MG FF:THE GIFT OF LOVE!!!!~~ PART 45:page 123 - Page 40

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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update! Thanks for the update! Can't wait for the precap!!! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
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ty 4 pm
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awesome luved itt
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n precap im like babaji sach meinnn?????????😲
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Originally posted by: rsroopali

awesome luved itt

superbbb
its rocking
n precap im like babaji sach meinnn?????????😲

precap im like babaji sach meinnn????????? 😆

u vl hav to wait for that...

thnx for the comments...😃

Luv ur VMs...u r such a talented person...

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice story...please pm me on the update

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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved bth the updates
Maaneet fb moments were fab
Loved Maan's love
Atlast Dadi wil get her answers
I hop Geet is safe n sound
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Posted: 14 years ago

I am really a Dusht..danav... making you all wait for soo.. long 😆

Plzzz dont kill me after this update...

PART 33

Geet was roaming around Hoshiarpur with her gang including Preeto,Lachi & Nandini.
Thats when Daman saw her.He was blown away by her beauty.
Daman: arey jagjit, ye ladki kaun he?
Jagjit: Damanji us par nazar rakhne se koi faida nhe.Wo Handa pariwar ki ladki he Geet.
Daman: koi bhi ho tum jante ho na Brij vir ji kabhi bhi meri kisi baat ko nhe talte..
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In the evening,
Geet: Nandini yaad he hum pehle vacation me kaise second show ke liye cinema hall jate the?
Nandini:ha didi
Geet:chal na aj chalte he!
Preeto: raat ko? Geet pagal ho gayi he kya?
Geet:arey hum akele thodi jayenge? Lucky virji ko bhi bula lenge sath me.
Preeto: Geet tu bhi na! Ab yeha koi bacha nhe he.Tere Veerji thodi humare sath ayenge?
Geet:kyu nhe ayenge?
Lachi:arey Geet didi ap bhi na! Friday ke din yeha ke cinema me waise 😛 movies release hoti he aur sare admi dekne bhi jate he!
Geet:kya?Veerji bhi?😲
Preeto:aur nhe to kya?
Geet:acha agar aise baat he..😡to hum bhi chalte he na!
N L P: Kya?😲
Preeto: Geet kamli ho gayi he kya?
Nandini: agar biji ko pata chal gaya to?
Geet : pata to tab chalega na jab kisiki khud ki himat hogi ye batane ke liye ki wo bhi gaya tha!
Nandini:ye baat to sahi he!
Lachi:na na..agar Biji ko pata chala to meri naukri gayi. Me nhe a rhe!
Geet:arey Lachi sun to..(she runs away) theek he tum log to chalo na warna me akeli chali jati hu!
Both:nhe! Hum bhi chalte he!
Geet: ye hui na baat! Aj yaha ke sharafat ke natak karnewalo ko acha maza chakate he!

All the 3 girls giggle & hi-five each other.
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At the same time,
Lucky: Arjun veerji wo apne Sapna cinema me aj nayi pic lagegi!
Arjun: wo adult movie wali!
Lucky:ha ha wahi!
Arjun:tu abhi bhi dekta he?
Lucky:ha kyu ap nhe dekte kya?
Arjun:ha..lekin laptop me..
Lucky:arey laptop me kya he? Big Screen ka maza hi kuch aur he..

Just then Maan enters,
Maan:kya maze ki baat ho rhe he?
Lucky: arey my dear would be jijaji.. Hum movie ki baat kar rhe he!
Maan:acha! Kaun si?
Arjun: Arey Maan ye koi local movie he.U watch only hollywood na!

That was true.But Maan didnt want to disappoint Lucky especially as he had started to address him as, "My dear would be JIJAJI " 😉

Maan: ha but is it some ACTION movie?
Lucky:hmm..ab isme to sirf action hi hogi.Dialogue bhi kam he! (he winks at Arjun😉)
Maan:acha to phir chalte he!
Arjun:arey nhe Maan iska wo matlab nhe he!
Maan:kya? Cmon Arjun tu kabse mujhe HP ke naam se dara rha he? After all this is a movie!
Arjun:ok! As u wish.Phir mujhe blame mat karna.
Maan: y would i?
Lucky:to phir baat paki?
Maan:bilkul!
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Time: 11:45 pm

