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Posted: 14 years ago
uff Dr. Neet 🤗

that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!! sorry i couldn't comment on last few updates due to busy life........

i really like this update! though it ws sad..you had potrayed all emotion amazingly!!!

update soon dear!!!!!!!


Edited by monty22 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Neets

This was so tensed & emotional 😔

Poor Sid I can so feel his pain 😭 😭

The terrace scene was beautifully written
Loved how u described SR's emotions too good

Can't wait for the next part

Continue soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG my amazing and beautiful Neets. I am absolutely in awe of this last update. So much pain in Sid and yet Riddhima is starting to wonder why Sid is having so much pain. Am really liking how Ridz is questioning Sid reactions. Am counting the days wen she finally realises wat is happening here.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😛😛😛
Neets although it has brought so much pain to Sids heart and I am so sad to see Sid this way I absolutely loved this update. Could feel every inch of Sids feelings and how he loves Ridz so much . 😭😭
Being in the next room and having her as his wife and not being able to tell her how much he luvs her is killing him. This is our Sid. ALWAYS THINKING OF EVERYONE ELSES HAPPINESS BEFORE HIS OWN. 🤗
Neets ABSOLUTELY AWESOME UPDATE. please update soon. am dying here to find out wat happens next. TOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😛😛😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
No no no Neets! This is not happening!
Sid crying!! Is there anything worse!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Neeeeet 🤗

part-7
😲😲😲😲😲
wat a twist yar!!!seriously u r doing a fab job.......👏👏👏👏
m so happy Armaan walked away...............🥳🥳i started to like armaan😆😆😆😆
feeling bad for shilpa...😭😭RIdzy.......she have mind or not.....a girl was feeling Sid,shiver runs down her spine whenever he touch and still saying I LOVE ARMAAN😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
waise accha hua u dragged story actually i want this ff to continue forever i know i know its very emotional bu i love love this ff most............😃plz drag story as much as u can.....😉😳
YOUR FF IS LYK WATCHING SERIAL...........😃love u gives detail of everything.............😃
part-8
awesomeness..........❤️ emotional😭😭 🥺but fab fab fab part.................love it.......😭😭😭
🥺 🥺 🥺🥺
wat r u doing to Sid🥺............??💔/😡😡😡😡😡😡😡usse bhi khusiyan de do............😭😭😭😭cant see him in pain..................awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww..........😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
u r amazzzzing writer.........everytime u write we want more and more an more........😉
thanks for pm...........😃
coninue super soon...............😳
❤️
Edited by JERAN_rocks - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

heyyyyy Dr. Neet

u made me cry throughout d update 😭
Sid is so sad 😭😭😭😭
d only part wen i was happy was finallyyyyy ridzy is Riddhima Siddhant Modi ☺️
i hope i get a husband like Sid 😳
plsss cont soon
Veena
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 9
Recap : Riddhima is distraught when she gets to know Armaan has left. She is so upset that without any conscious thought, she agrees to marry Sid. Sid and Riddhima get married. Riddhima is panic strciken when she realizes what she's just done and gets all nervous when Sid comes into the room. He tells her not to worry and goes to sleep in the guest bedroom. Riddhima wakes up in the middle of the night and distraught at what had happened, goes to the terrace. There she observes Sid looking out at the night sky and tries to decipher what he's thinking. Sid knows he's there but is unable to go up to her and express his feelings.
The next morning, Riddhima woke up dazed wondering what time it was and why her alarm hadn't gone off. As she rubbed the sleep from her eyes and reached for her alarm clock, she grabbed something else instead. Sid's photo. Her eyes flew open and then she remembered. She was about to put the photo back when she saw that it was a photo of Sid smiling, a genuinely happy smile. Not the way he smiled now, where the smile reached only his lips but not his eyes. Riddhima was surprised that she had noticed that about Sid without actually noticing or paying attention to it. Somehow that had registered in her brain. She put the photo back, got out of bed, grabbed her things from her suitcase and headed to the bathroom.

Sometime later, not knowing what to do, Riddhima headed towards the kitchen. Sunanda and Sue were in the kitchen. Sunanda was cooking and Sue was sitting on the countertop eating something.

Sue : Good morning bhabhi.

Riddhima : Good morning.

Sunanda : Riddhima beta, jaag gayi. Aao chai piyo.

Riddhima walked in and took the cup of tea from Sunanda.

Sunanda : Arey main tho poochna hi bhool gayi. Tum subah chai peethi ho ya coffee? Kya hai na ki yahan Sid ko chodke hum sab hi chai peethe hain. Sirf Sid har waqt ya tho coffee peetha hai ya cappuccino aur wo bhi he has his specifications for his cappuccino.

As Sunanda rambled on, Riddhima did not hear anything else she said. She was bothered by what she'd just heard.

