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Posted: 14 years ago
simply amazing & impressive
love it core
the song suit so perfect
waiting
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
add me to ur pm list if u have one...
like ur FF ...
joy
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb!
finally maneet bacame one!=)
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Well thats my fav song also
Loved all the parts
Atlast they are one
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Posted: 14 years ago
I loved the update! I love this song! That was beautiful! Thanks for the PM! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update. Maneet marriage.Continue soon. 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ok I decided to show differnt leaps to show how Maan and Geet are doing after marriage 😆 😆by the way there is a special surprise for you guys...guess what it is?😉😉😉 First person to guess right, will get a sneak peak of the next part pm'd to them😆😆 and the rest will have to wait till I update next

(READ note at the end)


Chapter 50


One Year Later:

Geet: Maan what is this? (She takes Maan to the bathroom..Maan looks around confused)

Maan: What?

Geet: This...(she points to the sink...and picks up toothpaste with no top on) I told you to put the top on when you are brushing your teeth

Maan: Sorry, I forgot. I have to get ready now for work. (He leaves the bathroom leaving Geet standing their fuming)

Geet (comes outside and turns Maan around): forgot? You always forget..sometimes you forget to put down the toilet seat or put your clothes back to where you got them...you just throw them around the room expecting me to clean it up.

Maan: Geet I try...Its not my fault

Geet: ugh if I knew you were going to be a barbarian before marriage then I wouldn't have gotten married to you

Maan: ohh yeah if I knew you were going to be a nagger then I wouldn't have married you either...everyday I have to hear your nagging...Maan do this, Maan do that..ugh its annoying

Geet: you called me a nagger?

Maan: yeah and you know what Geet your nagging is getting worse. Because of your nagging Dadima kicked us out of the mansion and now we are forced to live in the outhouse

Geet: my nagging? oye because of your constant yelling Dadima kicked us out. Everyday I have to here you yelling at me

Maan: well excuse me if you don't understand anything when I say something to you nicely...You get me so mad...

Geet (screams and goes to the bathroom after a while she comes out with a bucket full of water...) Maybe this will cool you down (She throws the water on Maan...he looks at Geet with full anger and takes threatening steps toward her...Geet drops the bucket and runs in the bathroom before she could lock the door Maan blocks it with his feet...He pushes the door open and looks at Geet..while Geet is twitching with worry)

Maan: you...I won't spare you today..(he steps toward her...)

Geet (screams) aaahhh Dadima..help me...(she pushes Maan and runs out as fast as she could...it took a minute for Maan to understand what's happening...he ran behind Geet as fast as he could)

Maan: Geet stop...and come back like a good girl...or else

Geet: no...(she keeps running...Maan gets mad and runs behind her...he finally catches her and picks her up) put me down...I want to meet Dadima...its been a while

Maan: NO! Not before i get my revenge (he takes her to the bathroom and puts her in the bathtub...he made sure she couldn't escape...Maan turns out the cold shower..Geet screams..Maan smirks and leaves her...Geet comes out of the shower and sees Maan wearing new clothes...she runs and jumps on Maan's back...Maan pulls Geet to the front both look at one another with anger and starts kissing each other...)

Geet: i love you

Maan: me too...
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Three years later:

Maan: Geet what is all this? (As Maan had just walked in the kitchen to look for Geet. He was shocked to see her wrapping food and putting juices and water bottles in the water cooler)

Geet: Food. I am packing it up for our trip. In case if we get hungry

Maan: Geet what is the need for all this. If we get hungry then we could stop on the way

Geet: What do you mean. what if we don't find any restaurant then what. You want me and the kids to starve to death.

Maan: Where does death come in all this? tum baat kaha se kaha tak lejati ho. I am just saying this is a lot of food..we don't have room

Geet: well make room. I am not taking any chances. (Maan was about to say something when Nakul intureputed...)

Nakul: Ma'am which car should cookie go in?

Geet; our car...she is coming with us

Nakul: ok..(he leaves)

Maan: you are taking Cookie with us?

Geet; yeah I don't want her to get bored

Maan: We already have enough people...now you are adding your kutta on the list?

Geet (gasps): how dare you call my kutta kutta...

Maan: you just called her kutta too

Geet: I can call cookie whatever I want...she is coming with us.

Maan: Geet stop this nonsense..you are really testing my patience

Geet: ohh now I am making you mad...here I am trying to make sure no one is hungry on the trip and you are yelling at me on top of it.

Maan (sighs and roles his eyes): Geet just try to understand

Geet: No..(she begins to cry) you would like huh when kids get used to outside food and no longer need me, when you would no longer have to eat the food I make, fine then I am not bringing any of this...here I thought it wouldn't be safe eating outside food since I am pregnant with YOUR kid, you didn't even take me anywhere for our honeymoon. (she cries)

Maan: Where does honeymoon come in all this?

Geet: I don't know leave me alone I am pregnant...

