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Noma

@Nomaa.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

WOW Tashuuu :| i just caught up with your OS! LOL your writing is soo cutee! hehe <3 this is really good so far! keep it up hunn :)

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tehreem

@tehreemm

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

*EDITED*

Pshhttt it was hard to find my res but i did it finally :P EEKKKSSS Kinna cute part tha and Riya is such a cute baby peeking on her parent's 😆 But the whole part was really very very cute and the intro which riya gave of both armaan and riddhima was AWEEE 😍 Ok confusion why bottle cap 😕<< I know it means something 😉😆 Oh were they going to kiss infront of the baby 😲😆 Thank god they found out before they could proceed with their plans 😛 Loved it 😳

Edited by -tehreem- - 14 years ago

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Rumi007

@Rumi007

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Wow Tashu...its amazing yaar...Riya is so adorable...

Thanks a lot for the pm.🤗

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purpleekajenian

@purpleekajenian

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

OMG Tashuuu!!! it was so good dear👏👏 nw truly i have become ur fan😳

i jst luved reading it, i was nt at all distracted by anythng when i read it, i mean u have the talent to keep the reader involved in the story,, n i just felt i was present there when this happened, beautifully described each n everything👏.. i must say this was something unique and interesting!!! well written girl!!, u r truly amazing Tashuuu <333333

I WILL BE WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE, N UPDATE IT ASAP😃

thnxxx for the PM, 😃

with luv -shasha-

Edited by shasha_kajen - 14 years ago

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Maitree

@..Maitree..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

*EDITED*

I owed you a Long Comment for seeing this SOOO Late !! Tashu,You're One Awesome Writer..Chupi Rustam! 😆 I'll comment on ALL the parts!

Part 1 : This was MAHA-CUTE! Firstly I loved the idea of Riddhima proposing..Its so Different,Yet so Cute<3 Loved their first meeting..LOL Armaan started flirtling from right then! So Armaan-ish! Then then SRK's Mujhse Shaadi karogi thought was Hilarious..She actually thought she was going to play SRK infront of her boyfriend! LOL !! Then her speech was SO Cute..Yeah I admit it was a Litle cheesy but it was true...From the AR sense! Loved this<3

Part 2 : Loved this one too...Hugely Adorable<3 Heehheee Loved the bit where he lengthened the kiss and said," Now thats how you kiss someone" Soo ARMAAN ! Then the way she proposed and the line you added there about his expression like with a confused expression as if I had just explained a really complex math problem to him that was unsolvable. Heeehheee!!! This was Hiralious🤣 then that part when he comes back to say sorry! Awww...It took away my heart and led me to a Large Smile :) that part was adorable..Reminded me of the KaJen Cardboard/Silent Convo when Armaan decided to leave! Only this was Happier! Tee-hee! Cuteee!<3

Part 3 : This one's the BESSTT of all,I think.Riya is SOO cute,and naughty and mischevious! Armaan pe gayi hai !🤣 LOL LOL She isn't interested in anything except her Mom Dad's Love Life !! 🤣 Ussko Love-letters mein interest hai ,Which is very good..Because She is SO like me! The letter was Uber-cute<3 Armaan is Sooo Adorable when he is missing his Basket LOL And Then Armaan's Diary Entry was Awww!! Heehhee the first meet Armaan was SCAARREDDD !! 🤣🤣🤣 And Loved the way Miss Riya Mallick was hiding behind the curtain to save herself..AR convo made me smile ! I can imagine Dr.Mallick staring at his wifey! Sorry,Sexy Wifey! 😉 Then the way Riya called her Dad 'Babe' was 🤣 The look on Armaan's face must've been PRICELESS! Tee-hee! Socho agar Riya hadn't got caught Bechariii Uska Kya hotttaaa 🤣 LOOVEEDD this Tashu<3

Next Time PM me! ILY <3

Love,

Maitree

Edited by MaitreeluvKajen - 14 years ago

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Usha

@alaipayuthey

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

hey,

nice OS!

it was really cute!

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shaaz_91

@shaaz_91

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

hey
such a cute os
luvd it
tc
shaaz

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Khushi Grover

@Amor.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

its nice tashu

do write more

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452840

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Lovely tashu<3
muwaaah continue and pm me<3

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yuni

@ammyridz600

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

RES

Finally edited 😲 😆

edited shooo late sholly😳 koi baat nehi par i edited this week i kept my promise 😆

tashuuu mindblowing OS 👏

omkajen AR daughter sharing her 😳i sooo love the 1st paragraph itself sooo cute like srk daughter in KKHH 😳 but riya off course will be cuter than anjali afterall its my AR daughter 😍

aww love the way riya ging in AR kamre chori chori chupke chupke 😆

aww i loves this part when riya says papa n his silly names 🤣 omg she find basket naam silly 😒😆 i love it 😍

for a sec after reading armaan letter i was confused why armaan saying babe at the end of his love letter 😕🤣 thank riya for clearing the confusion 😆

OMG both AR letters were sooo cute 😳 but bad gal riya its not reading momma n papa love letters 😆 but its very fun 2 read others love letter 😍🤣

but am still wondering why armaan have bottle cap in his drawer 🤣

tashu love it very very much it was unique compare 2 other OS 👏through i dnt read OSs n FFs now 😆

N am happy they caught riya or bechari would see how naughty her papa is 😳😆

sholly once again for editing sooo late 😔

yuni😊

Edited by ammyridz600 - 14 years ago