Geet,Preeto & Nandini reach the hall.Everybody was shockd to see them.The audience included young boys to old men.Geet easily managed to get the tickets as the ladies counter was empty.
The gates were opened.
Geet and the girls sat on the balcony seat.
All the men were getting restless.The advertisements were goin on.The men kept murmuring among themselves. Finally a group of old men decided to talk to Geet.
Man1: dekho beta, ye wo movie nhe he jo ap log dekte ho!
Geet: janti hu uncleji. Isi liye to dekne aye he.
Man2:beta ye bado ke liye he! 😳
Geet:uncleji hum bhi ab kaha bache he?
The men gave up.
30minutes hav passd.Yet the show didnt start as the girls were there.
Finally the owner came to them.
Owner:dekho beta aj ka collection ho chuka he.Agar movie nhe start ki to log mujhe mar dalenge!
Geet:acha to humne bhi to ticket li he.Ab jaldi se start kariye usme kya problm he?
Owner:beta plz..ap logo ke hote ye nhe ho sakta.Me apko ticket ke double paise wapas kar dunga ap plzz.. Jao!
Geet:acha..to aise seedhi baat karo na! Pehle paise do.

He hands her the money.
Geet:girls follow me!

As she opened the exit door,there stood Maan followed by Lucky & Arjun.Nandini & Preeto ran through the other exit leaving Geet alone to stare at them.


Geet:acha to ap log bhi shamil he!
Arjun:o hello hum log hi ate he tum nhe
Geet:acha usey phone karu kya?😡

Arjun:oye meri pyari sherni, madam parso a rhe he papaji ke sath.Mujpe thoda sa taras khao na!
Geet:theek he baksh diya.
Maan still couldnt figure out wat was goin on.😕
Maan:to isme galat kya he? Movie hi to dekh rhe he.Aur kuch to nhe kar rhe? Infact i dont understand y u r leavin.Tum chaho to humare sath betke dek skte ho.

Geet:chi chi babaji..😲 Arjun veerji inke bare me pehle rai hi teek thi😡.Ek numbr ka lafanga..huh namuna kahi ka..



She stomped outside murmuring to herself, 'dusht..danav..samajta kya he apne apko?

Arjun shot an angry glare at Lucky who grinned sheepishly.
It was only later when the title of the movie was shown that Maan realised how his statement would hav sounded and y she gave him that disgusting luk.He burnt Lucky & Arjun with his eyes and left the cinema.😡
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Maan was pacing up and down.Oh God wat al dreams did he hav before coming here.And now,"sweep her off her feet "was a Himalayan task which he couldnt think of.But atleast he needed a chance to xplain her his stand.Every time he ends up like a jerk in front of her..kya kehti he wo..haa namuna!
He needed to talk to her and he vl find his way out! After al she is mine! He smiled as he repeated it in his mind.

Well smitten by love,Maan Singh Khurana was doin all unimaginable things.Noticing that she mostly remained with her mom Rano, and Pammi Maan was wandering in the kitchen.Finally he found her giggling and talkin to Pammi.As she saw Geet started talking in an animated for him to hear.
Geet:arey bhabi humare yeha ke cinema hall me..
Maan was shocked! 😲
Wat if she told everyone! MSK was really scared now..


Geet(contd):..me adult movie dekne 3 ladkiya gayi thi.
Maan sighed in relief.


Pammi: hey??😲 Kaun?
Geet:he koi sir firi ladkiya.Waise humare ghar se koi bhi to nhe jata na aisi jagah?
Pammi:na na..
Geet:aur jo naye log aye he wo? (Maan frowns)
Pammi: Geet tu bhi na! Kaisi bate kar rhe he.
Just then a voice came,"Pammii"
Pammi:ayi biji..
As Pammi left,Maan caught Geet by her wrist and pinned her to the wall.Their faces were only mere inches away.Her eyes widened by his sudden action.She lukd at him without blinking..
Mahii..mahiii..maahi..😳



Maan: dhamki de rhe ho mujhe?
Geet:ha to..
Maan:bata du sabko ki wo ladkiya kaun thi?
Geet:bata do.No one vl believe.And no one has the gut to be the witness.Aur ulta mujpe inzaam dalne ke liye aur veerji se galtiya karvane ki apko saza milegi.
She gives him a triumphant grin.
Maan:tumhe kya lagta he tumhare veerji dud pita bacha he aur me..😡
Geet:ye sirf me janti hu na..gharwale nhe..isliye ap muh kholne ki himat na kare!
Maan: acha..tumhe lagta he ki Maan Singh Khurana tumhare dhamkiyo se dar jayega..
Geet:ha..kyuki Maan Singh Khurana ka samna aj Geet Handa ke sath hua he.