Riddhima : Sid ko chhodke baaki sab chai peethe hain?

Sunanda : Haan, Sid ke papa aur yeh Suvarna tho wo kya kehthe hain..

Suvarna : Herbal tea mom

Sunanda : Haan.. wo hi.. herbal tea peethe hain.. Basically hamari normal chai lekin adrak aur elaichi daalke.. Armaan aur main tho normal chai peethe hain.. Infact hum dono ko hi coffee ka taste bilkul pasand nahi.. Sirf ek Sid hai jisse coffee aur cappuccino pasand hai.

Riddhima felt someone had pulled the floor away from beneath her feet. Armaan hated coffee?? He hated cappuccino?? So all that he wrote in those letters were lies?? Had he been fooling around with her all the time?

Seeing Riddhima's change of expression, Sunanda realized that she had made a mistake mentioning Armaan's name.

Sunanda : Riddhima.. I am sorry beta.. Wo.. Mujhe dhyaan hi nahi raha..

Riddhima (trying hard to keep a hold on herself) : Its.. Its okay aunty.. Main abhi aayi..

She ran upstairs to her room and opened her suitcase. From beneath all her clothes, she took out the bundle of letters. She knew exactly which one she was looking for and where it was. She pulled it out and started to read.

Riddhima,

Kaisi ho? Aur exams kaise chal rahe hain? Kaafi achcha stress buster dhoond nikala hai tumne. Tumhare kehne ke baad kal maine bhi cappuccino try kiya. Main dosthon ke saath bahar gaya tha aur hum coffee shop mein baite the, tho mujhe tumhari baath yaad aayi aur maine cappuccino order kiya.. With 2 tsps milk, 2 tsps sugar and 1 tsp cream. It was perfect Riddhima. Ithna achcha tha ki main kya bathaoon. Ab se cappuccino mera bhi favourite drink hai. Bilkul tumhari tarah.

She stopped reading, folded the letter and put it back. Had he been lying all along? But why would he? Maybe he'd thought he was in love with her and said all of that and when he met her.. Maybe he didn't like her.. But after the initial formal phase, he'd genuinely behaved as if he liked her, as if he had feelings for her. God! What was going on? She covered her face with her hands and was so lost in her thoughts that she did not feel the slight shiver that ran through her.

Sid stood at the door watching Riddhima wallow in despair. He had gone to the kitchen for his morning coffee when Sue had told him what had happened, that Riddhima had gotten upset when his mom had accidentally mentioned Armaan's name and Sunanda had insisted that Sid go check on her.

Sid : Tum theek tho ho na?

Riddhima looked up and turned towards where Sid was standing. Sid came up to her with two hot cups of coffee in his hands and indicated the space next to her on the floor.

Sid : May I?

Riddhima nodded and scooted over so he'd have space to sit. Sid sat down next to Riddhima and handed her her coffee. Riddhima looked at him puzzled.

Sid : Wo mom ne kaha ki tum bina chai piye chali gayi. Iss liye main tumhare liye coffee laya hoon.

Riddhima took the coffee mug from him and in the process, their fingers brushed against each other. They looked at each other as both of them felt the air thicken with tension and the ripples of the slight contact spread through them. Realizing that she was staring at him, Riddhima averted her gaze and pulled at the coffee mug a little too quickly and ended up spilling it onto Sid's hand.

Sid : Aaahh..

Riddhima : I'm.. I'm.. I'm so sorry..

She kept the coffee mug aside and quickly wiped off the coffee from Sid's hand and started blowing on his hand. Sid sat there gazing at Riddhima as she tended to him. When Riddhima raised her eyes to look at him, Sid quickly looked away and took his hand away saying he was all right.

An awkward silence filled the room as Sid and Riddhima sat there drinking their coffee. At the doorframe, Shilpa saw the two of them and felt slightly relieved. Shilpa had been cursing herself from the very moment she'd gotten to know that Armaan had left. It was all because of her. She'd felt guilty for snatching away her sister's happiness forever but right now, looking at Sid and Riddhima, she thought maybe all was not lost. There was still hope. She knew Sid loved Riddhima di and maybe, his love could heal Riddhima di. She would return to Riddhima di what she had lost because of her. She swore that she would bring back love and happiness in her sister's life through Sid. She would bring them together no matter what it took or how long it took.

Riddhima saw her first.

Riddhima : Shilpa!!!

Shilpa : Di!!

Shilpa walked into the room as Sid and Riddhima got up and Riddhima rushed to greet her. The sisters hug and both of them start crying.

Shilpa : Di tum kaisi ho?

Riddhima : Main theek hoon, tu batha.. Mujhe miss kiya?

Shilpa : Bilkul nahi..

Riddhima laughs and they hug again. When they pull away finally, Shilpa turns to Sid.

