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Posted: 11 years ago


wow lovely lovely touchy emotional update.. i read all te parts in one, how i miss tis ff in dont know.. te way my maaneet ki marriage and te way my maan wants a kid so he married geet and left her te next day and geet too didt expect anything from him was lovely emotional.. te way my maan seeing his daughter and she hating him and now my maan feeling some thing for his family but he dont want to accept it buddhu maan was lovely emotional.. te way geet ki life and te way she came to know her husband ki love and te way see asking him to move on but wat ever they try they both are drown in they love without any commitments was lovely emotional.. te way sam and my maan and my maan feeling frustrated was lovely emotional..i love te update
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MANEET FF
hay please do say if you like this ff. its my first ever ff. thanks to fire & muskan, whose FF i adore. & special thanks to fire for helping me to type. :)
do say if you like this & want me to continue.











PART 8

CAN YOU ALL SUGGEST ME A TITLE for this story?





Part 8
Geet looked at her maglesutru for a while, trying to understand what does it mean to her. She looked at her stomach and than up at her self on the mirror again. Remembering what maan told her last night. That lady he loves. She didn't want to give that thought any more time than she already have. The fact didn't bother her, but the fact definitely gave her little shock. She did not want to know anything about his life, other than what they share. It was no point. Nor there is any reason to look forward to her uninviting future.

She have already decided that its best for there children to stay way from him. He could never give the love that the child needs, than why ruin the kids childhood with a strong hatred towards there dad.

Geet managed to get ready and leave for office after dropping mahek to school.

The office was quit. Everyone was walking in to be on time. Adi flowed geet, telling her what her schedule for the day.

'You have one meeting, last meeting with sammera and few other investor, regarding the new land that maan sir want to buy, under name of mahek!' Adi confusingly read from the list. Wondering who was mahek.

Geet stopped instantly. 'Mahek!'

'Yes...that's what's the company name is!, I am reading the name correct.'

'But why I have to go to the meeting?'

'I don't know!'

'But that's in the other office. Right!'

'Yes, but maan sir emailed me this yesterday!'

Geet nodes and leaves for her office.

...

The evening came quick. Black limo was waiting for her to take her to the venue.
It was a grand private evening. The hall looked busy and her eye confusingly looked at everyone, at why exactly she was there. Armaan came out of no where, and almost frighten geet to death.

'What are you doing here?' Armaan confusingly question by looking at many almost full dining table.

'I have a meeting about something!' Geet confusingly spoke and laughed.

'You have meeting and you don't know about what!' Armaan pointed his eye brow up.

'To be honest no! It was in my diary. And here I am, but I see no one.'

'Come and dine with me!' Armaan invited geet. 'My so called date did not turn up. So you can be my date.' He pulled a face.

Geet giggled. 'Well. I am hungry and so is my baby.' She looked down at her flat stomach.

'How could you geet!' He shockingly spoke. 'If that was my child I would be staffing you like santa!'

Geet giggled. And looked at armaan.

'You look so beautiful when you laugh. You should laugh more often. Come with me now!' He spoke in one breath.

Armaan pulled a chair out for geet to sit, but she couldn't, as maan came up and looked at armaan annoyingly.

'If you don't mind! I came to collect my wife.' He quietly spoke.

'No... No not at all.'

Geet uncomfortably looked at maan, than at armaan. 'Sorry.'
'Its ok.' armaan smiled

They slowly walked off. 'You invited him here as well?' Maan frustratingly spoke.

'You invited me here. I haven't invited anyone.' Geet cleared the air, which maan was not convinced at all.

Geet least cared. They stopped in front of a big table, with plenty of multi cultured people. Few from Europe with there translator. Few other from Africa, some America and they are from India with another face that she met at that party. The lady maan love. She was aged, yet beautiful. She looked like her early 30 maybe but probably late 30 like maan, but than again, rich people don't age. Take maan for example.

'This is sammera.' Maan coldly spoke, than introduced others as the investor.' Sammera being one of them.

'Its really nice to met you geet.' She comfortably smiled and than looked at maan. 'She is beautiful.'

