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Posted: 14 years ago
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d concept is like really cool...lookin forward to read loads...😛

add me to ur pm list...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guys🤗
thanks a lot for all your comments and support 🤗
i am overwhelmed with the response...thanks a ton❤️
i am here with update today

hope you all like it
pls scroll down for the next part😳
Edited by vampire_girl - 14 years ago
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part-1



"come on idiot!!"…a girl shouted on top of her voice…her hairs tied on two loose ponies…her skirt were dancing as she jumped like a kid in the air…! She looked like an angel….her eyes filled with naughtiness.. "come on now idiot.!"!..she again shouted..this time with irritation..she was fuming with anger..she knew he can do this easily..but he was doing this intentionally to irritate her..

He looked at her…he smiled in mind seeing her fuming ….her nose had turned red with anger…he winked at her and did the basket ...and here Empyreal High School again won the inter school basket ball championship and as usual only because of the handsome captain..Mayank Sharma…

"yes.!"…he shouted in joy…the other players came and showed their happiness throwing him on air… "congrats mayank..phir se teri wajar se hum jeet gayen"… "it was a team work man!"..he said hugging him… "mayank..!! I love you yaar!!"…she came runningly and said hugging him tight…he slightly pulled her up in the air and twrilled her around…the happiness was clearly visable in their eyes..

"hum phir se jeet gayen nupur..!"….he said putting her down.."I know idiot..par tum uo kya kar rahe the..it was an easy task for you phir....itna bhao kyun kha rahe the bolo?"…she asked annoyingly…"arey utna to banta tha yaar..agar aisa na karta to apke chehre pe itni jyada khushi kaise dekhta"….he said with a cute smile which was enough for her to melt..

"uo to thik hai hai par meri treat mat bhulna"…she said pointing her finger at him… "arey uo kaise bhul sakta hoon..ek kaam karo tum chalo mai fresh hokar ata hoon thik hai?"…he asked her… "haan thik hai"…he was about to go but stopped in midway as she called him.. "mayank..!!"…she came and sweetly smiled at her… "ab kya hai nupur"…he asked her… "mai bhi chalungi locker room me tumhare saath"..she said smilingly.. "what?!!..are you nuts nupur..tum har match ke baad mere saath boys locker room me jane ki jid karti ho..tumhe pata bhi hai log mazak urate hain"…he said seriously… "pata hai aur mujhe koi fark nahi parta..mai nahi jaungi to uo sheena tumhare piche piche jayegi"……she pouted…mayank started laughing loudly.. "nupur tum pagal ho kya?"…he was launging like anything..

"dekho mayank mera mazak mat urao tum"…she complained…he stopped laughing… "acha baba..par ek baat batao aise kaise chalega"…she gave him a confusing look.. "arey yaar ab jab meri shadi hogi ya age chalke girl friend hogi tab bhi tum yahi karogi kya?"…he again started laughing… "shut up!..uo sheena achi ladki nahi hai..aur ab mujhe aur kuch nahi kehana..chalo bas!"… she orderd. "as you say madam..!"…he smiled at her..really she is crazy…but her heart is like a child which only knows to give love!

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" Yaadein aati hain Yaadein jati hain,
Kabhi khushiyan kabhi gam laati hain.
Shikwa na karo zindgi se,
Aaj jo zindgi hai,
Wahi kal yaadein kehlati hain!! "


she finished wrting her poem and closed the diary… her face lit up with smile…her eyes were pure like water… she looked like an angel..no she is an angel… she put her pink diary and her pen in the bag and heeded towards the class only to be stopped by someone!

"kahan ja rahi ho chashmish?"… he came infront of her suddenly and as a result she was about to fall.. but he caught her by shoulder… "oops..soory chashmish"..he said…she looked at him with furious eyes…fixed her glasses and again heeded towards the class ignoring his presence.. "arey phir se kahan ja rahi ho?"… he aksed with a surprise look… "us taraf humara classroom hai na?..to mai class ja rahi hoon"…she said with irritation… "acha par class kyun ja rahi ho?"… he asked her innocently… "samrat!!"…she shouted… "arey chillao mat chahsmish..log kya sochenge"… he said mocking her…. "chillao nahi to aur kya karun?..log class kyun jate hain?..class karne na..to mai bhi wahi karne ja rahoi hoon"…she said scrasticly… "par class lega kaun?.. sare teachers to basket ball match me busy hain.. kaho to mai le lun tumhari class?"… he said coming close to her… "arey haan!"… she almost shouted… the other student looked at her… "arey haan mai to bhul hi gayi thi"… she said realizing her volume power and lowering it… "ab apni diary se nazar hataogi tab to pata chalega na"… he said with a smile on his cute face

gunjan looked at him and smiled… "par bhai ka match miss hogaya mujhse"… she pouted… "koi baat nahi..result to hume pata hi hai na?"… he said with a big smile on his face… "haan so to hai…acha samrat chalo na bhai se milke ate hain"… she said holdingn his hand and dragging him… "arey dhire chlao.. mai gira gaya to"… he said seriously… "itna bhi jor se nahi khicha maine..aur gir jaoge to hi acha hoga"… she dragged him with her..

