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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#161

hiii

awesome update

loved it

poor armaan

flashback sooo sad

loved da ending

cant wait 4 more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

amazing part di...

ankur is sooo cute...

thnx for the pm...

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fri42911

@fri42911

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#163

Superb.

update soon.

thanks for the pm.

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Madhu

@KStewartFanatic

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#164

hey Nice part punam such a tragedic story

luv it😊

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sajniksgian

@sajniksgian

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#165

Very nice part...they have suffered alot..but now both r together...and Ankur is too cute...

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#166

Awesome.loved it.
Finally AR are together..
Armaan had to go through a lot to reach his Riddhima.
His love made him pass al the obstacles in his path.
Wonderful story.
I'm sorry for commenting so late.
When are u going to continue a duke and duchess story??

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punam

@punamluvshilpa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#167

pappa,jaldi aa jaana...last part

segment --9

Party khatam ho chuki thi….but arman ne apne friends ko rok liya tha….

Arman : "hey…meri 3 no chrail friends,aap sabke liye kuch gifts hain…

Nikki,muskan and anji saw the gifts and overwhelmed .."wow!! so cute!!!!!..thanks arman…

Arman (mischieviously) :" sirf thanks nahi…promise me,ab holidays ko hume disturb nahi karegi…

Anji(making face) : "ab humari jarurat hi nahi paregi,ankur hai na tumhe disturb karne ke liye…

Muskan :"oyye hero!.aur ridhzi ke liye kya laya?"

Arman took out riddhima's gift .."sorry basket,wahan tumhara fav.teddy nahi mila..

Riddhima(hugging him) "tum aa gaye ho,bas mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye….

Arman pulled her more close and said.."dekha,ye hai meri basket…

Sabhi : "oyye hoyye!!...

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Epilogue

Arman was swinging ankur in his arm singing a lullaby…

Riddhima was staring at him lovingly….

Arman : " tum so jao basket,tumhari tabiyat thik nahi hai na…….

Riddhima(smiled ): "its okay arman…

Arman made ankur sleep in the cradle and slept beside riddhima pulling her close…….

Arman (caressed riddhima's hair) :" ek baar bhi aankhen band nahi ki,bas mujhe hi dekh rahi hai…

Riddhima (buried her face into him) :" dar lagta hai…

Arman : "kis baat ka?"

Riddhima : "agar aankhen band karun aur tum kho jao to?"agar ye sapna hua to? Aankhen khulte hi tut jaaye to?"

Arman(touching her cheeks) : "nahi basket….ye sapna nahi hai..mai tumhare paas hun…haan wo ek darawana sapna tha,jo gujar gaya…..

Riddhima : "tum so jao arman….

Arman :" mujhe bhi to dar lagta hai basket…agar ye sapna hua to? Agar aankhen khulte hi dekhun mai us island mein hun…nahi riddhima…..mujhe us darawane sapne se dar lagta hai….

Riddhima :" to chalo hum dono baaten karein….

Arman : "haan ,yahi thik hoga…na jaane kitni baaten tumse kahni hai….bahut tadpa basket…bahut roya mai tumse bichadkar..

Riddhima : "me too arman….missed you so much…

Arman : "love u shona….

……………………………………………….

Riddhima opened her eyes disturbing by sun.she stretched her hand to touch arman but he is not in the bed…riddhima got up at once…"kya wo sachmuch sapna dekh rahi thi? Kya arman uske paas nahi tha?"

Shiever of a tremendous fear was running down through her spines….suddenly she saw a letter with a red rose….

It was arman…"basket shona ,tum bilkul darna mat,mai tumhare paas hi hun…ankur jaag gaya tha,tumhe disturb karega na,isliye usey apne kandhe par bithakar basketball court le ja raha hun,as I promised you before…aur ankur khushi se jump kar raha hai...love you jaan….

Riddhima kissed the red rose…."mai bhi aa rahi hun arman…ab tum jahan honge,tumhari basket wahin….

The following 37 member(s) liked the last post:

sree12, Kashkidiwani, simple_sweet, armaan_tina, anum ghouri, fri42911, illa8, asma_227, Ayesha87, mischief, Sunnipwincessx, sweet_shilpa, luv_kash, priyanki, blessed4, arooshee, AR_EternalLove, diyaa1pk, vidu87, sajniksgian, m4manju, sweetdesire, -Garima-, Suvarna..., sweet_mittal, krazy4kash, kshanikaa, ArShSaJan, sammy4u, Iqbal Neha1, Armaan Riddhima, aish_loves_KaSh, anumeha_rajat, sacred shrine, kashndsel4eva, ARMAANKSGFAN, kash_laddoo.anu...and all my friends...thanks a lot dear...hope u liked the last part...plz.give a comment and press the tab too...its a great meant for me...

love you all

punam

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Abida_angel

@Abida_angel

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#168

Very nice fanfic. I am really sad ke itnai jaldi khatam ho gay.

But I am glad that they are togheter now.

Please write more fanfics on AR 😊

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aisha

@noseasync

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#169

beautiful ending punam...do write more fics...
Wil be waiting for it...

Edited by aish_loves_KaSh - 14 years ago

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roshni mittal

@-wild-

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#170

Woww punam amazing part but itni jaldi kyun finish kardiya yaar...i really wanna read it moreee...its really touching and very beautiful story whicjh i have excplained...lobve the way u describe thier emotion and all the stuff...beautfiful concept and wording...now update ur other fic to

love u

salina

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