i ll be there when u need me - sajan os

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Hello guys'''I m ambika and I m writing my first os(on sajan ofcourse) and this os is dedicated to my best friend nivriti(sajanrox)''.she is nt well these days''.hope u guys like my sincere attempt as I m nt at all gud at writing'..

@nivi-this os is specially fr u''..take care and get well soon'..hope u lyk it''just imagine urself to be gunjan while reading''luv u loads😊😳

Urs

Biks

I LL BE THERE WHEN U NEED ME'.

sajan os

It was a cold wintery night. The wind was blowing and snowflakes dotted the roads. Gunjan was happy'''.samrat had asked her out for a date'..tomorrow, she would be with samrat'what more did she want?????she tried to catch a snowflake on her finger'..her face was glowing with happiness'she saw some kids playing with snow''and the kid in her took over'she started playing with them''.

It was late by the time she reached home'she was shivering'.bui opened the door and glared at her'she bit her tongue saying sorry'..but bui was not impressed'she pulled her in'..

B-kya kar rahi thi bahar itni thand mein??

G-bui sorry na'bahar itna acha mausam tha ki main khud ko rok nahi paayi'she said cutely

B-ab masti ke chakkar mein thand lag gayi na'beemaar pad gayi to''..

G-soory bui aage se pakka nahi karungi aur main itni delicate thori na hoon ki itni asaani se bemaar pad jaaun'.she said shivering'.

B-ab dekha kaise kaamp rahi hai'..ruk mein tere liye chai laati hoon aur ab jaakar apne kapde badal le''.

Saying this bui left fr kitchen and gunjan left for her room''.she kept on thinking about todays incidents'how samrat asked her out'.she was sure that he was going to propose her tomorrow''..she was very happy and eagerly waiting for the next day'.the knock on the door brought her back to reality''it was the maid with the tea'..she took the cup and locked the door nad sat on the bed recalling todays event taking her to sajan dreamworld again''she drank the tea and laid in her bed putting the comforter over her''she now felt warm'.but her nose was twitching'she felt a sneeze coming..oh no'she could not afford to fall sick''tomorrow was the day she was looking forward too since so many days'..thinking about her samrat charming she slept peacefully'..

The next day she got up but she felt sick'very sick'her head was aching badly''and there were cold water strips on her head and bui was sitting beside her looking very concerned'..seeing her awake bui spoke up'

B-ab teri tabiyet kaisi hai beta'..

G-bui mera sar bahot dard kar raha hai'..

B-kuch nahi beta abhi bukhaar jaldi utar jaayega'.

Hearing the last bit her eyes widened'.she was shocked'..

G-bukhaar???bui mujhe bukhaar ho gaya ''

B-beta chinta mat kar abhi thori der mein chala jaayega'..tu aram kar'.main hun tere paas'

G-par bui aapko to apni friend ki beti ki shaadi mein bahar jaana tha na'.

B-haan par main tujhe akela chod kar to nahi jaa sakti na'.

G-bui main teekh hoon'ap jaaeye''

B-par

G-bui please na'main theek ho jaaungi'ap mujhpar bharosa karti haina'.

B-haan beta par'

G-par var kuch nahi'aap jayenge nahi to main aapse baat nahi karungi'..saying this she turned her face to the other side..

B-tu nahi manegi na'.theek hai..par muje promise kar ki aana khayal rakhegi..

G-pakka bui'pakka aa jaayo'.

After some time bui left instructing the maids to take care of her''

In the room gunjan was very disheartened'..she could not meet samrat today'..how can she she was not even able to get up '''she burried her head into the pillow and started to weep'.

Suddenly she heard the sound of the footsteps near her window'.she got up wiped her tears and moved towards thw window'..suddenly the person jumped in front of her scaring the hell out of her'she was about to scream when the person placed his hand on her mouth''

P-chashmish relax its me'koi bhoot nahi hai''

Yes the person was none other than samrat'..(obviously its understood'.window se to bas sam hi aa sakta hai.😆😉.)

G-samrat tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho'asked gunjan surprisingly'.

S-tumne yaad kia aur hum chale aaye'

Samrat said flirtingly'

G-tumhe kaise pata ki main tumhare baare mein soch rahi thi'.