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"mayank jaldi karo na"… nupur shouted sitiing on the benche of locker room… "araha hoon na baba"… he said with irritate with her continuos shouting… "kitna time laga rahe ho..itne time me na ek dulhan tyar ho jati hai ..aur tumhe change karne me itna time lagta hai..uff!!"… he came outside wearing his school uniform… "haan ab chalo"…she was aout to drag him outside when some one stopped thire way…

"hey handsome..!"..sheena said in a seducing voice…mayank instantly looked at nupur and smiled naughtily…but his smiled vanished as he saw nupur's eyes going red with anger… "congrats mayank…tum to super hero ho"… she said coming closer to her…she looked disgusting [in nupur's point of view]…in her skirt which was above from the usual..she did it intentionally…ah! She is a witch…

"mayank..tumhe nahi lagta ihan kuch jyada hi garmi hai"…she said looking at nupur from the corner of her eyes.. bahar chalein?…she said holding his hand…mayank noticed that nupur was fuming with anger… so he thought of playing around… "sheena..ab jan tum jaogi..uhan sab kuch hot hi hoga..akhir tum jo itni Hot ho"…he said stressing the word hot…mayank was launging in mind where nuour was ready to murder mayank and sheena both

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"samrat..tum chalo..mai library se ati hoon"…she said stopping infront of the library…"hmm ok..but jaldi ana ok?"…samrat said and left…gunjan went inside the library…she didn't want to come but she had to…she nervously stepped inside…and looked ant the librarian…her heart almost stop beating…she was hell scared… somehow she controlled and tried to find the book she needed…

samrat was not so far from the library..when he stopped and looked back at the library door…he felt something and heeded back to the library…when he went inside the llibrary what he saw…almost boiled his blood…gunjan was stading and the librarian was trying to misbheave with her…she was litteraly pleading but he was not listening her at all…smarat was hell shocked plus angry too…his eyes ere red due to anger…

"sir..pls let me go"… gunjan said in a chocking voice… "ofcourse chale jana humne kahan roka hai..par pehle jara humari baat bhi sunlo"… he tried to touch her but his hands were stopped by someone… "sunege sir..apki baat bhi sunge…par pehle jara meri baat sun lijiye"… he was pressing his hand tightly… "behtar hoga ap apni had mein rahen…ap humare teacher hain… aisi harkate apko shova nahi deti…aur agar apko yea salike ki bhsaha samajh nahi arahi to mujhe apne papa ko bich me lana padega…mr. Shashi bhushan…suna hoga na apne?"… he said with bloody eyes…the teacher was really shocked … "haan..haan suna …suna hai …galti hoagyi … age se nahi hogi"…he said and hurriedly lef t…gunjan was really numd…"samrat..uo"…she tried to say something but was stopped by samrat… "sshh..chashmish…tumhe mujhe pehle batana chahiye tha…tum tension mat lo…iski to mai"… but before he could complete…she hugged him tightly..smarat was shocked at first..but then he too hugged her back… "its ok…koi baat nahi..sab thik hai"

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"sheena!!"...nupur shouted..sheena was shocked… "what the hell nupur…chilla kyun rahi ho…match khatam hogaya"…she said mocking her…"chup! Ek dum chup…aur…chodo uska haath chodo"…she said taking maynk in her side…"chudail kahiki…sharam nahi ati aise harkate karte uye"…she shouted… "nupur..kya karrahi ho?"…mayank tried to interuppt… but nupur stopped him… "tum to baat mat karo…bada hot hot karrahe the na…freezer me ghusa dungi…tab cool bhi samajh jaoge"… "nupur tum itni hyper kyun ho rahi ho?"…sheena interrupted the conversation… "chudail chup ho ja!"… she pointed her finger at her… "tumne mujhe chudail kaha?… how dare you?"… "acha chudail ko chudail na kahun to kya miss world kahun?"… nupur said scrasticly…mayank noticed the seriousness… "nupur chalo ihan se"…he dragged her… "nahi..mujhe isse baat karni hai…chodo mujhe"… mayank took her in a corner and shouted… "what the hell nupur?!!…yea sab kya tha haan… tum kab sudhrogi… tum bacho ki tarah kyun behave karti ho?…kya jarurat thi bina wajay ladai karne ki??!! Bolo bhi ab kuch!!!"…he turned around to see her in tears… she was quietly listening to him…an tears were flowing from her eyes…


