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Posted: 14 years ago

lovely update, wow four kids. maaneet arent easy 😆 thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 14 years ago
awww there are leaps and bounds...now waiting for FB's...4 kids...ummm have they heard of famiy planning...😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was such a nice update
totally loved
awesome leaps
cute family moments
and maan wanting another kid 😆
looking forward to the next part
loved the whole sweet family feeling
cont soon please
thanks for the pm!! :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
will update soon!!!!!!!!!!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys,

Sorry for the late delay!!

P.S. I tried making the delievery sequence original😆 so let me know 😳

Chapter 51

Geet was in the hospital screaming and yelling due to labor pain. Maan was right beside her holding her hand..it has been three hours and still no sign of the babies...

Geet: I can tell the first one is going to be a boy...(she was taking deep breaths)

Maan: How do you know?
Geet: Because he is ziddi just like you...I know it...he is going to be like you

Maan: What do you mean? You are ziddi too...you always put the blame on me

Geet: because I know I am right...(Maan leaves her hand and grabs a chair...) what are you doing?
Maan: I am sitting down...My feet hurt from standing up

Geet: I am here in pain and you are thinking about your own comfort? You are NOT sitting down...I am here delivering your kids and you don't care

Maan: how is it my fault that the kids are not coming out...

Geet: It is your fault...the last thing I needed was your duplicate running around the house (Doctor and the nurses were smiling hearing their talk)
Maan: Oh yeah it could be girl first...you are stubborn too...not only me...I can't even handle you i don't know how I am going to handle another Geet...
Geet: if you say one more word
Doc: Ok guys...its show time...looks like the first one is coming...
Maan (holds her hand): Remember I get to name the two kids...
Geet: that's not fair (she pushes)
Maan: I won the coin toss...so I get to name them...(Geet screams in pain as Maan looks at her helpless. Geet squezes Maan's hand really tight causing him pain in his hand.) Aaahhh Geet let go of my hand...it hurts
Geet: Shut up...(She yells at him while delivering)
Maan: Don't worry it will be over soon. (He looks at the doctor with anger) What is going on? Why isn't the baby coming out? Let me see
Geet: Maan NO! Don't go there...keep your eyes here toward me...(She tries to hold Maan's hand and push at the same time but Maan takes his hand away from hers and goes toward the doctor...his eyes widen in horror at what he sees and screams. He felt dizzy..he stumbles back to Geet and puts his head on her chest. While Geet caresses his head) I told you not to look...
Maan: Just hold me (he started caressing her belly slowly..)
Doc: Alright, one final push..I see the head...lets bring this baby home..You ready Geet? (Maan looked at the doctor with anger calling Geet by her first name. Who does he think of himself anyway? So what if he was young and all the nurses are looking at him in awe while he works.)
Geet: Do I have a choice?
Doc (laughed): No not really (he winks at her...Maan gave him a death glare. thank god no one noticed. Who the hell is he to wink at his wife. I have to change the doctor. I don't like this one. Maybe I should report him for flirting with his patience. If he does one more thing like that I will punch him right now. Maan goes to stand behind the doctor and immediatly faints when he sees baby coming out filled with blood. Hearing a thud, the doctor and the nurses looked down in shock at seeing Maan lie down unconcious. Geet, due to her pregnant belly, couldn't see anything. She was trying to sit up to see what all the commotion was about)
Geet: What happened? What was that noise?
Doc: That was the noise of your husband fainting. It always happens. Its fine it is normal.
Geet (lies back down) Great now I have to worry about Maan while delievering kids. He never listens to me.
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Both Maan and Geet laugh as they remember the flashback.
Geet: Everytime you faint...
Maan: But I just wanted to make sure you are ok. It hurts to see you scream in pain.
Geet (hugs him) I love you..but I am serious when I am telling you...No more kids...
Maan: Fine...(he was about to kiss her when they heard Sargam screaming...he sighs) She is exactly like you...
Geet: So what after all she is my daughter..Now come downstairs. I have to prepare the breakfast. (She gives him a quick kiss and both made their way downstairs when Asha in Geets arm. When they both went downstairs they saw MJ and Armaan chasing Sargam around the breakfast table...)