Geet gave out an uncomfortable smile and avoid looking at maan back. She took her sit next to maan while sammera on the other side.

'Well,' maan started the meeting. 'Thank you for your time and investment. As you may be aware, this project was impossible for me to do, specially targeting the marketing department in different country. The logo of the company is very important to me, as its under my daughter name. Mahek.'

Geet and sammera both looked up with little shock. Sammera uncomfortably looked at maan and than at geet.

Geet looked at maan, who was least bothered perhaps, however he gave a look to sammera which geet couldn't understand.

'I have invested a lot of money on designing this logo, therefore I am expecting a lot of outcome. Specially from India. Now gentleman it's your turn to impress me that your money and time is worth for this new company.'

Maan went on about discussing about the land and where he would like to build the head house in India. The land was expensive, which was the little concern for the other investor, but maan took there headache way by buying the whole land, and at the same time, keeping more than 50% of the share. Which was reasonable negotiation.

As the meeting came to an end, some of the investor came and congratulated maan.

'I am very impressed.' One of the elderly man smiled. 'How old is mahek now sammera?' The man looked at maan and than sammera.

Geet shockingly looked up, unable to understand why would that man ask sammera, but than again, this two looks similar age, not maan and geet.

'Mahek is my and my wife geet child.' Maan looked at geet with an uncomfortable smile.

Geet showed a cool face, like it was alright. She did not mind at all, while sammera wasn't amused with the idea.

'Oh I am so sorry!' The man instantly apologies. 'I always see you with sammera in party. So...' The elderly man looked at geet. 'So I thought its ... Hello mrs khurana.'

Geet smiled.

'How old is your little angel.'

'She is 5.' Geet replied while looking at sammera, who was almost in tears.

'Excuse me!' Sammera snapped and hurriedly ran off. Maan flowed her trail as she disappeared along the corridors.

'It's nice seeing you mr and mrs khurana!'

The elderly man left. Geet faced maan. 'Maan I should leave. I am not sure why you have called me here.'

Maan annoyingly rubbed his forehead. 'I will drop you home!'

'No stay!' Geet hurriedly replied. 'Sammera did not look very happy. You need to comfort her.'

'We don't ...'

'You owe me no explanation.' Geet stopped maan. 'I am your wife with name and for kids. I am happy with that. So don't. I don't like people crossing any line!' Geet uncomfortably informed and left.

...

Maan watched geets disappearing body as she left. He flowed where sam went, finding her in a private room.

'Sam...' Maan almost whispered.

Yes, his heart aced seeing her crying. 'Sam..'

'No maan. Please leave me alone.' She snapped.
'Sam... I...'
'Don't maan. Out there it should have been our child. It should be me. It should be us. Not her...!' She screamed with pain. 'Its probably fine for you to say its my daughter! But it's heart here maan.' She shockingly points at her broken heart. 'It really hearts. 'First for you leaving me and now with realization I don't have kids. We don't have kids. We are not to gather. I loved you since I don't even know from when. Since a child learns to know meaning of the word love. Since... I don't know maan!'

They stood there silently, staring at one another. 1 turn in to 2.. 2 turned in to 10 minutes. Silently observing...What happen to there life?

'Leave me alone maan. Please go.'

Maan slowly walked out. Unable to understand how to Handel the situation. If you give him a most worlds complicated puzzle, he will instantly fix it, but his life puzzle. It's scattered everywhere. It's no where at the moment.

...

Maan slowly made his way home. A empty house again. There was no one. Was he to blame for this? He can not keep his wife and children happy and on the other side, he can't keep Sam happy.

He sat on the rocking chair, forgetting when his eyes have given up.

...


Geet walked in to the house, unable to think through what just have happened in the evening dinner. She looked at mahek. Who is her life. She won't be sharing her with anyone, and definitely, her calling some other women mother!

Geet went up and sat next to mahek. 'Beta...'

'Yes mama...!'

'You love me?'

'Of course. What type of silly question is that?'

'More than dad?'

'I don't like dad!'

'What if someone else loves you more than me?'

'No one can. I only love you?'

'than promise, you will always love me.'