S-chashmish telepathy'hamare dil ek dusre se connected hain'so jab tumne yaad kia to mere dil ko tumhare dil ka signal mila aur main yahaan aa gaya'

Gunjan looked at him lovingly'.

S-chashmish ab aise hi dekhti rahogi to mera saara surprise mere chocolate cake ke saath melt ho jaayega''

G-surprise?????chocolate cake?????yeh tum kya bol rahe ho samrat??????

Samrat brought his hand forward from his back and gave her the cake''.

Gunjan was surprised'

S-chasmish tum nahi aa saki to main aa gaya'ab hamari date continue karen'.

G-but samrat..

S-par var kuch nahi'mere liye toh wahi date hai jahaan tum mere saath ho'..

They shared a cute eyelock''samrat came in senses first'

S-chashmish mujhe koi problem nahi hai ki tum mujhe saara tym aise hi dekhti raho par mere pet mein chuhe bhaag rahe hain'.

They shared a cute laugh'

They then cut the cake together and fed each other'..

Then sam went on his knees and took out the box from his pocket and opened it'it was a beautiful yet elegant diamond ring'gunjan was mesmerized'.

S-chashmish will u be my wife..will u take care of me forever'will u be there whenever I need '.will u listen to my bak bak everyday''..will u marry me chasmish????????

Gunjans eyes were filled with tears''she forwarded her hands and then sam slipped the ring in her finger and they hugged''..they broke the hug nad then gunjan spoke..

G-thanx samrat this was the best date of my life'''

S-thank u chashmish for coming in my life and making it beautiful'.they again hugged'embraced each other tightly''..

That was the best day fr them'.best moments do not require best things and materials but it requires best persons'..

Thank u guys for reading it and tolerating my bakwaas os'''.bt still plz hit the lyk tab and plz give long comments..guys plz give ur wishes to nivi...

Nivi plz get well soon''love u loads'..😊

Urs biks

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GulaabiAakhein. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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RES! @ Ambi : Congoo On Your 1st OS!
*Edited*
Hey Ambi..🤗🤗
AWESOME OS dear! Considering It was your first OS it was really good!
i loved reading it! Well I thought it would be a sad ending but you made it a happy one!
I am Sure nivriti will love your sweet gesture!
*Get Well Sooon Nivriti*🤗
And now Coming to your OS.. My favourite line was :
best moments do not require best things and materials but it requires best persons'..
I completely Agree!!
And YAY I am First🥳
Samrat Is Such A Sweeeet Heart!
Love him yaar!
Do write More Os..
Love,
Manjari❤️
Edited by SajanRox11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congratulations on your first OS, Ambi.👍🏼 It is really very nice. SaJan are just soooooooooooo januable.....😳 Am sure Nivriti will love it. Get well soon, Nivriti.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sooooooooo sweet
lovely 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww😳🤗
beautiful OS ..just amazing😳
aur khabardaar isse bakwaas kaha tho😈
n congo for ur first os🥳
u wrote it really beautiful😳
i totally loved it❤️
do keep writing more specially os's😳
warna mein chodungi nahi😈
n thanx for the pm

Luv ya
deepu🤗
..Ambika.. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@manjari-i made that line accidently😆...kuch aur samajh nahi aa raha tha...i ll surely write more os and probably my next one will be dedicated to u , deepu and shreya😳............
@deepu-thnx u so much fr ur sweet comment...luvd it......😳
@all-thnx u guys alot....thnx fr ur wishes for nivi...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ambikamuskaan

@manjari-i made that line accidently😆...kuch aur samajh nahi aa raha tha...i ll surely write more os and probably my next one will be dedicated to u , deepu and shreya😳............

Ambii. Lol.. Now write OS's accidently only! You write them better! lol..
Really Cute & Adorable OS! Now you just gotta describe more and ull be PERFECT!😃
..Ambika.. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yaar meri os pe spamming band kar manjii..😆..we r nt chatting.....
GulaabiAakhein. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ambikamuskaan

yaar meri os pe spamming band kar manjii..😆..we r nt chatting.....

But This is talking abt ur OS not spamming! Spamming is when we dont talk abt ur OS! :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
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bt we r nt directly toking about the os.....yaar leave it cm on cc......waise acha hai mere pages badh rahe hain...nw nivi cn enjoy our chat too..😆

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