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Ishaqzaadi

@Ishaqzaadi

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#231

Ankuuuuuuu! I havent read the update you just posted today but the 2 before this (that I still hadnt commented on)...OMG <3 I LOVE YOU! I cant believe you had such a hidden talent and weren't using it before! You're a brilliant writer.. very gifted <3 Keep at this and explore this talent of yours moree!

The story is so sensitive, and could get really deep and hard to keep the interest level of readers, but the way youre writing it is dealing with it so well. Even though it's such a sad concept, it's one full of HOPE and that brings a happy side to it <3

The characters of Armaan and Riddhima come across just like MY AR pshh the ones I love lots and lots (DMG-1 vaale :P)...you've really got me wishing we could rewind time and THIS would've been what happened post-shootout *sigh*

Keep up the great workk Anku! Ima stay upto date with the updates now so I can comment properly <3 Muahh! Love you x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#232

wow! im happy i realized u updated! this part was super FAB!

LOVED ITT

cont super super soon! but one MAJOR complain! no pm :'(

pleaseee add me to your pm listtt pleaseeee

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Ayesha87

@Ayesha87

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#233

OMG i dont have words to describe how good your ff is👏

Im in luv with it completely...thanks alot for this, its wonderful to read🤗

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kalikijen

@kalikijen

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#234

wow what a part....

loved the whole update... esp armaan trying to make her feel comfortable with the cubicle and all

aww the baby part was sooo nice.... could totally imagine armaan ridds with a cute little baby....

continue soon

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RITIKA

@ksg_ritika

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#235

aww dat was sch a sweet part ....... loved it ....... plzz continue soon ......

ritika

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Pooja

@ObodroKargosh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#236

awww this part was so touching!!! AR with the baby aww 😳

I was just going in my own dreams after imagining their baby 😍

Armaan would be the coolest and caring dad and Riddhima would be the most loving mother!
hehe sauce waala lal :D he gets so happy when he sees his basket in that, I wish you had added oyye hoyye after he saw her ☺️ that is one of the most instant reactions of Armaan after he sees basket in red 😍

but AR are a good team for parents, one stops the baby from crying and the other puts the baby to sleep :) perfect jodi 😳

this update brought a huge smile on my face 😃 loved every bit of it 😳

Edited by Dr.BasketGupta - 14 years ago

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ssh57

@ssh57

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#237

hi ankita,
lovely update, the story's cruising along very smoothly. Hope to see more of AR moments in the coming updates.Waiting to see what are Armaan's plans for his sweetheart. love, shardha

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#238

hey anku ......

i read ur ff ...... day b4 though i gt teh pm for this way bak...... bt then u stopped sending pm's to me... :-(

n eways cuming bak to the ff.........

it is fab. n exactly the way it shud have been........

n honestly speaking i criend in almost all the parts of ur ff

n shanky panky ki toh mai....... kamina kabhi nahi sudhar sakta gadha kahin ka

upd8 next part soon n dun frgt to pm me ........

love ya,

vaish

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amruta04

@amruta04

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#239

hey Ankita
it was an awesome update

loved it

AR and baby scene was sooo sweet

waiting for the next update

do continue soon

take care and thanks for the pm.

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Maitree

@..Maitree..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#240

AYYIIIEEE Anku Baby I SO SO Love YOU<3 You are the BESSTT I tell You,Why,WHY Didn't you start writing earlier? Girlie,You're a ROCKKSTARR !! OMG this part was Beautiful,The Way Riddhima was Gaining her self-confidence,then The AR teasing and bickering,and then the Filmy part !! Awwwww<3 Made me Smile Wide Like River Nile 😆 LOL Okay,I know bad line but still,I feel that way !! The resturant,and the BABYY!!! The Baby part was SO SO SO KaJenish,ARish too..But I could actually IMAGINE ,Really...KAJEN holding and ruffling Kian's hair,Jenny/Riddhima cuddling him...Then,The next bit was Really ARish !! Armaan yearns for a baby...And the way Riddhima told him that there'll be a Time for them too...!!! God,Then My Smile just exceeded the Limit of River Nile's Wideness😆😆 LOVE YOU Anku<33

You are SO WOW. You make me Smile...and Want to Hug You! Muah!

Love,

Maitree

Edited by MaitreeluvKajen - 14 years ago