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NEHU

@Glitter_In_Eye

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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

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Hey Honey🤗

First of all, I was so waiting to read something from you for such a long time and thanks or putting this up. I know that was a birthday gift for Khush but what a gift yaar!! It was really hot.☺️ I enjoyed it to the core. Do write some more, I mean whenever you get time.😉

Edited by Nehu_1 - 14 years ago

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#192

Hey everyone,

I've updated part 6 of my FF Sometimes When We Touch: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1705432&PID=44815995�

Do read and comment!

Hope you enjoy!

Love,

Khush.

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NEHU

@Glitter_In_Eye

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Posted: 14 years ago

#193

Khush, you need to update the index of this thread too.

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ariel1985

@ariel1985

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#194

Welcome back dear !!!!!! So glad to see you and your OS...definitely superb... no surprises there...
So since you came back with a bang...do we get to see your other ff's on AN being continued...hehehe...

Also i guess everyone know that Amit Tandon is going to star in a new show😛😛...how i wish our Shwetz was his co-star...am sad about that😭😭...but partly happy to see AT back... 😊

-Rams

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anotheranfan

@anotheranfan

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#195

@honey
Wonderful OS :) Liked it. It would have been more interesting to see them ignoring each other :)

Writers:
I am always looking fwd to scenes where unsteady, unconfessed emptions are elaborated :) And then the war of who confesses first.. i like those over the confession scenes :) Can somebody do OS on these lines. :) Pls.

Edited by anotheranfan - 14 years ago

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Namy

@Amy_an

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#196

@Hey Honey, great to see ur post..

What more I can say.. Another brilliant OS from a veteran writer😳 Loved it..

Will post my detailed comment later..

*edited*

That was subtly intensive romantic and too effective read. Very beautiful and captivating OS..

Loved that moment of different emotions running at Abhi's mind.. His inner turmoil, his feelings, his guilt.. Though he felt something very strong for Nikki, he behaved exactly as if he didn't care a bit.. That's what uniqueness of his character.. I was totally captivated and mesmerized till the end...

I simply love the way you write every scene.. You always portray AN emotions so beautifully.. Its simply splendid and mind boggling..The end was so so intense.. I wish I could depict it in words how much I enjoyed it.. The way abhi looked at her through mirror.. While reading it I was just lost in the dreamland thinking about how the scene would actually be☺️ That's the effect of ur writing on me😳😳

I was hyper ventilating towards the end and was running short of words to explain how much I loved it, hence reserved the post.. Awesome OS.. Please do write more..

Edited by namy_an - 14 years ago

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mitzification

@mitzification

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#197

Honey I have written a long reply for ur OS .. its still in my head of course ... and I hate to reserve posts ... but forgive me for doing it this once.

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mitzification

@mitzification

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: anotheranfan
Writers:
I am always looking fwd to scenes where unsteady, unconfessed emptions are elaborated :) And then the war of who confesses first.. i like those over the confession scenes :) Can somebody do OS on these lines. :) Pls.

Why OS read Khushboo's ff naa ...

Pri no one will wrote it for u , ull hav to write it for urself ehehheehe

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: mitzification
Why OS read Khushboo's ff naa ...

@bold...she has a point, you know 😉 😆

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mitzification

@mitzification

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#200

The interns being actualy nice to Abhi ... yeh kab hua ... koi pprologue to do ... Nikki being in love wid Abhi and admitting it to herself ?? magic .

Abhi asking girls not to wear heels ... stupid ... thats just not done Dr Modi ... what happ to Nikki silently complying to his unreasonable demands ???

And Abhi gets bolder with each of ur OS's .. or is it Honey getting bolder .. hehehe