MG FF~PREM KI ANOKHI KAHANI~THREAD 1 - Page 45

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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update
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lovely update
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maan taking revenge already
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maan is appliying a teasing season
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part 21
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Maan for once had this inkling feeling that could Geet be his Princess...
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why he teased her ..to leave the bed
i love the dialouge "meri princess itni junglee nahi ho sakti" .. wait till u find out :)
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PART 22

Geet woke up in the the morning and her neck was paining due to sleeping on the couch.She saw that maan was sleeping peacefully

Geet:dusht danav khud toh kitne aaram se so raha hai bed aur mujhe couch pe sula diya

She went to the bathroom and and got ready and went down

She wore gorgeous red colour Net Saree which was Emblished with resham, sequins and patch work.


Everyone was there except maan and was just staring at her.She was looking very beautiful . Vicky was just lost looking a her and his mouth was wide open.Dev saw his face and started laughing.Geet came and closed his mouth

Geet:apna muh band kar lijiye warna makhi ghush jaigi

Vicky:bhabhi you are looking beautiful

Dadi:haan geet beta aap bohut sundar lag rahi hai

Geet:thankyou dadi

Dadi:beta aaj aapka pehla din hai toh aapko kuch meetha bana na parega

Geet:ji dadi

Dadi:naintara geet ko kitchen main le jaiye

Naintara:chaliye bhabhi

Naintara took geet to the kitchen and started teasing her

Naintara:bhabhi kal raat ko kya hua

Geet:kuch bhi toh nahi

Naintara:jhooth mat boliye

Geet:kya

Naintara: mujhe sab kuch pata hai

Geet:kya pata hai

Naintara:ki veerji ne aapko kiss kiya hai

Geet:kya

Naintara:haan aapke lips umm aap samaj gayi na

Geet blushed and instantly got angry with maan for his behavior

Naintara:aur kya hua

Geet:kuch bhi toh nahi

Naintara:nahi toh phir yeh kya hai

Geet:kya

Naintara:yeh pointing towards her neck

Geet:kya mujhe kuch dikh nahi raha

Naintara:chaliye main dikhati hoon

She took geet to her room and showed her the love bite which maan gave her.Geet was embarrassed and she was cursing maan

Naintara:kya hua

Geet:umm ab main kya karu

Naintara:kuch nahi

Geet:ky..kya

Naintara:main theek kar deti hoon

Geet:par kaise

Naintara:make up

Naintara started applying makeup and soon it was not seen

Naintara:ho gaya

Geet looked and saw that it was not visible:thank you

Naintara:ab chaliye breakfast ready karna hai

Geet:haan

They went and started making the breakfast.Soon everyone came but maan was not there.They started eating the breakfast

Dadi:geet aapne toh bohut acha breakfast banaya hai

Vicky:haan bhabhi aisa khana toh humne pehle kabhi bhi nahi khaya

Everyone praised her and soon maan came

Dadi:maan chalo breakfast khalo

Maan:ji dadi

He started eating and he really liked it

Maan:dadi ghar main koi naya cook aaya hai

Dadi:nahi toh aap aisa kyu puch rahe hai

Maan:wo dadi break fast bohut

Vicky:haan aap yahi kehna chahteh haina ki breakfast bohut acha bana hai geet bhabhi ne banaya hai

Maan:kisne kaha acha hai kitna ganda bana hai

Geet got angry on this and started cursing him.Everyon knew that maan was telling lies because the way he was eating they knew he really liked it.Soon dadi left and geet was looking at him in such a way that she would burst at any moment

Maan:aise kyu dekh rahi ho

Geet:aapko breakfast acha nahi laga

Maan:nahi

Geet:toh aap kyu kha rahe hai

Maan:majburi hai

Geet:majburi my foot

Maan:kya

Geet took his plate and kept in the kitchen

Maan:kaha lekar jaa rahi ho

Geet:aapko yeh pasand nahi hai na isliye main lekar jaa rahi hoon

Maan:par main khaunga kya

Geet:main aur kuch lekar aati hoon

She went inside and everyone was laughing at him

Maan:kya hua tum sab ko

Annie:aapko jhooth bolne ki kya jaroorat thi

Maan:kaisa jhooth

Vicky:aapko breakfast acha laga tha

Maan:nahi

Dev:jhooth

Maan:chup bilkul chup

Geet came out and gave him his breakfast.It was omelet

Geet:yeh lijiye yeh maine nahi banaya hai nakul ne banaya hai

Maan just ate the first and it was just horrible.He somehow ate half of it

Maan thinking:tumne mujhe breakfast nahi karne diya ab dekhna main kya karta hoon mujhe ek baar office se ghar aana do it's revenge time

Precap:maan's revenge

Prev: PART 21 Next: PART 23

Edited by sweety.2 - 13 years ago

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