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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#141

wow good maan become hard wow and geet she is being nice to him but soon this going to become world war hahahaah that case they must have geet's sketch and maan going think she is become nice bec of that owowowowo good going wanna to see how they both come to face each other again thank you for this part and pm

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#142

Okay he is not interested in her but yaar wo ussey dumb nahi samjh sakta dats enough poor thng ek flowers lekar aayi or he so rude.... Not fair

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#143

Nice update

Maan is rude

Geet is dumb n sweet

Lets c wats aage

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Shalve

@Shalve

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#144

superb update.....but Maan doesn't know that he himself has broken the law...as he has married to minor girl....

Edited by Shalve - 14 years ago

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heermeher

@heermeher

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#145

Can you atleast make maan know that she is his wife or both dont recognise each other

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#146

well first thing i wanna ask y geet will b arrested..............cant wait for the next update...........

well this update was nice as always mainly focussing on maan's life and his intentions............

i love ur writing............the way u write abt the social awareness matters and making it interesting with little bit of romance...........wat more u want...............waiting for the next update

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nazsij

@nazsij

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#147

it was gr8 part.khadoos kahika...ek baar bhi geet ko nehi dekha.ye pyar bhi nafrath se hi shuru hogi kya?ya phir pyar nafrath me badal jaayegi?thumari style of writing muje behuth pasand hai.so uncomfortable feel karna band karo.sab ek jeise likhenge tho padne me maza kya hai?geet is arrested??????????pls jeldi update kardo..
thum ek time me ek ff likhiya karo.ab thum cop ko phool hi geyi ho.ek likhenge tho zyada maza aayega......it's only a suggestion.

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Tanu

@butterfly.tanu

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#148

Geet arrested but why..omg i m impetient..plz update soon..

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#149

Loved both the parts 4 & 5 .👍🏼

Completely agree with you on drunken driving . Even people themselves get killed being sloshed ; if they are not in senses for their sake then how can they be for others ??? 😡

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#150

Hi !!! I know I have not posted for a long time...

Actually, to increase my suspense factor, I thought let Paulami post a few parts and I will read them all together.

So today I completed all 4 parts and here I am😆

Firstly, I am amazed at how you come up with different scenarios and situations for Maan and Geet to meet. Secondly, each of your stories has a different setting - but all of them have one thing in common - no mush. They are totally rough and tough and I love them. Thirdly, all your Maan and Geets are strong characters - they have an individuality of their own. Fourthly, your stories are less of chocolatey kind - which many writers right anyway (and I love them as well) - and this makes them different and attractive to read.

Infact I wont hesitate to confess that I look forward to your updates everyday and your PM gets a prioritisation always 😆

I stopped at "fourthly".I can go on and on...but need to get back to office work😆 Well done lady, keep up your good work. Your love of writing not only soothes your mind but ours as well😳

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