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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update!!!
maan fainted😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
rofl!!!
its so funny i cnt control my laughter.awesome as usual wat i xpected 4m sam,i wsnt let down.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
loving family
aww poor maneet their kids broke their roamce mood hahaha
update soon
wannn know y maan is angry

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Posted: 14 years ago
That was awesome update as always
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
loving the naughty kids...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Baapre Maaneet are thnking of cricket team i feel hehehe
Loved pregnancy part
Maan at that tym also was thnking of doc more than Geet hehehe
Loved how all are settled in life
Maaneet's children are fab
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys,
Sorry it took so long but am finally here with an update BUT I got some bad news..from now on my updates will be slow when I mean slow I mean hopeless-ly slow 😆😆😆 I will try to update every weekend but that depends on if I have a part written for any of my fan fics. Sorry guys!!!
Chapter 52
"let me go...let me go..I am not going.." (Sargam was yelling and screaming on top of her lungs as Maan carried her over his shoulder to the beach. Everyone was looking at them but Maan being Maan he could care less. Geet carried Asha while shaking her head, Armaan and MJ both carried the beach materials and covered their faces so they don't embarass themselves. It was hard to carry Sargam over his shoulder as she kept moving her legs and arms...He was now holding by her only by her legs. Sargam held MJ's hand...
Sargam: MJ please help me. I don't want to go..You were always my favorite brother..help me (She said it with dramatic voice)
Armaan: Hey..I am here too...
Sargam (pushes MJ and goes to Armaan) Armaan help me..I don't want hipotomus to sit on me...(MJ and Armaan both role their eyes...)
Maan: Sargam there is no hipotomus...you don't have to go in water if you don't want to
Sargam: let me go...I want to go home...
Geet (mad): Sargam Khurana..I have had enough of you. Be quiet now...
Sargam: But mom
Geet: I don't want to hear anything...now be quiet and play with the sand if you don't want to go into water. (Sargam crossed her arms and looked away and let Maan carry her to the beach quietly)
All settled down on the beach. Maan puts up a big umbrella and couple of beach towles on the sand. While MJ and Armaan both ran toward the ocean but stopped when they heard Geet's voice
Geet: You two devil's...I want to see you guys in the water...don't go to far off or else I will have you sit in the sand for the rest of the day. Understood?
Both: Yes! (They both looked each other and ran toward the water...Maan laid down on the beach towel with his sun glasses and closed his eyes..while Asha played with the sand near Maan. Geet got busy playing with Sargam making sand castles. After few minutes, Geet came near Maan to grab something when she noticed girls looking toward Maan. She grew angry when she saw Maan lying down without any shirt. She looked at Asha and smiled. She picked an extra beach towel and laid it on top of Maan. Maan took off his sunglasses and looked at her with confusion. She then picked up Asha and places her on top of Maan.
Geet: Asha is filled with sand so I didn't want you to get dirty. (Maan nodes and puts his glasses back on while Asha sits on his stomach. Sargam comes up to Geet asking to go into water after seeing her brothers having all the fun. Asha took Maan's sunglasses off and started playing with it. Maan smiled with his eyes closed. She started hitting him on his face to get his attention.
"open...play..." (She lies down on Maan's chest and closes her eyes...Maan hugs her sits up a little and places her down on the towel. He looks toward Geet and was shocked to see her. He angirly gets up and drags her out of the water and brings her back to their area. He quickly covers her up with a towel.)
Geet: What happened?
Maan: What happened? What are you wearing?
Geet: Two piece bathing suit. What? You don't expect me to come to a beach without a bathing suit now do you?
Maan; You could've wore something better. Everyone was looking at you.
Geet (happy): really where? (Maan points toward group of guys) Come on Maan you know I don't care about any of that.
Maan (pouts): You know how protective I am of you. (He puts his head on her lap...) I don't like it...(Geet runs her fingers through his hair...)
Geet: Ok am sorry. (she kisses him on the lips but not before they heard ewww noises coming from their kids. Both look at them and smiled. Geet looked at her side and didn't find Asha..) Maan where is Asha?
Maan: Geet she is right here sleeping. (he removes the towel and was shocked to find no Asha. He gets up and looks around to find her. Geet gets up as well and starts looking around with tears in her eyes...)
Geet: Maan where is she? Where is Asha? (She starts crying. frantically looking around everywhere. The kids come out of the water after seeing their mom cry.)
Sargam: What happend mom? Why are you crying?
Maan: Geet stay here with the kids. I will find her. She is here probably she woke up and started running around. (he leaves them looking for Asha. He searched the whole beach. He stopped after a while...he dropped on his knees. Tears escaping from his eyes..."Asha" He was about to get out his phone when he heard a laughter. He looks toward the source and found Asha in the arms of a guy eating a ice cream. Maan couldn't see the guy as his back was toward him. He angirly gets up and heads toward the guy. He turns the guy around and punches him on the face and takes Asha away from him. Geet and the kids come running and she quickly takes Asha and begins hugging and kissing her while Asha cried due to fear. Geet looked at the person on the floor and was shocked to see Arjun with a bleeding nose.)
Geet: Arjun? What are you doing here?
Arjun (gets up...): I came here to see you guys straight from work when Yash informed me you guys were here. I saw Asha sitting there by herself, when Maan went to get you out of water. So I took her to give her a treat, then out of no where bhai attacked me.
Maan (angry): You could've told us. You had us so scared and worried. We thought someone kidnapped her.
Arjun: Sorry bhai..I didn't want to disturb you guys.
