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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#231

lovely update!

thanks 4 the pm

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#232

o ho now i understand what was sharon thinking osom update

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#233

Brilliant update hun

i feel sosad for chris he's being tricked 😔 loved the whole update thanks for the pm

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#234

awesome update

loved it soooooooooooo much

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

muahhhhhhhhhhhh

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SAISakura16

@SAISakura16

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#235

Part 2 - I know I am so behind but hopefully will be able to catch up once exams are done! 😳

First of all, seriously speaking, u r one of the best writers I've come across👏.... u have a way with words 👏..... Ur words make the reader feel the emotions of the characters. Beautiful!!! 👏

The first part where u describe Anna's feelings as she sits in her class was just so good. You were wonderful with portraying both Anna & Chris' newfound emotions.... Initial days of love...😍

Ali-Saba part was a total opposite from Chris-Anna's. Their first meeting was intense and beautiful .....Gun falling out of his hands as he removed the hair from her face....it was a very nice symbolic way to show how his priorities changed that instance itself....Fear & Love - what a combo and portrayed beautifully!!

"Humne hamesha saath rehne ka vaada kiya tha na, to tum kaise mujhe chhodkar chale gaye - mere paas laut aao ya mujhe apne paas bula lo kyunki Ali ke bina Saba kuch nahi hai - uska koi vajoot nahi hai ...." - 😭beautiful line!!!

Edited by Ishita16 - 14 years ago

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#236

edited on pg 35. 😊 and pearl u haven't edited the title for chap 12. 😊

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: -Mehak
edited on pg 35. 😊 and pearl u haven't edited the title for chap 12. 😊

Thank you Di for reminding, I totally forgot ... :)

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jiya

@--jiya--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#238

reserved

Sorry for editing late, I was terribly stuck up...

and secondly, I was left numb after reading the Chapter

How cruel can this world be? How hard is it to let a person move out of darkness? Ali tried, he tried hard, but nobody let him. Instead, they smothered his heart and threw him into further darkness. Cruel heartless world.

Chris and Anna, what to say? Love falls prey to conspiracies again.

Hoping for a bright future

and exemplary writing Jaee...

God Bless You

~jiya~

Edited by jiya_angel - 14 years ago

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#239

loved it but am feeling so bad love saba and ali

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drmaha

@drmaha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#240

update was beautifelly written......

it was heart piercing jaee.....ali and saba journey turning into terrible pain and sorrows.........cant see thm like this.......

ths world really cant see sum one happiness.........

and ana and chris i just dont understd if trust too mch thn y cant they just talk to eachother and resolve ths missunderstanding.............

update soon dear.....................