"chashmish…chalo ice _________________________
cream khatein hain"… samrat said trying to cheer up her mood… "umm…nahi aaj nahi… mood nahi hai mera"…she said…she was really upset regarding the library incident… "chashmish…bhool bhi jao ab uo sab…jo hogaya …so ho gaya…chalo ab muskurao"… he said trying to make her smile… he himself don't know why feels so sttach with her… samrat is not that kind of guy who makes a lot number of friends… but gunjan…she is his only close friend… yes mayank is also his friend… but the way he can shre his feelings with gunjan…he cant do this with anyone else… also he can read gunjan's mind… what is she thinking,what does she want to do or don't want to do…samrat can understand very easily…

"acha thik hai ruko… mai abhi aya"…he came back with two icecreams cone… "yea lo madam tumhara favourite and boaring strawberry"… he knew this topic can change her mood… "hey strawberry boaring nahi hai…tum khake dekho to pata chalega"…she said taking the cone… "haan haan I know…tumhara wahi ek hi strawberry… mujhe dekho thoda sa choclate, thoda sa vanilla…I mean sab hai..varitie to dekho…he said showing his cone… "shut up!…tumhe jo khana hai khao…par mera strawbeery flavourko boaring mat kaho samjhe?!…she said warning him… "arey ab boaring ko boaring hi to kahunga na"…he said as if it was a fact… "samrat tum na"…a idea hit her mind and she smashed her cone on his face… "lo ab boaring nahi lagega tumhe"…and she started laughing… if there would have anyone else in gunjan's place samrat would have surely shouted but her smile…for her smile he can do anything…he also started lauging… "yea lo thoda sa tumbhi kha lo"…he said putting some ice cream on her face… "samrat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"……she started running behind him…they both enjoyed their time…a life full of enjoyment…full of laughter…full of happiness…

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mayank realized that he was too rude… "nupur I am sorry yaar"… he said removing her tears with the help of his thump…she was standing like a statue and tears were still flowing…she was hurt… not because maynak shouted on her … she was sad because mayank shouted on her because of that witch Sheena… "nupur I said na pls forgive me now…aur tum ro mat…you know na I cant see you like this"… mayank was really guilty… "tum…tumne ..mujhper…us…us sheena …ki wajar se chillaya?"…she said with a chocking voice… mayank smiled in relief… "bewakoof ladki…tumhe aisa laga?"… she nooded like a 4 years old child… "pagal…nupur uo sheena meri koi nahi lagti…mujhe usse koi fadak nahi parta…par tum meri dost ho na…mai nahi chahta tum apne gusse me apne ap ko hurt kar lo…samjhi"…she looked up…and clened her nose…with the help of her hand… "par mujhe uo sheena pasand nahi"…she complained… "to mujhe thodi pasand hai aur uo to mai tumhe pareshan karne ke liye keh raha tha"…she instantly hugged him… "tum sirf mere friend hoi bas!..aur uo sheena se door rehna ..samjhe?"…he smiled and hugged her back… "as you say madam"…the broke apart and she placed a kiss on his cheeks… "I love you"…he pinced her nose… "I love you too"…

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ok guys don't think this "I love you"… was "uo wala"…I love you..it was a friendly I love you😆

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Edited by vampire_girl - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
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balley balley.. 🥳
I'm the First one to comment.. 😳
Awesome update Tashu 🤗🤗
I love the way Sam saved his Chashmish from that Idiot Professer!
and LOL! I liked Nupur and Sheena part in locker room..
Continue Soon.. Warna 😈

Love Yew
Ayesha! 🤗🤗🤗
Edited by Ayesha_LuvSaJan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

amazing update.nupur was so cute.that teacher😡.acha sabak sikhaya samrat ne use

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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Baad mein padungi, But I know tune fab job kiya hain, Love you loads.
Such a romantic update, Totally love it, I can imagine those scene in my head. Awesome yaar. I cant believe my friend is so creative.😉
Edited by Zeisha143_MBG - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was an awesome update

thanx for pm

continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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main bhe bad main paron ga abhe muje billi ko tang karna hai🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
aww i loved it it's soooooooooo sweet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
it was sweet......so they were in school................

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