Geet: Maan calm down. Am just happy nothing happened to Asha. Lets all go home now. I think I had enough of adventure for one day.
During that night everyone gave special attention to Asha. Asha, being the attention seeker, enjoyed her speical day to the fullest. Arjun learned his lesson of what NOT to do when it comes to Maan and his kids. His nose had stopped bleeding but he couldn't breath because his nose was swollowen and turned somewhat blue. The kids laughed at Arjun the whole night calling him different names for his poofy nose.
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Few days had passed. Everyone had forgtton the incident that happend at the beach. Maan was getting ready in the room for work while Geet was down stairs making breakfast. He was buttoning up his shirt when a button broke. He looked at the botton and opened his mouth to yell Geet but stopped. "No she must be busy with kids and breakfast. I could fix this button myself. Anyway I can do anything. I am MSK after all..." He takes out a sewing kit and treads the needle. He starts buttoning his shirt very slowly...meanwhile, Geet came up to the room to call Maan down for breakfast but stopped when she saw him buttoning up his shirt. She smiled and yelled Maan really loudly. Maan pricked himself with the needle when he heard some noise behind him.
He turned around and saw Geet laughing at him. He got angry and looked at her with a death glare. Geet stopped laughing and started backing up slowly. She started running while Maan charged after her. She was running down the stairs and looking back to Maan when she missed a step towards the end and started falling down. Maan stopped in his track and looked at Geet falling down. "GEETTT" He started charging after her...all the kids stopped eating and looked in horror as they saw Geet on the floor. "Go call your Dadima and Yash..." Armaan got up and ran out the door. MJ went near Asha to distract her while she was busy eating. Sargam came and looked at Maan. Maan pats her head in reasurance and picks up Geet to carry her to the car. Dadima and Yash came running as Maan puts Geet in the car. He tells Dadima to stay with kids while Yash went with Maan.
Maan carries Geet inside the hospital. Dr. Armaan who was on duty at the time sees Geet. Maan sees him and gets mad.
Maan: Excuse me but where is our family doctor?
Armaan: ohh he is on vacation right now. I will be filling in until then. Excuse me...(He touches Geet's feet and closely looks at her leg. Maan in the meanwhile was boiling with anger and jealousy. He then sees doctor touching Geet's forehead...)
Maan: umm finished doctor? (he interviens in between)
Armaan: hmm it seems like she has a sprained ankle. Nothing to worry about. She will just have to rest couple of weeks until it is properly healed. Until I get full reports, I will bandage her forehead. Care to tell me Mr. Khurana how did this happen?
Maan: woh umm she was running down the stairs when she slipped.
Armaan: ohh..you have to tell her to be careful. (Maan watches his every hand movement...) by the way you have a beautiful wife. (Maan closes his fist in anger..) Do you guys have any kids?
Maan: FOUR (he stresses four on purpose..meanwhile Yash was trying to surpress his laughter seeing Maan burn with jealousy)
Armaan: wow four kids? She does not look like she would be a mother of four kids. Must say Mr. Khurana you are a very lucky man. I don't even want to imagin how my wife would look like after four kids. For now we can't even handle one kid.
Maan (relaxed after hearing he is married with one kid...) yeah thanks...when can I take her home?
Armaan: In couple of hours and make sure she doesn't put any pressure on her leg and takes full rest. Have her come back for a checkup after 3 weeks.
Maan: Thanks doctor.
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All the kids jumped in joy when they saw Maan carry Geet back home. The kids presented Geet with the cards they made especially for her. Dadima made the kids go in the room.
Dadima: What is this? (Both Maan and Geet look at each other embarassed) You guys are not kids anymore. You both have some responsibility toward your children. Geet what if something had happened to you?
Geet: Woh Dadima
Dadima: I don't want to hear anything. From now on you all will move back to the mansion. Apparently, I need to keep an eye on both of you guys as well as the kids. I can't leave you guys alone for a minute.
Maan: Dadima it was an accident. It won't happen again. Nothing really happened. I promise I will take full responisbility of everything from now on. I won't let you or anyone complain from onwards. I will handle everything. If you hear one complaint from kids or anyone then we will happily move back.
Yash: Dadima lets see if what Maan says is true. Lets put him on trial.
Dadima: Alright, since he wants to take full responsibility from onwards then he will do what Geet does on day to day basis until she gets better.
Maan: Meaning?
Dadima: Meaning: cook, clean, get the kids ready, laundry..everything...as well as taking care of Geet while she is resting. (Geet lets out a chuckle)
Geet: Dadima no it is fine. We will move back to the mansion. I don't mind
Maan: What are you saying? That I can't handle this responisbility? Don't forget I am Maan Singh Khurana. I can do anything.
Geet: You may be Maan Singh Khurana (she mimicks him) but doing all the things that I do is not your cup of tea. Believe me, especially with the kids. You won't be able to handle them.
Maan: Ohh yeah is that a challenge? I will show you that I can and will do everything that you do and that too two times better. (Dadima and Yash roles their eyes and leave the place leaving the two to fight for themselves)
Geet: Alright then yeah it is a challenge. If I hear one complaint against anyone at all then you will do what I say. Oh and you can't ask anyone for help either. Deal?
Maan: Deal.
Geet: Ok then starting now. Pick me up and carry me upstairs and you have to make kids their dinner.
Precap: Maan and cooking?😲
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Link to: Chapter 53
Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
rofl 🤣as always the update was hilarious but the hints of love,care, passion n jealousy were like bonus ;)
m looking forward how will maan meet up geet's challenge...apparently leading to hilarious outcomes i wonder 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... loved part 52 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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