Maan: What is going on? (He speaks to them angirly which causes the kids to stop in their tracks)
Armaan: Dad she is not giving back our game
Sargam: I don't even have it. See it is on the table right there. (all look toward where she was pointing at.) Both were chasing me with a bug that is why I was screaming. (she looks at them with big "innocent" eyes)
Geet: Sargam don't even try that look. You know it is not going to work.
Maan: Yeah cuz it doesn't work for your mother either (Geet looks at him with anger. He takes Asha from her hands and places her on her highchair at the table. He signals the kids to sit on the dinning table..Geet goes inside the kitchen to prepare the breakfast. After few minutes as Geet was coming out she heard Sargam talking about her trip)
Sargam: Dad do you know I have a field trip today. We are going to the zoo today. You know what animals I want to see? I want to see monkeys, lions, hipotomas, umm girraff (MJ and Armaan looked at each other and rolled eyes...Maan just nodes his head every one in a while)
Geet: Alright, Sargam quiet down now. Lets eat (Geet gave pancake piece to Asha on her plate who started laughing and eating whatever she could grab in her tiny hands..Armaan and MJ started making funny faces at her to make her laugh more...)
Maan: Geet you should've named Asha Muskan..she laughs and smiles all the time...(just then someone threw piece of food at him. Everyone on the table started laughing. Maan looked at Asha who frowned at him)
Geet: Why do you mess with her? There is no winning with my kid...isn't that right Asha...(She tickles her until she laughs)
Sargam: dad you have to sign my permission form for the trip.
Maan: hmm ok i will after breakfast
Geet: Sargam quiet down and eat first or else you won't be able to go. (MJ and Armaan laughs at her) you two both of you (All the kids quiet down and eat their breakfast quietly. Maan looks around and smiles. He holds Geet's hand under the table shocking Geet. She looks at him pleading to let go of her hand but Maan just pretends to eat.)
Maan: Ok kids how about today after school we go to the beach? (All kids scream with happiness while Asha bangs on her kid chair spilling food all over..Geet looks at him shocked)
Geet: Maan I am here trying to control the kids and you are spoiling them. Now they will be yelling and screaming early in the morning.
Maan: Realx whats fun if we can't spoil kids?
Geet: You will know if you have to take care of them at home all by yourself.
Armaan: dad will Ramesh come too?
Ramesh was Adi and Pinky's 6 year old boy. About a year after Maan and Geet's marriage both decided to tie the knot as well. Yash and Arjun, although didn't get married, both have live in realtionship and decided to adopt a little baby girl named Pia. Both live together with Dadima in the mansion. Vicky and Meera moved back to US after Maaneet's marriage and have 5 year old son Ranbir.
Sargam: Don't you remember stupid, Pinky bua, Adi uncle, and Ramesh went away for vacation. They won't be back till another week.
Maan: Sargam speak to your brother with respect he is older than you. Say sorry
Sargam (puts her head down) sorry
Armaan (smiles) better be
Geet: Armaan..you should know better too...(Everyone ate their breakfast silently until it was time to go to work. Kids quickly grabbed their bags and ran to the car. Geet comes and stands near the door and fixes Maan's tie giving him a small kiss before the kids could see. Maan leans toward Geet while looking at her micheaviously, Geet leans back knowing what was going in his head...) Maan stop..Kids will be yelling anytime soon. Go now...
Maan: What if I don't go to work? I will drop kids to school and come back.
Geet: NO! I have a lot of work to do at home. I already have one baby to take care of I don't need another. Now Go! (She pushes Maan out the door...he looks back with a sad face once more before entering the car. Geet waves everyone goodbye before heading back in. After cleaning up the house and getting Asha and herself ready she heads toward the mansion to see Dadima. Asha starts struggling in Geet's arm as soon as she spots Yash. Geet smiles and puts her down as Asha walks her way to him. Yash picks Asha up and spins her around while she screams with happiness. Geet goes and sits next to Dadima.)
Dadima: Everyone left for shcool and work?
Geet: Yeah Dadima. It is so tiring. The twins are constiently running around with Sargam teasing her.
Dadima (laughs): I told you, you guys should move back here.
