D.K a.k.a 'Mr. Perfect' - Page 30

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Posted: 19 years ago
😳

awww sweet part!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
very nice kajal 😊 👏
cont....
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Posted: 19 years ago
they were great part kajal!!! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
loved the whole thing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏



and loved the last part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago

Hey guys! short but interesting part today.

Next Morning:

Disha is asleep with Dk's pic in her hand from last night.

Dk is next to her just staring at her face blankly and is smiling while blushing a little.

Disha slowly opens her eyes and finds herself staring back into Dk's eyes passionately.

Disha(smiling and blushing): aur kuch kaam nahi hai?

Dk: haa, hai na. ek minute.

He rolls over and lands on top of disha and kisses her working from her left shoulder and up. His right hand is stroking her hair. Disha is drowned in his kisses and hugs him tightly, wrapping her hands around his neck and lightly pecking his neck with a cute kiss occasionally.

Disha: Dk, ab chod ho...

Dk: kyun? kya woh minesh ki yaad ah rahi ha?

Disha: dk! mujhe puja ki preparation karne hai!

Dk: woh neelam hai na

Disha tries to lift her self up but macho man Dk slides his hands down her arm and into her palms. He is still kissing her uncontrollably with Disha is too lovestruck to speak.

Finally Dk lifts his face and looks into his eyes.

Dk: tum ko aaj jaane dehta ho lekin kal tum sirf meri ho!!!!!!!!!

Disha(still lying on the bed with her hands in his hands): mein toh tumhari disha toh har din ho!

Dk smiles and gets one last kiss on the lips.

He gets up and goes to take his shower while Disha gets his clothes ready.

Dk comes out in his towel, hair wet and what not.

Dk: now that you took these clothes out, can you put them on?

Disha: nahi! beshraam! i am gonna go take my shower.

Finally both make an appearance in the front hall.

Rano: about time you made it to breakfast!

Ved: i thought you guys must have gotten lost in the bathroom.

Rano: nahi, woh dono apne kayehlo mein ko gaye hai!!!!

Disha blushes and goes in the kitchen.

She finds Neelam arranging the puja things.

Disha: thanxs neelu.

Neelam: no problem, bha---disha!

Disha comes out and tells them the puja is ready to be done.

The pundit comes as well and all sit in prayer room.

While everyone else is praying to Bappa sincerely, Ved is drooling over Rano.

RAno can feel his presence and opens her eyes.

She gets up and moves to the front.

VEd:*damn*

PUndit does all the things and they are almost done.

Pundit: ab iss ghar ki beti ko harr charana pargeya!

Disha: there is no daughter in this house.

Neelam quicky gets up and makes an excuse to go get something.

Sum feels so bad but is forced to keep quiet becuz of Neelam's promise.

She goes and stands by the door so everyone's back is to her.

PUndit: then a bahu must do this.

Sum: rano beti, tum karo

Sum looks back at Neelam and sees tears rolling down her eyes.

She can't take it anymore and decides that soon or later she is going to tell them regardless of any promise.

Sum:*i found her after so many years and i can't see her crying like this. for god's grace, i could have never known she was my daughter if she didnt mention Dhruv. i am going to tell them...*

Next Part....IS SUM GOING TO BE ABLE TO TELL THEM?😕 ( I DUNT KNOW MYSELF)

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Kajal741

Next Part....IS SUM GOING TO BE ABLE TO TELL THEM?😕 ( I DUNT KNOW MYSELF)


Agar tujhe nahin pata, to humein kaise pata chalega jaani??😕😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
that was nice!!! and 😆


lost in the bathroom! 😆


please cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
lollllllll!!! 😆
great parts jaanu!!! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago

THIS WILL ALSO BE A SHORT PART AND NEXT WEEK THERE IS A CHANCE OF NO UPDATES CUZ I HAVE STATE TESTS TO TAKE....STINKS.

After a while Neelam wipes her tears and joins them. Soon everyone stands up and the preist leaves.

Sum(stuttering): i need to tell you something.

Dk: what?

Disha and Rano look at each other and Ved is clueless as always.

Sum:(looking down) i have hidden something very big from you. something you may not forgive me of.

Disha: don't be crazy. tell us.

Ved: maa, we won't be mad no matter what it is.

EVeryone looks at her but Neelam looks down.

Neelam: umm, i should leave as this is your family affair.

Sum(sternly): nahi! you will stay right here and listen.

Neelam stops and looks at her with pleading eyes.

Sum: you have a sister.

Dk: what?

Ved: come on, tell us what you really mean.

Sum: I am serious. you have a sister. and her name is Neelam.

The gang all looks at Neelam with shocked faces.

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Posted: 19 years ago
and boom...

how will they react??


whats in jaanu's mind?!!

please cont soon!

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