'I promise.'

Geet hugged mahek and than took her to the bedroom. She have to talk to maan about this. She was willing to give her husband way but not her child. Not for someone she barely know.

...

Next morning geet walked in to maan's house. All the servant were rushing around the kitchen and a familiar figure appeared. It was Sam.

Geet was not surprised but surly Sam was.

'Hi!' Geet mumbled.

Sam quickly wiped her hand with little shocking expression.
'Hi! I...' Sam closed her eyes with little annoyance that how she have to give explanation to someone els when this house is her. It always have been. From making Maan's breakfast to looking after Maan's every need.

Geet forcefully smiled and looked at all the kitchen staff at the back. Who was little taken back to see there malkin.

'Hame nahi pata tha ke tum bhi aoge. Other wise I would have made breakfast for three of us.!' Sam uncomfortably informed.

'I only came to see maan. It's alright. I will be few minute.' Geet smiled and was about to leave towards her and Maan's bedroom when Sam stopped her.

'He is really tired!... He is still sleeping.' Sam worriedly informed.

Geet looked down with a smile. Looking at the clock. 10 am.

'I will come back later. Enjoy your breakfast.'

Geet walked out of her own house. How strange was that. First the husband was not her and now the house. But she needs to talk to him, maybe later in the evening.

...

Maan woke up only to realize he was still on his rocking chair. He rubbed his eyes with a headache and walked in to the washroom.

One of the servant brought tea.

'Thanks!'

'Sammera mam is downstair waiting for you at the breakfast table sir!'

'Sam? What she is doing here?'

'I don't know sir!'

'Madam came in early morning as well.'

'Geet?' Maan asked surprisingly.

'Yea...'
'Where is she?'

'She left. She was about to come in but sammera mam stopped her saying you we're tired! So she left.' The servant informed.

Maan brushed his thick hair back annoyingly. Like his life wasn't muddled up enough, now Sam stopping his own wife to see him.

He rushed out of the bedroom, almost running down the stair and than stopped at the breakfast table which was Covered with his favorite food.

'You are wake.' Sam smiled.
'Was geet here?' Maan annoyingly spoke. 'I have told you not to come here Sam.' Maan angrily looked at the breakfast table. 'What is this?' He almost screamed.'
'She was, but I only said you are tired. Which was true.'

Maan closed his eyes with frustration than looked back at Sam.

'Why are you here?' He questioned.

'I know you are tensed. Tired and that means you will not have breakfast, so... I made you some.' She smiled.

'I am fine Sam.'

Maan was about to leave when Sam stopped him.

'At least have some breakfast with me.' She pleads.

'I am not in mood!' He murmured.

'And you never will. That's why I have to force you.' She came round and held his arm to make him sit down on the table.

All Maan's servant started to give him weird look. Specially when Sam personally told geet to get out and what type of man was he. He is with two females.

One of the servant shook her head negatively, murmuring 'sick rich people!'. She slowly walked off as maan and Sam started there breakfast.



hay babes, after long time, i will give you all another update soon, meantime enjoy this. and do say how you like my ff :)
i only started for you all.

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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all my tongue is out what I read ? Like this can happen !!! you wrote what we readers can't expect...its always be like what gonna be next nxt n next...
Before reading my favorite ones I finish my works .Same I did now...Me thinking alas I hadn't read this part...😒...to much anxiety in my heart n mind...like me a heart patient who can't bear a little shock n now got big jolt...or mine condition be like a student waiting for board results...

Now me think I should be bit sympathetic with Mr Khuraana as the track is moving he is coming out of his shell...Actually more than Geet he is victim of circumstances 😲 (poor gentleman)...

Every one is correct can't say wrong even to Sam upto some extent what if I b at her place ? Its Maan who is a failure at domestic front.What a person feels who owns every thing and suddenly you say this is not yours but any one elses'...Like happened with Sam even if Geet not lives wih Maan but legally she owes every thing and Sam when she stopped Geet to meet Maan just satisfy her inner turmoil.