Shilpa : Hi Jeejs!!

Sid : Good morning Shilpa..

Riddhima : Shilpa, tum ithni subah subah yahan kaise?

Shilpa : Wo Di.. Mama ne aap logon ko pag phere ke liye bulaya hai..

The smile vanishes from Riddhima's face and she looks at Sid. Sid notices the change in her expression.

Just then Sunanda and Sue walk in.

Sid : Mom.. Ye pag phere ki rasm?

Sunanda : Yeh rasm shaadi ke baad hothi hai Sid.. Patni apne pati ke liye aur ek khush haal shaadi shuda zindagi ke liye vrath rakhthi hai aur fir maayke mein pag pherne ke baad pati uska vrath thodtha hai.

Sid : Mom, hamari shaadi koi normal shaadi nahi hai.. Aap jaanthi hain na ki yeh shaadi kinn haalathon mein hui hai? Phir yeh sab reethi rivaaz, inn sab ka kya mathlab?

Sunanda : Siddhant, main jaanthi hoon ki tum dono ki shaadi normal circumstances mein nahi hui. Lekin shaadi tho phir bhi shaadi hi hai na? Tum dono ek doosre se saath janamon ke bandhan mein bandh chuke ho. Shaadi koi khel nahi beta ki jab mann kiya khel liya aur jab mann nahi kiya tho nahi khela. Main jaanthi hoon ki tum dono ko waqt ki zaroorath hai, ek doosre ko samajhne ke liye, iss rishthe ko samajhne ke liye lekin.. (She takes Riddhima's and Sid's hand in her hand) tum chahe maano ya na maano shaadi tho ho gayi hai tum dono ki aur ab tum dono ko milke iss rishthe ko nibhana hai aur iss rishthe se judi saari rasmon aur kasmon ko bhi..

Saying that, Sunanda, Shilpa and Sue leave the room and Riddhima and Sid stand there looking at each other. Slowly, both their eyes fall on their hands. Sunanda had placed Riddhima's hands in Sid's and they were still holding it that way.

Evening time. Gupta house.

Siddhant and Riddhima had avoided each other the whole day. Right after the morning incident with Sid's mom, Sid had gone out and hadn't returned till it was time to leave for the pag phera. When Sid had walked into his room, still lost in thoughts, Riddhima had been tying her saree. For a few seconds, Sid just stood there looking at her. Riddhima quickly turned away from him and so did Sid.

Sid : I'm sorry.. Wo main apne kapde lene aaya tha.

He went over to where Riddhima was standing clutching onto her saree and without looking in her direction, took his clothes out from the cupboard and left the room. Riddhima let out the breath that she had been holding once Sid closed the door behind him.

Now, they sat next to each other for the pag phera. When Padma asked them to extend their hands, they did so.

Padma : Dono saath mein..

Sid and Riddhima looked at each other. Riddhima moved her hand towards Sid. Sid gently took her hand placed it in his. He did not hold her hand tightly or lightly. It was a comforting, reassuring grip and inspite of the stress of the past day, Riddhima felt herself relax. It was then that she realized she'd been so wound up. She stole a glance at Sid. He was looking at the idol of Lord Krishna in front of them but he had a faraway look in his eyes. Riddhima couldn't help but wonder what he was thinking about.. Or.. Maybe.. Who..

Edited by neet06 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello everyone!!
Back with another update..
Less of emotional atyachar.. 😆 But the scenario still remains the same.. Two strangers (atleats Riddhima thinks they are strangers to each other) caught in a marriage that took place in an awkward circumstance..
Their journey has just begun..
In a slight rush so no lengthy author's note this time 😛
Thank you so much for your lovely comments. Though I hate to see you guys upset, knowing that my writing has that effect on you just makes me feel so happy 😃 I'm such a sadist.. 😛
Tc
Cheers
Neet
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Posted: 14 years ago
HEY NEET🤗
Very nice update👏👏. U know this FF has become a part of my life. I was never affected by any FF but this is just awesome. Thank God My Sid was not crying in this part , Riddhima ne letters main yeh nae btaya k main ek din main kitne liter ansoo bahati hoon😆😆😆😆😆. Jokes apart, It was beautifully written. Poor Shilpa😭. Looking forward for more emotional attyachar 😆😆😆. Continue soon I m just dieing to read next part
Edited by sonia1000 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

heyyyyyy Dr. Neet

kya baat hai yaar, nice update as usual 👏
so Riddhima Siddhant Modi ko dheere dheere apne pati parmeshwar achche lagne lage hain 😳😉
jst luvd siddhima to d core Embarrassed n also shilpu 😃
i hope ridzy finds out soon tht d guy she luvs, who wrote her letters is none other than her now husband 😊
n pls do me a favour, dnt bring tht horman soon 😛😡
Veena

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