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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zARqaa_X

finally devs dead yayy
sadly geet doesnt kno the truth of him or she wudnt be cryin
OMG maan married her
continue soon x



Yeah atlast dev is dead!
Maneet r married!
I will try to update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abina03

beautiful update

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Posted: 14 years ago
just came across this fan fic! its awesome! cant wait to read more! can you please pm me when you continue again? thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

just came across this fan fic! its awesome! cant wait to read more! can you please pm me when you continue again? thanks!


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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome👏
luking 4ward 4 next part😍
plz update soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zarlishkhan

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luking 4ward 4 next part😍
plz update soon😊




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sukklover

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dear.......ur update just n n also ...also .......⭐️
..dear...👏👏👏
..really .....😳
....4 ur hard work dear..👍🏼.
tons of huges n kisses.... ....🤗
...4 pm me...
..2 always PM me....😉
once again .....😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

FF:Revenge from the lover

Part 12

Geet woke when she heard a knock on the door.She opened the door and saw nakul.

Nakul:Ma'am rahul saab aap se milna chahte hain.Woh necha drawing room main hain.

He went away.Geet didnot know who was rahul.But she went to drawing room.


Rahul:Hi geet bhabi! Main rahul hoon.Mere baba maan sir ka baba ka saath kaam karte tha.Mujhe dev sir ke maut ka afsoos hai.Mujhe inka bare main aik zaruri baat kar ne hai per mujhe samijh nahi aa raha ka main yeh baat aap se kaise karoon.

Geet(With tears in eyes):Please agar zaruri baat hai tu aap kha dein.

Rahul(Looking down):Aap shayad mere baat ka yakeen na karein per dev sir ka murder hua hai.

Geet(Shocked):Kya?Per yeh kaise ho sakta hai in ka tu accident hua hai.

Rahul:Nahi inka accident hua nahi tha karwaya gaya tha.Actually main police officer hoon.Maine investigate kiya hai tu mujhe pata chala hai ka kisse ne dev sir ke car ka breaks fail kar deye tha.Bohat pata karne ka baad mujhe iss banday ka naam pata chal gaya hai.Lekin inke pohanch bohat oper hai iss liye main kuch nahi kar sakta hoon.

Geet:Aap mujhe iss banda ka naam baatyein main maan se baat karte hoon.

Rahul:Please maan sir ko mat baataye ga kyuki inhone ne hi dev sir ka murder kiya hai.

Geet(Shocked):Nahi aisa nahi ho sakta.

Rahul:I'm sorry per aisa hua hai.Maan sir ne dev sir ka murder kiya hai.Per mujhe samijh nahi aa raha inhone dev sir ko kyu maarwaya hai.

Rahul's mobile rang.He attended the call and then said geet to takecare of herself and gave her number so that she could call him if she needed any help.Then he went away.Geet was still in shock.She went to her room and sat on her bed.

Geet(Thinking):Maan aisa nahi kar sakte......Per Inhone dev ko jail bhejwaya tha.........Kahin inhone ne mujh se shadi karna ka liye tu yeh sab nahi kiya.Tu kya maan ne sach main dev ko maara hai??Woh ab tak jo kar rahe tha woh sab drama tha kya??

She went to sleep while thinking this.

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She saw a man's back who was sitting on his knees.She could hear his sobs.Suddenly she heard her mother calling her.She turned around and found her mother.She ran to her mother and hugged her.

Geet(Crying):Maa aap mujhe akele chor kar kyu chale gayein.Maa yahan mera koi apna nahi hai.

Usha(Wiped her tears):Nahi beta main tumhi akela chor kar nahi gaye.Tumhare pas main kisse ko chor kar gaye hoon.Jo tumhara bohat khayal rakhe ga (She pointed towards that person) Jao beta woh tumhara intezaar kar raha hai.Woh tumse bohat pyar karta hai.Aur main yeh bhi jante hoon ka tum bhi iss se pyar karte ho per yeh tum khud nahi jante.Iss ne tumhare waja se bohat dard saha hai.Ab isse aur dard mat dena.Ab daar mat karo iss ka pas jao jitne tumhi iss ke zarurat hai itne isse bhi tumhare zarurat hai.

Geet(In low voice):Dev

Geet was going to that person but something was stopping her.She went to him slowly and about to reach him.When he pushed her.She looked at him.She could not see his face but she saw blood and realised that person saved her while he hurted himself.She hugged that person and shocked to see his face.

Geet(Shouted):Maan!!!!!!!!!!

She woke up with a jerk and saw maan in the room.

Maan(Worried):geet tum theek tu hona?

Geet(Quickly went to him and checked him from head to toe):Aap theek hona maan??Aap ko tu kuch nahi hua na??

Maan(Confused):Main theek hoon geet mujhe lagta hai tumhi koi bura sapna aaya hai.Tumhi aaram ke zarurat hai.Tum late jao.

Maan went to the study room.Geet went to the kitchen fro drinking water.She saw nakul making a coffee.

Geet:Yeh aap kis ka liye coffee bana rahe hain?

Nakul:Maan sir ka liye.

Geet:Main inhe de dete hoon.

Geet was about to enter in study room when she heard maan talking on the phone.

Maan(Angrily):Maine kaha na mujhe woh place chahiye tu chahiye.Main nahi janta tum jo bhi karo mujhe woh zamin lena hai.Tum yeh tu jante ho ka Maan singh khurana ko jo cheez chahiye hote hai woh isse paa kar hi rahta hai.Acha mujhe aik aur call aa rahe hai.Main tumse baad main baat karta hoon.

Maan attended the other call.He was talking in low voice to that person.Geet tried to listen.She heard his voice when he spoke a little louder.

Maan:Theek hai per mera ghar main se kisse ko nahi pata chalna chahiye iss bare main especially geet ko.Ok bye!

Maan turned around and shocked to see geet.

Maan(Looked afraid):Geet tum yahan kab aaye?

Geet:Main abhi aaye hoon aap ko coffee dena.

Maan(Smiled):Thank u geet....(Thought something)..Geet agar tum bura na mano tu mera kamre main so jao.

Geet:Hmmm

Geet went outside the room.

Geet(Thinking):Tu maan ne dev ko maara hai mujhe paane ka liye...Aap iss haad tak gir jao ga maine kabhi nahi socha tha.Ab main aap ko iss ke saza dalwa kar hi rahoon ge.

Precap:Maneet moments!

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How to take revenge from the husband!

Share ur ideas.U can also request!

Edited by pickachu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Note:

Thanxx for ur wonderful comments.
I have replied everyone individually.
I hope u guys like this part.
I know there was no maneet moment in this part.
But in next part i will try to put maneet moments.
Share ur ideas about how to take revenge from the husband!
By the way rahul's character was in character sketch!
Edited by pickachu - 14 years ago

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