In front of world Maan always give acceptance to his relation with Geet and no doubt what relation he shares with Mehak even almighty can't change but here again he is taking relations as business investing in business more than required for his daughter.But what it matters for little girl nothing. Maan just securing his ''so called family '' financially but emotionally bonds r getting weaker day by day...Poor girl's insecurities r increasing .She don wanna share her mother with her so called ''Dad''. For Geet until she was away from Maan there was a illusion...
I m bit on Sam's side but its so long now how many years after marrige If me not wrong she knows bout Maan's wedding.So this period is enough for a mature lady to understand that she is just a second woman in Maan's life n now what she is doing with Geet that is not in her favour but it is way she is making for her to be kicked out from Maan's life by himself Maan😆.How he wil accept other woman kicking mother of his kids out of own house.He can move away from Geet but not from kids especially when she is carrying on inside...He is a father...But he is not able to understand the feeling hidden deep inside...

Me not a analyzer but can't resist myself to express when it comes to topic I adore n which hit my mind.😳



Wonderful update n I m in love with Maan more n more .Some where Daddi who is not in frame she is also responsible for this😲


Lets c what is ur next track .Waiting Plz update soon



Sonia





Edited by Sonia.KN - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonia.KN

Read each and every bit carefully...U know if I say this is not a fiction but a reality .It is true.Yes this is reality of life.What a person wants and what he or she gets no one can decide.

This man can b rude arrogant who can't express himself but can't neglect this fact that he is decent guy.When ever he shared bed with Geet he never did some thing really against her wish .Ya Geet gives herself willingly every time so he never needed use of force but he is decent.

Ya Maan crave for her but she herself also crave for him.So both of them share equal part in this relation.

Maan he is in dilemma he is not able to find out what he wants.But upto my knowledge he wants to kick that damn (I say her damn coz she is vamp for my angle Geet 😭) like he kicked the chair.

Even not hesitates to address Geet as his wife where ever he has to introduce in party or even talking to Sam.

I really wanna c Maan Mehak encounter wanna c a father which is hidden deep inside him.I m really waiting to c Maan's emotional outburst Putting his heart out.

This is the beauty of this story how the main characters r getting portrayed .Even if Geet many times shown expressing herself but still what she really wants that is not clear.She doesn't want Maan but she certainly want him.Her mind her heart says this but time and circumstances made her outer core hard which is asking Maan to go away but he wants him.

Maan may be 12-15 years older than her but this much difference is acceptable in our society .Where the main difference comes if there is age gap that is difference in thinking...lets c how they gonna handle their situation.But I want Mehak kicking her dearest Papa same way he kicks people...😆


Also waiting to know on which points Daddi rejected Sam ...just due to reason she can't b mother .Really so much truths to come



Wonderful update.Waiting for next part soon .



Sonia😳



res writing your reply😛😳

Thank you for the lovely comment. Yes, maan is not bad, or running, but that will come later, he is in dilema, in pain that he lost love of his life. He hates him self for that.
I he is decent, he wont deny the fact who is his wife and who is a outsider. He knows how to calue, but somewhere weak to what he suppose to do. And thats where he keeps him self way locked, thinking everything will be fine... But in reality you your self have to everything..

And sam, she is not bad, but imagine how your love is with someone els, specialy when they have so much memory togather. She is jealouse, if geet was in love, i dont think she would even let maan see sam... But lets see
Edited by -LOVE-Arshi- - 11 years ago
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nice one...maan is totally confused between two ladies of his life...eager to know how maan is goin to convvince both of them ...thanku for updating...do contnuue soon
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very nice update.waiting for next part
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maan feels like he is a confused person

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Wht the hell is the prblm of sameera nd maan ?
Wht is he doing yaar i can't upderstan ?
Wht he wnts?
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Wht the hell is the prblm of sameera nd maan ?
Wht is he doing yaar i can't upderstan ?
Wht he wnts?

Aur ye sameera ro ke to aise dikha rhi thi jaise kitna hurt hua hai isse

aur agle din kaise haq jta rhi thi maan ke ghr par aur geet ko milne tk nhi diya maan se grrr i hate her
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nice update
hope maan clear his confusion soon

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