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daniella

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Posted: 14 years ago

#281

awesome update

thanks 4 the pm

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jiya

@--jiya--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#282

ok... so I can believe Sharon now... and I pray that Chris succeeds in winning his love back

as for Ali and Saba, at least both know they are alive...

I am holding my breath now...

Please continue soon

God Bless You

~jiya~

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

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Posted: 14 years ago

#283

jaee that was just awesome!! love dit! n sharon....poor she!! seriously!

really looking forward to d nxt update! do cont soon:)

tc:) thnx fr d pm:)

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afsha

@-afsha-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#284

I love Sharon

Phew she atlast made Chris see wat the truth is

Altaf bhi jeeye hazaro saal

He gave the ebst news to Ali

I jus wish bth get their loves back

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#285

Awesome Update

Loved it loadzz

Cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

Muahhhhhhhh

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: Fantasia.
reserved! 😳

EDITED:

beautiful!! I loved the reasoning of Sharon, we should not judge people like that, we don't know their lives. She was realistic and totally human, but what a pity that Chris's own father laid such a vicious trap! Pity on him, such people are not even worth being hated!. but now i hope Chris and Anna unite.

and for ali and saba.."teri ankhon ko aknhon ka sahara kaun dega..samundar ko samndar main kinara kaun dega.."....

cont. soon and God bless..

P.S - i don't know but i am fearing the end..

Originally posted by: jiya_angel
ok... so I can believe Sharon now... and I pray that Chris succeeds in winning his love back
as for Ali and Saba, at least both know they are alive...

I am holding my breath now...

Please continue soon

God Bless You

~jiya~

Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharma
jaee that was just awesome!! love dit! n sharon....poor she!! seriously!
really looking forward to d nxt update! do cont soon:)
tc:) thnx fr d pm:)

Originally posted by: -afsha-
I love Sharon
Phew she atlast made Chris see wat the truth is
Altaf bhi jeeye hazaro saal
He gave the ebst news to Ali
I jus wish bth get their loves back

Thank You girls for your wonderful comments - Sharon was never a villain - she herself was a victim ... I knew all of you will think she is wrong and so I decided to play with your minds and see if you are able to find the real culprit or not ... Step-mothers are not always bad ;)

Thank you so much for loving t :)

Jaee D. Rathore

Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva
Awesome Update
Loved it loadzz
Cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhhhhhhh
Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Originally posted by: daniella05
awesome update
thanks 4 the pm

Originally posted by: mahakmev
mindblowing

Originally posted by: apeksha_gupta
wow is the only expression i can think of
finally!!!!!! some convincing light in their dreading dark life

Originally posted by: sizzilingyasmin
👏yay my words are less for yr story quick continue quickily cannot wait😆

Originally posted by: Riddss
nice part
continue soon

Guys, you all are really sweet ... thank you so much for your lovely comments - you totally flatter me .. Thank you so much :)

Jaee D. Rathore

Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#288

Reverence

Arthur Road Jail, Mumbai, 8th August 1999

At the stroke of the midnight hour, the walls of the prison witnessed what had not happened ever - several prisoners together were helping one run away for his love ... The stage was set for the biggest drama to unfold as Ali on gunpoint forced the jailer to not just release him but escort him out of the prison - back to the world where his love was waiting for him ... No more he cared of the world because it had betrayed him - lied to him about the only person he loved the most - he was ready to leave his darkness behind and embrace the light but when the world pushed him back to the darkness then he was too ready to fight it with his darkness ... There was no stopping anymore as he barged out back to world like a lion - ready to fight each and every particle of the earth to reach his love .... The matter was being handled by the only jailer who sympathized with him - the situation in Arthur Road Jail was : All for One situation .... He changed his clothes and took an auto to search for Saba .... A new life was injected in him and he was ready to fight everything that would come between him and her .... He smiled as he imagined her beautiful smile after seeing him alive in front of her eyes - he was dieing to see her .....

Mere murjhaaye dil ko, ab to khilna hi tha ...

Humein milna hi tha, pyaar hona hi tha ...