She shoves him off and walked away.
Maan was feeling gud.Jagda hi sahi par Ms.Hoshiarpur xpress se kuch baat to hui..




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EVENING 3PM: GIRLS HIDEOUT AMONG THE PADDY FIELDS

Geet: oye Nandu tu itni kyu has rhe he..
Nandini:arey didi wo Arjun virji ke dost he na jo dilli se aye he?
Geet:ha..usne kya kiya?
Nandini: arey usne kuch nhe kiya.Wo Lucky virji unhe action movie dikhane ke bahane kal cinema hall le gaye the!
Geet:kya?😲 (she now realised why he askd her to join them and couldnt control her laughter)🤣
Lachi: kya hua Geet didi??
Geet:kya? Chal wo sab bate chod aur humari baat shuru kare!
Preeto:mujhe bohat dar lag rha he.Agar Lucky ji ko pata chal gaya to mujhe mar dalenge!
Geet: Preeto pata to tab chalega na jab koi batayega...
Nandini:didi r u sure?
Geet:oho..ladkiyo hum koi paap nhe karne ja rhe samjhi.Its just wine! Waise mere standrd ke liye to.. u know we should hav started atleast with a vodka or whisky par tum bacho ke liye mene wine choose kiya he.
Preeto: Geet iske sath pani nhe add karte kya?
Geet:chup dafar! Ye wine he! Australian Red Wine!
She serves them in 4 wine glass.
Geet : lets raise a toast in the name of our sisterhood CHEERS!

Suddenly they were startled by a manly voice,"Kya ho rha he yeha"
As usual the trio ran for their life leaving Geet alone to face Maan Singh Khurana.He stood there with now the ball is in my court attitude.



Geet: Maan veerji..
Maan(shocked)😲:nhe sirf Maan!
Geet:ha to mene wahi to kaha Maan veerji ko mat batana!
Maan relieved,she didnt cal me! (😆)
Maan(regaining his attitude):kyu nhe batao huh?
He moves closer.She backed away..
Geet: Maan its just wine!
Maan:ha shuru me wine phir beer aur agey..
Geet:nhe Maan sachi.First time.Ye to compliment mila tha hume..to socha try maru
Maan: ha maro maro..me abhi bulata hu.Ab to proof bhi he mere paas..Arjun..Teji paji..darji..biji..

Geet jumps forward and close his mouth.Maan shuddered with her sudden touch.Her soft hands against his lips was giving him an adrenalin rush.It was hard to block al the erotict thots that came to his mind😳..yet again their eyes communicated.Sensing that she was too close to him,Geet moved back and lukd down.To lighten up the situation,
Maan:umm..Geet agar me na batau to mujhe kya milega?
Geet:kuch bhi! Jo ap puchoge..
Maan: kuch bhi??
Geet:nhe wo..mera matlab..
Maan:acha me nhe bataunga kisi ko lekin ek shart pe!
Geet(hesitating):kya?
Maan: agar me nhe batau..to...
Geet:to?
Maan:tumhe mujhse dosti karni padegi! No more fights ok?
Geet:umm..sochti..
Maan: Darjii..
Geet:nhe..ok ok friends!
Maan: sure?
Geet:bilkul! Friends!
Maan:waise Geet me mazak kar rha tha.i wont tel anyone!
Geet: acha..mujhe bhi apse koi gussa nhe he..
Maan:sachi..
Geet:ha koi shak?
Maan:nhe. (smiles)





Geet: Maan..
Maan:hmm..
Geet:to kya me ye wine pi sakti hu?
Maan: Bijii..
Geet:nheee..
She throws the glass.Maan shook his head and walks followed by Geet.
Geet(self-talk):dusht...danav..ab bhala dhamki deke koi dosti karta he?
Maan: Geet
Geet:hmm..
Maan:me sun rha hu..
Geet:to? Mene kya galat kaha?
Maan:tumhe acha lage ya na lage but v r frnds now ok?
Geet (makes a baby face):ok!
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PRECAP:
MAAN: TO SHADI KAB KARANA HE?

UPDATED THIS PART IN A HURRY.DNT KNOW IF U LIKE IT!

VL UPDATE IN TWO DAYS...PAKKA...😃

PLZZZ COMMENT...

Edited by madhubala123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was fab
Past was sho shweet n cute
Maaneet moments were fab
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

That was fab

Past was sho shweet n cute
Maaneet moments were fab

thnk uuu...😃

I'm so happy u like it...i wasnt sure myself if it came out well...😕

thnxxx...😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part.
loved it.
precap is interesting
continue soon

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