FF-5-REMORSES- THREAD 5 (part 54 page 140)

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MsMovielover

@MsMovielover

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#671

ohh maan is really trying to improve...
but she wont give him a chance, i really hope she does

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

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Posted: 14 years ago

#672

great update

do continue

can u make it longer

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muskaan_cute19

@muskaan_cute19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#673

Hey dear loved the part it was amazing as always
nuthing could b better 4 him more than holding her in his arms

no night could b better than this in which sleep holding her and no morning can b better than this in which he sees her face even before the sun this was just like a spell on him in which he was enchanted with her charm the effect she had on him she really take him to any extent undoubtedly she was a magician to him who could heal all his wounds that too in a jiffy she could get him release from all the pains she could absorb all his stress she had that power in her

she still had that love 4 him deep inside as that love existed in that subconscious mind of hers so that could only b visible in a subconscious state wen she not completely conscious coz at that time her mind takeover her completely nd as of now her brain was sleeping she could feel him
bt as soon as she cumz back she is still the same no change at all rude stubborn strongheaded determined that never to love him back no never wat may ever happens

all did this happened it hurt more coz she loved him truly madly she loved him even sum1 else pain couldnt help it coz all wat seems is just an act of him nuthing more its just another way to hurt her or any1 else his doings were unforgivable she was turned so negative that even if he is duing sumthing right or correct or sum1z good sake she felt that its just another tricks of him to hurt that was fitted in her mind the only thing in her mind was all he could do was hurt people give them pain nuthing more than that as he was good for nuthing nuthing at all
at the end i wont say anything much abt it as i myself was confused was she angry or confused was she hurt of wat he have done or wat he is not duing the statement at the end she thought There is nothing he could do to ease her pain! was she complaining was she sad about this was she angry abt this watevershe felt there i myself is quite confused bt i tnk she still in dilemma how to react wat to react as she is hell confused about his behaviour hs present doings
well loved the part dear it was great love reading it
keep writing
god bless u

Edited by muskaan_cute19 - 14 years ago

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#674

awesome parts!

maan was trying to change himself but geet is not giving second chance to him!

i think geet will come back!

continue soon!

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#675

Thanks for the update.

ohho ... ohho.... grrrrrrrr what is happening to Geet??????😡

Maan is trying his best to prove his love but Geet's heart has turned into stone............
Children always take ur attention.
How come Geet did not move by looking at them?
She shows her love when she is asleep.Let her sleep for a while so she remains in Love mode position for a longer period. What an irony ?😕
How long she is going to take to melt down completely??????????

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