Kent Mansion, Mumbai, 8th August 1999

She stood behind the pillar looking at her son, ready to fight for his love ... For the first time after her marriage, Chris had trusted her and she knew no one will be able to stop him from uniting with Anna ...

Chris walked towards his father with a smile on his face and a ball of fire, burning him inside ... "Hey Dad, what's up?" Jake turned around in shock as he did not expect his so to return so soon ... He fumbled with words and finally said, "Hey son ... what a surprise!" Chris smiled and replied, "Dad, ek aur surprise hai aapke liye ..." Jake furrowed his eyebrows while Sharon smirked form behind the pillar, "Kaisa surprise Chris?" He came forward and put his hand around his shoulder and said, "Guess what? Anna aur maine apne beech ki saari problems ko resolve kar liya hai - and she is ready for the marriage!!" The earth beneath Jake slipped away as Chris's words rang in his mind - he could not believe his plan becoming a failure ... He turned around to see Chris smiling at him and waiting for his reaction ... He finally took a deep breath and replied, "Don't marry her." Sharon shook her head with anger building inside her while Chris's heart broke into pieces - he knew his father had played a game with him yet somewhere inside he wanted it all to be a lie but now he could see beyond the mask his father wore, "Why Dad?" Jake turned furiously towards him and said, "Because I am saying so - you are not going to marry her." Chris replied with equal anger, "I am going to marry her. Give me one reason for not marrying a gem like her." Jake was losing his patience and shouted, "Because she is a gold--" but he suddenly realised what he was doing while Sharon came out of her hiding and Chris looked at him with a rage he had never seen before, "Because she is a gold-digger, right Dad?" Jake stood still seeing Sharon come and stand beside Chris and he knew that the cat was out of the bag .. "Why did you do this Dad? Why did you cheat me? Why did you break my trust Dad? WHY?" Jake still tried to pacify his son for the last time and said, "Chris, listen to me--" Chris screamed and interrupted, "NO you listen to me ... I worshiped you Dad. You were my hero. I always thought high of you and what did you do? You played with my emotions, you ridiculed my love for you - you made a buffoonery out of me - you disgraced our relationship - you insulted love and most importantly, for you - I broke her heart - I left her for you ... YOU DESTROYED MY LIFE!!!! I hate you Dad, I really hate you ..." Jake looked at Sharon and shot daggers towards her and dangerously walked towards her, "You did this - it's because of YOU that my son is standing against me ... I won't leave you!!" And he raised his hand to hit her but Chris stopped him and with all his anger snapped, "Don't you dare touch or harm my mother!! You have done enough harm to both of us 0 don't test my patience and don't force me to forget our blood relation and cross all the limits ... do you get that?" Jake fell numb and slowly retrieved his steps while Chris walked out of the mansion to breathe fresh air ... Sharon's tears finally found their way and rolled down her cheeks as she saw Jake sitting on the couch - all broken ... "Jake, you yourself lost everything - you lost Felicia - you could never win me and today you lost your only son ... You are nothing but a loser Jake - the slap has come back to you ..." and saying this, she walked out of the mansion with a smile on her face ....

Itne ujaale ho gaye achanak, apna bhi dikhta na saaya ....

Nariman Point, Mumbai, 8th August 1999

She was searching for him everywhere she could ... She had walked every place they had created memories but couldn't find him anywhere ... She didn't lose hope though because she knew, if God had opened the truth then his blessings were with her and she would soon find her love ... She stared at the growing waves of the water that hit the rocks and knew, she couldn't lose this time ... The ball was in her court - she walked towards the station to board the next train towards her next destination hoping she would find Ali there ...

Jama Masjid, Mumbai, 8th August 1999

He reached the place where Altaf had told him, he had seen her but she was nowhere but that did not break his spirit - he started his search and rushed towards Nariman Point hoping she would visit that place where so many of their memories were attached ... He felt disheartened when he could not see her there and realised, the search was not going to be easy and decided to visit the place he had lost her - the area where she lived - he was desperate to find some clue which would lead him towards her - he could not wait to see her and he knew he had to hurry as the police would soon start their search for him .....

Kuch dooriyaan hai, kuch majbooriyaan bhi ... Par na hai koi sahaara ...

Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago