Meaning of Missing Someone -AR FF - pts9-11-pg29

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#51

Originally posted by: Diyan
hey dear.....i loved it very much
i loved the concept you used
the babyish language was sooo cute
pls add me to your om list as well
update soon...

thanks! i wanted everyone to get a feel of what riya is like :D

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#52

Originally posted by: MaitreeluvKajen
A New FF !
WOW This is Really Very Interesting...Armaan is a Single Father ! WOW...And After seeing Riddhima he is dreaming of her?? EEEE This is SO SO SO WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWW!! I Love This FF Already Ashu<33 Loved the way Riddhima encouraged Sanju,and then the way she cuddled and Loved Riya<33 Armaan is ALREADY in love with her!! YAYYYYYY OKay LOL Cont soon and Add me in your PM list ! Muah Ashu Baby LOOOVVEE YOU<333

Love,

Maitree

hehehe thanks!

par armaan is only attracted towards ridz at this point, he isnt in love with her yet! i'll clear that up in upcoming parts! his past and such is yet to come so...

and riddhima-riya's relation is really important...

i dont want to give anything away yet though hehe

par i'm in two minds of how to take this ff...like stretch it longer and make it a long running one or make it fast like my others? as in i could go both ways...

if i go longer then everyone can get more of a slow feel and understanding and more suspense, but if i go fast then well it'll be like the others...

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#53

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
HEY ASHU....A New ff.....wow yaar....Love the concept...so cute and beautiful.....Riya is such an Ange..Love her bonding with Riddhima.....Do continue soon...thanks for the PM....nd do add me to ur PM list........take care.,....

Lots of Love
GEET

thanks geet! and added!

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#54

Originally posted by: gupta.aditi20
aww.....
itz so cute..........
i totally luved it......
ri n rima superbly cute.....
n short it waz a total cutee part...........
n pls add me to ur pm list waise u already sent me a pm bt i waz nt on ur pm list so thought for asking for it........

thanks! and haan i randomly sent pms to ppl who might have commented on my other ffs...may have missed ppl, but i tried to go for regular commenters

but ur added now!

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#55

Originally posted by: akshad
amazing...

loved it...

i love riya more than AR....

CONTINUE SOON...

aww thanks! i love riya too!

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#56

Originally posted by: ashwini16
Aww riya is so cute...nice part plz add me in ur pm list n r u updating now?

thanks! i'll try!

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#57

Originally posted by: ARKJ_4EVER
hey awesome concept, great start n soooo cute moments !!!!!!!!!! awww love Riya.....love both parts....the songs r superb n their characters r just fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks 4 the pm
cont soon...
n hey add me in ur pm list please...........😊

thanks! hehe the songs i usually dont like those singers, but my little sister was listening to them and i was like ooh these aren't that bad! then i was like hmm they work for my new ff so hehehe

and added!

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#58

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat
that was really amazing.
n i just loved it..
riya is soooo sweet..
update soon...
thnx for the pm................

thanks anu! hmm u want to be on the pm list?

i just randomly sent the first set , but from now on i'll only pm ppl on the list, so i dont annoy anyone and its just easier...

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Part 3

Armaan was sitting in his study thinking about the past, when suddenly he hears crying coming from Riya's room. He gets up running his hair through his hair and goes over to his angel thinkin he'll give her the gifts he brought her.

He walks into Riya's room with a smile, but frowns seeing her crying.

He goes over to her and picks her up. "array array array meri baby ko kya hua?"

Riya sniffs still crying. "papa ri kyu no mama? ri sapna ri mama, amita talah" Armaan feels his eys welling up. "I'm sorry angel. I'm so sorry. Lekin tumhari paas apne papa haina? aur meri duniya tu hi re. i love you sooo much! enough for mumma and papa!"

(do watch the vid! only imagine armaan instead of three guys, and instead of asking for forgiveness to ladies, he is still singing to angel - as he feels he has cheated her of a mothers love)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PIBo88pCEqA[/YOUTUBE]

Just as Armaan is about to put Riya to sleep, she stops him saying, "no papa rima plomish fone" Armaan looked at her stunned. She had really taken that promise to heart? Riddhima probably wouldn't even call her! Riddhima has her own life. "riya beti mujhe nahin lagta ki..." Armaan was interrupted as Anaya walked in with the phone. "Sorry beta, woh riddhima ne phone kiya riya ke liye." Armaan looked at Anaya shocked as she handed riya the phone. So riddhima did keep her promise? Armaan found himself smiling as he saw how happy his little angel had become.

"Rima rima phil papa gaana! aul aul papa nacha bhi! oooooooo (she sang the ooo bit) phil phil riya choco iceam!" Riya proceeded to tell riddhima everything that she had done after riddhima had left. Armaan wanted to stop her as Riddhima must be getting annoyed as Rima had been talking nonstop for nearly 10 minutes! But then he heard her ask, "rima ka kiya?" Then he saw riya's face lighting up and going ohh and asking for clarification for some things. then she got excited and sad about something. "sopping mamma saath? ri no mamma...no sopping..."

Armaan watched a little tear trickle down her face. This was the limit. He was just about to pull the phone away when Riya's face brightened up. "Saach! rima ri sopping? plomish? ayyyy!" Riya started dancing as she became so happy. Riya and Riddhima then went on talking about all kinds of things, more then half of which armaan didn't understand due to Riya;s baby talk, but whatever it was Riddhima seemed to understand as they talked for nearly an hour.

"no rima peashh ri no nini...ri rima saath baat....okay finee ri nini lekin pakka plomish rima phone kal? okays i lub you too...no ri lub rima more...no ri lub rima more..."

Armaan laughed as the who loves who session lasted nearly ten minutes before, "no rima lub ri more! ...NO no fair rima tick ri! rima seating!"

Armaan laughed understanding that riddhima had tricked riya into saying that.

"okay night night rima..lub you mwuah" Armaan smiled as riya kissed riddhima through the phone. He watched her dimples deepen as he figured riddhima kissed her back. Riya then handed the phone to armaan and rested her head on the pillow.

Armaan took the phone and spoke into it, "hello"

rid - hello,

arm- hey sorry you had to talk to her for so long

rid - its no problem really, i enjoy talking to her. I just hope you dont mind i mean...

arm - no its okay, as long as my little angel is smiling i'm happy.

rid: okay toh is she sleeping yet?

armaan turns and looks at riya and is shocked

arm - haan! lekin how? i mean usually she wont sleep until i read her a story!

rid - oh sorry...woh i promised that the faster she sleeps, the faster i'll call in the morning. Um also I was hoping you wont mind if i take riya shopping with me on wednesday? actually its my day off and riya wanted to spend time together aur woh she really wanted to go shopping with some girls.Woh i accidently mentioned that i had done a bit of shopping with my mom and some girls as a girls day out, and she got upset. toh i promised to take her on wednesday. that is if its okay with you?

arm: hmm well it seems her little heart is already set on it so sure why not? i guess she could use some girl on girl time. The only girl in her life is my mom and well even mom is getting old and well dadi time is different from girly time i suppose.

Rid: that's great! Thank you soo much! waise i should get going. it's getting late and i have an early shift tomorrow..

arm: sure goodnight

rid: goodnight

Armaan looks at his angel one more time and kisses her forehead. He then tucks her in properly and heads over to his room to go to bed.

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so not much happened here, but u got a sense of how armaan's life revolves around riya and a bit of the riya-ridz bond...

Edited by ammy_ka_ashu - 14 years ago