Maryada: Vidya-Gaurav FF - Updates. p. 145 (6/29) - Page 84

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Posted: 14 years ago
GAHH!! i am nervous yet excited! i know Gaurav may never ask anything of her because he may not think he deserves it or is worth it but i wish she gives him a chance to finally open up to someone where he can be truly himself...


are we going to find out the story behind the hair??? i sure hope so!

thanks for updating!
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Posted: 14 years ago
ooo i lyke the last paragraph ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
You, missy, are the queen of cliffhangers. ACK! You're making me crazy. Well, okay, if we're real honest, you're making me crazier.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Devi-

I missed you 😊 You must be super busy!! You have no idea how much I haunted this thread in the hope of an update!!

Coming to that- fantastic!! Will G ever open up to her when she is awake? She has to initiate it, G will not ask anything off her. Will she? Will she bring back the puzzles to get him into a comfort zone?

I don't know how you do that woman- but you leave me with wanting so much more every time!!!

Thanks for writing awesome story!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fablous update...but after a long span...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally u r back...missed you

Update was amazing...these ppl cant take each other of their minds , lol thats good news for us...even i am amazed that V wants to keep the portrait - i think the strength of mind of salome kind of seeps through her

the last line was kind of enigmatic - does it mean gaurav slept beside her and took care of her when she was asleep for 3 days ?😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 56: The 3 days long Nirjala fast sounds is really cruel...does this really take place? *please excuse my ignorance...I am not very familiar with the custom of Hindu religion*. I think that the 3 days fast will take Gaurav out of his Salome Blues and we may (?) see his thoughts regarding his feelings (if there are any) for his wife.

Chapter 57: Ahh Gaurav has been sleeping on the same bed as Vidiya while she was unconscious...and he must have said... "It was all a lie… All of it… She never loved me… What do I do with that" while she was asleep and her unconscious mind registered that hence it's coming back to hunt her!

Is Vidiya admitting that she is slowly falling in love with her husband? But knowing the deep connection he shares/shared with Salome is preventing her from thinking about it and she is having an internal war inside her head. Like I said before Vidiya will come across as the more transparent 'other half' in this battle of awkwardness after the moving wall incident.

So who is this White Tiger and how did it take form in her dreams?

Though I didn't comment on the last update...I did miss you and your super pace updates!!

PS: I don't think I made much sense here :(

PPS: I really enjoy reading debates and comments from readers in this thread just as much as I enjoy reading the updates. :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Thank you to all my readers who post such detailed comments!! I really appreciate them! I cannot write in a vacuum after all - I do rely on reader feedback. So, I agree with you all - debates among readers is pretty motivating for the writer and I strongly encourage that trend to continue :)

A couple of things that I just wanted to put out there...

A tendency that I have noticed - and I strongly discourage (please) - is for my readers to offer up something and then say that 'it likely made no sense' or something regarding the merit or lack-there-of of what they said. Come on guys, my readers are usually the best in offering worthwhile and thought-provoking conjectures/hypotheses (particularly the readers of this story). So, please let go of any modesty/inhibitions in this regard...

And lastly, this is a request. If you don't comment consistently, please don't speak of how many days pass between my updates (if you a regular, please feel free ;). It takes me a long time to write the updates for Maryada (unlike the Oldest Story, Eden, or even Love & Despair) - often upwards of one to two hours or more (my fiance is not a happy camper about this ;). As I told you all before, I really have been busy with work and life in general (as you can tell, aside from the updates, I rarely make any other posts anymore). And I totally understand what another reader said about focusing on the quality of the responses rather than quantity. But I don't think it's entirely unreasonable to expect at least two pages after each update, especially given the energy that I put into this story.

Thank you for reading,

Devi
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Posted: 14 years ago

I think I always make the 'not making sense' comment 😳 it's just a natural habit 😆

If people read and like the update I think that they should spend a few minutes writing a response, especially if they are requesting updates.😎

And I do agree that it takes a lot of research to come up with a brilliant and thought provoking update so take your time, we (I particularly) don't have any problems waiting if I get to read such wonderful updates...I don't think your loyal readers are complaining Devi 😳 You obviously have other priorities!

Thank you for writting this birilliant fic!
- Nahida :)
Edited by khahani - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aaaha ... V , who used to think that she's not the kind to fall in love, is falling for her dashing husband ...

First, the thot that 3 day fast fro him is not 'too' much ...
then the certainty that any woman can fall in love with her hubby given time ...
the keen disappointment that even after the capture saga G still sleeps on the couch, and the acceptance that 'something is missing betwn husband & wife ...

and finally 'his' hair on her pillow ... what is she going think now ???

Am all agog to see her reaction ... 😍

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