not fight, Geet i am sorry lets not fight.



G:- Yeah daadi ma we will not fight, i am sorry too. And i forgive you too.



D:- Good. Then bye.



MGAP:- Bye daadima. All the four said it togthere.



M:- daadi are you coming tomorrow on our birthday?



D:- Sorry Maan we cant come tomorrow. You know why.



MAP:- yes we know why, the three said at the same time.


And geet was looking at them with qustion eyes. All the three known tht Daadi, Mohinder and Rano was not on a business trip.



After the phone call, Geet asked



G:- what are you guys talikng abt Daadi?



M:- Geet nothing. We where taliking abt the business trip how importent it is.



G:- OK. She said an stared eating again.


All the three sight in realif.


After the lucnch was over all of them started working again this thime Maan and Geet was helping each other.


A:- Pinky i thinked tht phone call helped. He said too pinky.


P:- Yeah youare right, looked at Maaneet how was laungh each other and helping each other. She sight and looked at Adi how had stared working again and thinked what a unromantic person. Then stared working again.


After sometime they three sat in the sofa in the living room thoghter. Then Maan asked the three which movie star they will look like. All them said


APGM: sh**


G:- We havent buyed our costums yet, and the party is tomorrow. Thanks Maan for asking.




M: you are welcome he said little proud at himself.and smilling like an idiot



G:- Lets go to the mall.



P:- Good idea.



The stared go up from there sits.



A:- Guys, i thnked it better if we dicuss how we will look like and which couple too.



M:- Adi good idea. Girls sit and lets think abt tht first.



Pinky and Geet sat again and stared dicssting abt how they will look like. They dicssied tht the fours cracters will be fom the same movie. And they toke the movie K3G Maan and Geet will look like Shah Rukh Khan and Kajol. Adi and Pinky will look like Hirthik Roshan and Kareena kapoor.


The they heard some say


Two persons: And we? All looked at the door.


Maan and Adi was shocked and thinked noo not them.


But Geet and Pinky got excited and smiled like crazy.



how was it?, hope long enogh.


PL Give me little longer comments bcs i am running out of ideas



Love Amina

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome , beautiful part.
loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ok...enjoyed this one...but who was at the door..why was maan and adi shocked??I think u'll clear that in the next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
it's awesome yaar
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update. pls continue and update soon😆

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