Destiny's play-Last Part, Epilogue-Pg 74,81 (2/4)

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: serialwatcher16

Oh remember how he was acting when she was confessing how she loved him and then he opened his eyes after she left. This time as i was reading and he was removing each piece of jewellery, I kept thinking in my mind that maybe she was teasing him and will open her eyes some time later but sweetly she was really tired and had slept through it all.

Oh ho! That was a good idea. Didn't strike me. I bet your thoughts would have made more interesting reading than my lacklustre piece. Actually I had to rewrite this bit as I had already used their original consummation scene for my Maaneet scenes, thinking I'll not be converting this fic into a Maaneet fic. As my head is devoid of imagination right now, I hurriedly penned down whatever came to mind.

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serialwatcher16

@serialwatcher16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: Opti

Oh ho! That was a good idea. Didn't strike me. I bet your thoughts would have made more interesting reading than my lacklustre piece. Actually I had to rewrite this bit as I had already used their original consummation scene for my Maaneet scenes, thinking I'll not be converting this fic into a Maaneet fic. As my head is devoid of imagination right now, I hurriedly penned down whatever came to mind.

Opti,

I can't even think 1% of the ideas that you come up with and as to putting them down on paper, i don't have the words. So everybody should stick to their core competency. You write and I read.

😃

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angullgrl91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#283

awww awesome part!!! great job!!

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Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 14 years ago

#284

Opti, caught the update before I went to 😃

Congratulations Dev and Sameera.

I read Usha's comment and your response to it. Like her even I anticipated that Sameera was playing around without Dev's knowledge. But she slept throught it all. Not that I mind because they more than made up for it in the morning 😆

Humm, The tiny tots are a handful already and are keeping the new parents really busy. Looks like they have all taken after their father for their mother is so patient and nice. Hey, what are their names BTW. They are 2 1/2 months old now. They should have names 😳

EDIT - I just saw ur comment on my previous post. So they have their names decided. Great. Will wait to hear it soon.

Yup. I also feel like I am their aunt, just like Anwesha / Sameera 😳

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#285

hey finally maaneet had their bundle of joy................hope we get to c more of them too with maaneet.......

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Sujatha.rao

@Sujatha.rao

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Posted: 14 years ago

#286

Wow..two daughters and a son...how nice...and Sameera and Dev finally married and man and wife in every sense...so much of happiness in the last two updates...hope these couples remain as happy ever after..now only Anwesha remains..please give her happiness Opti..she's suffered too much already..😊

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seemamary

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Posted: 14 years ago

#287

Wow awesome update,geet and maan having 2 beautifull daughter and one son really feel so good to hear.

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-memorable-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#288

both parts are fantastic

loved them

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Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#289

Pt XCVI

yeyyyy....two girls n a boy.....🥳

glad that the delievery went fine...no bad news....

they became parents....

even annie, baba n rano were so happy....

loved it....

Part XCVII

sam n dev got married in typical marwari style....loved it...

omg sam slept..😆..on her wedding night...😆

well the girl must be tired of all the functions...they r defo tiring....if the guests get tired...think abt the poor bride....

well they made up for the night in the morning.....😉

cant wait for the next part...

update soon....

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RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#290

Loved all the parts . Yash-Arjun parts were superb , Maneet scenes were flawless & brilliant especially the arrival of babies 😃. Also liked Deveera parts . 😊