Maan: What! and for your information I did take you to honeymoon for a WEEK

Geet: yeah well I didn't like the place

Maan: you chose the place...

Geet: you know we will just eat outside...

Maan (gives up and folds his hands in front of her): ok meri maa...bring whatever you want...I am going to see if we have room...("seriously, she is bringing up random topics and when I fight back she ends it...if she wasn't pregnant then...")

Geet (smiles) ohh don't forget to carry small blankets, the babies and cookies bag, and I have also have some plastic bags in case...

Maan (holds his fist in anger...he smiles toward Geet not wanting to make her mad): sure..anything else?

Geet: no...that's it...did you call Teji Veerji to let him know when we will be arriving?

Maan ("to himself: that salla..even after three years he looks at me like he is about to kill me") yeah i did

Geet: thank you and listen don't start anything when we get there

Maan: what do you mean?

Geet; you and Teji Veerji...always looking at each other as if you guys are fighting a battle with each other mentally

Maan: For your information..I don't start something..he does..I don't understand his problem

Geet: Give him sometime

Maan: Time? how much time does he need...

Geet: I don't know...I am just saying (Dadima came in with the kids...)

Dadima: you are are still fighting..seriously..how much do you guys fight...

Geet: We weren't fighting...we were having argument

Dadima: Same thing..anyway...is everything ready?

Geet: Yeah...

Dadima: listen take care of yourself especially in this condition...and Maan don't you dare yell at her

Maan: Why do I get the yelling. She starts it

Dadima: I don't care...you should know better

Maan (sighs): ok I am going..there is no winning with you guys (he takes the kids with him...Dadima and Geet laugh)
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Nine years later:

Geet: Maan get up...you have to go to work

Maan (in his half-sleep) Let me sleep...

Geet: Maan come on..get up...you are going to be late...(she sighs and gets up) fine i will give you five more minutes..(As she was about to leave Maan pulls her down on the bed and gets up on top of her) Maan what are you doing

Maan: I got a better idea on how we can spend our five minutes...(He looks at her naughtily)

Geet: Maan stop...the kids might come...

Maan: let them (He bends down to kiss her neck when they heard some yelling and knocking on their door)

Geet: They are fighting again...get up...I have to check

Maan: no let them yell and scream..eventually they will get tired

Geet: What kind of father are you. your kids are screaming and yelling and you don't care

Maan: I just want to care about you right now..(he kisses her on her lips..the pounding and yelling got louder and louder...eventually Maan gets up) damn kids (he goes and opens the door...their daughter Sargam come and hides behind Maan...before Maan could figure it out..their twins Manjeet or MJ and Armaan came running..chasing Sargam around Maan's legs...after having enough of their fights he yells) enough! (All the kids stop and looks at him) what happened?

Sargam: I will tell you papa...they are chasing me and said they will tie me up if I don't do what they tell me to do (Maan's roles his eyes and looks at Geet..who was sitting quietly smiling)

MJ: No, look what she did to our notebooks (both hold up notebooks with drawings all over...) she ruined our homework

Sargam: its not my fault...they wouldn't play with me and when I got bored I decided to color

Maan: couldn't you see what you were coloring?

Sargam: how would I know..I can't read...

Armaan; you couldn't tell the difference between your coloring book and our notebooks

Sargam: You guys shouldn't have left them next to my coloring books...(she comes in front and stands before her elders brothers with her hands on her lips..)

Geet: ok that is enough you three...go get ready..(then she heard another cry) great you guys woke up Asha...(she leaves the room mad...the kids looks at Maan..)

Maan: you heard your mother...go get ready fast before she gets mad again...(the kids giggle and leaves..Maan goes and takes a shower...when he came out Geet was there with Asha..he takes Asha from her) hows my little baby today (she pulls his hair...he hands her back to Geet) I got my answer...

Geet: Maan you need to discipline your kids

Maan: why is it that when they do something bad they are my kids and when they do something good they are your kids

Geet: because its true...

Maan: Anyway...(He hugs Geet from the back...) what do you say we work on our fifth kid?

Geet (smacks him) HELL NO! I am not having anymore kids. Here I am trying to get my body back to the way it was...

Maan: I don't see anything wrong with your body (he tries to hug her again)

Geet: and besides don't you remember what you do at every delivery?

KIDS AGE:

ManJeet and Armaan: Twins
Age: 8

Sargam: Age: 5

Asha: Age 2

Precap: Flashback


Note: Sorry guys won't be able to update next till late next week 🤢
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Link to: Chapter 51
Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update::
Loved the different tyms of maaneet
Oof geet has had 4 kids already and maan is planning on 5 LoL
Love ther little fights...
So was the suprise that you wrote only maaneet scenes wiv none of the others involved? ,,sorry am not a gud guesser😆😉
cont soon Xx...
Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...

daadi threw them out of mansion..😆

4 kids ...n maan wants more...😲...😆...

looks like he cant get enough of his lovely wife...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
AMAZING UPDATE THANKS FOR PM

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