BROKEN FLOWERS EPILOGUE PAGE 23

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#51

loved it ..... plzzz dont let any thing happen to zooni ... Naaz was lucky coz Maan cud think swiftly in the situation .. but these things happen and unfortunatelty not every one is lucky ....

continue soon

love

Sana

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Lovely update
Glad dat naaz got saved but sad dat terrorists tuk zooni away
Will Maan & naaz meet agen afta dis bus ride?
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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swetha10

@swetha10

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

amazing update.. really heart wrenching.. continue soon

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

loved it n i really hope nothing happens to zooni n hope all the other people in the bus somehow save zooni from those goons

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504887

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

awesome one yaar
very delicate subject
thnx 4 d pm

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Padamjot

@padamjot

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Absolutely stunning...
Such a delicate subjct nd so beautifuly portrayed..every xpression was perfct...loved it completely...u r an awsum writr..

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ixiaa

@ixiaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

O sejal what have u done? how can maan tie a mangalsutra and put sindoor on someone else. So in this story u have got MAAN MARRIED TWICE. Poor geet(not naaz) will have to suffer d fate of sauten. n what will happen to naaz husband?

What a twisted and great story.

Plz update next part soon.

Eagerly waiting to know what will happen next

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sakadafi

@sakadafi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#58

That was a brilliant update! Written very nicely. You did a great job in creating the mood. Ab baaki kab update karegi...???

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

beautiful part love how yu
describe maan side

wow maan save naazi

sejal i have full faith on

yu my dear i know yu

i'll not let us down

& give us full justice

so far its lovely story

keep up the good work

thank yu

pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn

thanks pm