Geet: No Dadima. We like our small little home and its right next door. (Dadima pats her head and both look at Yash and Asha's friendship. Both smile as Asha pulls Yash's hair when he wasn't giving her a candy.)
Yash: Geet she is like you. Its either her way or the highway.
Geet (laughs) of course beti kiski hai? Waise Arjun or Pia kaha hai?
Yash: Arjun as usual at work and Pia is sleeping upstairs. Now that Asha is here both can play with each other. Right Asha? (She claps her hands...)
Geet: ohh yeah I wanted to ask you and Arjun if you guys want to join us at the beach today?
Yash: No its fine. You know how protective he is of Pia. As soon as she is out the door he starts panicking of every small little thing. Its better if she stays home. (All laugh together...Geet spent the whole day with Dadima until it was time to everyone to go home for the beach)
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Geet prepared the lunch basket and got ready. As she was getting ready she felt some hands hugging her from the back. Maan kissed her shoulders and turns her around.
Maan: You need any help in changing? (He smirks at her)
Geet: No thanks...whenever you offer your "help" you do more then what it is needed. Now get ready for the beach. (she pushes him in the bathroom)
Maan (stops at the door): if you don't need help then at least help me...(he pulls her inside the bathroom and locks the door...)
Maan pushes Geet against the door while pushing all his weight on her. He leans closer to kiss her. "I missed you" He says before kissing her on her lips. Geet wraps her hand around his neck to deepen the kiss. Maan holds Geet by her waist and pulls her toward himself. He starts giving her small kisses on her shoulder and neck while Geet tilts her head to the side to give her better access. Both had to stop when they heard screaming coming from the hallway. Both coms out of their "mahi" land and looks at each other "Sargam" both said at the same time and unlocks the door to see what is going on this time.
Maan was shocked to see Sargam holding MJ's hair pulling it roughly while he screamed in pain and Armaan holding Sargam's body in his hand to pull her away. Geet heard Asha crying in her room who woke up from all the yelling and screaming. She looked at Maan with anger and told him to handle the kids before leaving to attend Asha.
MJ: Armaan do something...it hurts
Armaan: I am...I am..she is not letting go.
Sargam: Take back what you said first...
Armaan: Just do what she says or else you will have no hair
MJ: No! (Sargam pulls his hair more roughly now..MJ starts screaming yelling for his mom and dad. Maan unable to take all the yelling and loosing his patience at the kids starts yelling)
Maan: STOP IT ALL OF YOU! (All kids stop but still didn't let go of each other looks at him with fear) Sargam let go of your brother right now. (She lets go and Armaan puts her down. MJ rubs his head with his hands) Now tell me what happened?
Sargam: MJ said that when we go to the beach hipotomus will eat me (MJ looks down...)
Maan: Hippopotatums not hipotomus...and where we are going there are no hippo's around
Sargam: I don't want to go. What if there is one that traveled all the way down to the beach? He will sit on me and crush me
Maan: Sargu (her nickname) trust me..there won't be any...MJ and Armaan will look after you when you are in the water.
Both: What!
Maan: Yeah, since you guys played this joke on her you guys will look after you sister...
Sargam: I hope hiptomus sits on both of you guys (She sticks out her tounge and goes to her room to change for the beach)
Precap: Maan angry!!!!!
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Link to: Chapter 52

Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG it was hilaroous Simi..specailly the hipotamous part..it took me a sec to get the right pronounciation after taht..hehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr8 update::
Awww I just love ther family tym
Maaneet moments are so sweet
Wonder why maan is angry in the precap x
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
rocking update
loved it
wow what a family...
LOL it would be a miracle if there were
any peace and quiet in that house
poor maaneet their lil "mahii" time always get disturbed 🤣
loved the flashback scene with geet during labour
LOL here geet is in unbelievable pain giving birth and maan
is only worrying about his feet getting sore from standing too long
hahaha then he faints when the baby comes out 🤣
looking forward to the next part
cont soon please
cant wait
thanks for the pm!! :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣.awesome ...loved it
tooo goood 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh god its so difficult to handle 4 kids...

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