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Posted: 13 years ago
continue soon
waiting
update next part soon
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~*Fate has the best in store for us*~ ~ A Maaneet FF

PART 10 (I)


Maan: Hey girls all set? (He said nervously looking at everyone's face specially Geet)
Girls: Yeah whatever.
All girls giggled.
Boys stood all baffled . Least did they know their doom awaits them in Mumbai to be brought about by the devil girls.
Maan(st) : God please save me. From the look of this I think I am all dead.
They all sit in the car to go to their college.
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All were seated as per their teams.
Maan calls Geet," Umm. … Geet …"
Geet: "Yes"
Maan: " Hii I am here"
"Oops what the hell am saying . Where else I would be there other than here of course I am here. Why I am all nervous? Its' just geet na yeah its geet only na hey bhagwan that geet the devil & nightmare of my morning" thought Maan.
Geet giggled hearing his murmurings.
Geet: " WHAT?"
Maan: Naa nothing………
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Arjun calls Meera.
"Hi meer."
".."
"hey sis…"
"…."
" I am sorry ok. Please forgive na please please"
"You are gonna get very very bad punishment for all of your good deeds you know that na bro" said Meera with a devilish grin.
"What?"
Sanya giggled at Arjun's "what"
"Toodles!!!!"
"Hello hullo heyyy siss Meera….."
The line went dead.
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Dev gulped seeing the failed states of Maan and Arjun. He was just nodding his head from Maan's direction to Arjun's direction. "Agar bro aur Juno ka yeh haal hai to mera kya hoga " He said looking at Meera.

Arjun tried to talk to Sanya but failed.
" Abb hum kya karen" thought all three boys looking at their "partners".
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The bus jerked to a stop.
" Ab yehi hona baki tha!" Said Maan.
They all got down of the bus to find
a punctured tire.
" We may have to wait here till evening may be! " said the driver.
" Oh shit! Nothing is here to appease our girls" all the boys exclaimed at once.
" OuR GiRlS?" The boys questioned each other.

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Geet was fascinated by the surrounding. It was an orphanage. Surrounded by garden. All kinds of flowers were there. Roses….Lilies….." all my fav" said Geet.
Some kids were collecting flowers. Some were planting various seeds. Few were watering the plants. A lady teacher was instructing them what to do.
It was the season of Spring.
" It feels like Heaven's abode" said Geet.
Sanya and Meera asked" What ? Geet CONCENTRate yaar please"
"okay okay chill chill yaar"said Geet
"Hey Sam wont you join us?" Geet asked Sameera.
Sameera gave one of her " frosty nosy looks" as if Geet asked her to touch " cowdung".
"Never…"
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"Raman don't run. Beta sambhal ke" the teacher said.
Raman fell down. Geet ran to pick up Raman .
" Raman you are okay na?" Geet asked as she dusted him .
His bouquet of flowers had fallen down. Geet started to pick them up and handed it over to him. The small boy kisses Geet on her cheeks. Maan felt jealous as well as looked at her in awe. Everybody did so except Sameera and Arjun. Sameera was angry but Arjun drifted into his own world of sorrow and happiness as well.
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Shona also used to do like this. She always did it. Before they transferred to some other place……. Forever.
Arjun remembered the incident vividly.
" Shaan how would you recognize me if we grow up?"asked Shona
" and how would you Shona? " asked Shaan.
Both thought for a moment.
" Idea"
"You say first Shona"
"No you Shaan"
"No you"
"No you"
" Ok fine fine Let's give each other names so that you can call and I can recognize you"
"Fine I name you ummm arjun " said Shona
" Mere Karan Arjun aayenge……" said Shona dramatically
"minus Karan hmmph" Shaan said rudely.
" Oh my arjun" said Shona
" And I name you……" Finally Arjun realized.
" It's her".
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The whole day the Girls ignored the boys.
They all had retired to bed except one. Sanya.
"Geet is so free frank lively. Its'so …um yeah so as if bound in a cage. I am a teenager . Why I should be caged . No…. never…..I cannot stay like this with Maan. I am not adjustable with this anymore. I have to talk to him about making this over. But after college gets over. Oh …. God more time.. I want to be free. Be like her. Be like a free bird. Be like Geet."
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PRECAP:
Meera: Geet Arjun is my elder brother yaar. In his childhood he was just like I am now. That's why everybody calls him my twin but he changed after that incident.
Geet: Incident?
Meera: I don't know about that. Everybody says that someone was very close to him as he is to our family and specially about me now.



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Ananya.


504887 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
next updt in another 3 hours!
so better give long comments!
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update maan feeling big J oops
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya95

next updt in another 3 hours!
so better give
long comments!


sry sry guys power cut problem but updt tmrw 4 sure
so cheers! will send pm after d nxt part!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum ff
loved it
has a lot of secrets
waiting for them to opwn up
i didnt understand the relation between shona n shaan
frnds siblings lovers?
plz disclose this secret asap
am more excited abt this
n update soon

shruti
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
so who is this mystery girl
is it sanya????????
n even meera doesnt know what happened to her bro
waiting for the girls plan
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Posted: 13 years ago
just read in one go..
pls add me..
nahtani88 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet knows how to make most of the situation

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