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SIYAHI

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Posted: 14 years ago

#291

🤣She Is A Small Town Girl

Dil Da Sitaara She Is Jogini Pitaara, She Is A Small Town Girl
He Rob-Ii-Najaara, She Is Dun Di Bahaara, She Is A Small Town Girl

Akh Naal Akh Daal Gal Kardi..🤣🤣

Isaki Toh Shorsha Hai Tauba, Ho Gayi Mitraandi Tauba
Bhaadala Unch Sar Rakhadi Hai, Vilaayati Dance Kardi Hai..
Udadi Gubbara Ye Faturi Ik Taara
Da Kinaara Hai, Maalyi Di Hai Dhaara
Akh Naal Akh Daal Gal Kardi...

Chhoti Ungali Pe Nachaayegi Tumhe, She Is A Small Town Girl🤣🤣

She Is Small Town Girl
Kardi Jo Bhi Kardi Kamaal, Kardi Baat Yeh Bemisaal🤣🤣

Kardi Sabda Hai Bura Haal, Kardi
Ho Nachdi Mele Me Sabke Naal, Nachadi Khulake O
Ho Nachdi Dhol Bajada Janaal, Nachdi..
Baaju Kikalaayi Kare Sabki Dhulaayi
Khusmankhaayi Koyi Na Safaayi
Akh Naal Akh Daal Gal Kardi..🤣🤣

BAHUBALI MAAN SHOULD SING THIS SONG FOR MIRCHI GEET🤣🤣BHARATPUR IS ALSO A SMALL TOWN BECHARA AB AYEGI AKAR (READ LUST) THIKANE🤣🤣

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Esha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#292

The breakfast table scene was hilarious....Geet kept on forgetting their names purposefully and also showed them her Mirchi side...now they are even afraid of talking to Maan infront of her😆....well they do deserve that....hypocrites.....i like the way how Geet took care of Durga and learned all that's necessary for her to take care of a baby...she resumed her studies too....and also she made him do whatever she wants😆.....Bechara joru ka ghulam bann gaya....I hope she will understand Maan also and find a way to reform his junglee habits....

Edited by esha143 - 14 years ago

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suba2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#293

nice....keep writing.....😊😊😊😊...more maaneet moments

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#294

am totally floored .... haye!

cant get enuff of your FF ...

thanks a ton babes ....

love

Sana

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Tinu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#295

Oh yaar that was reli awsum.i jst cant stop myself frm reading it again n again.
Breakfast scene was hillarous.
Bahubali maan to joru ka gulam ban gaya hehe.
Update soon

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monika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#296

Fantastic , amazing geet make maan joru ka gulaam so sweet..

Durga come back home so sweet and maan is such sa sweet in some matters this will make geet think ab him she is now strugling about her past and sudden change with her present ..i hope she will manage to get over from this and give time to her this new relation ..maan should give her some time...

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punjabi.princes

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Posted: 14 years ago

#297

loved this part

Go Geet!

con't soon

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seemamary

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Posted: 14 years ago

#298

Awesome update, poor maan couldn't romace with his wife geet but i hope geet falls in love soon with maan and maan also falls in love with her and both may share their feelings foe each other, want to see more romance between maan and geet, plssssssssssssssssssss conitnue soon.

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Mamatha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#299

geet geet geet geet........................

loved it

and yes she is a mirchi........😉

Edited by maanmania - 14 years ago

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mystique_girl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#300

Haiiiiiiiiiii what an update...MIRCHI is the right word for Geet😆 Nice find...

Am surprised at Maan - he is a bahubali and so childlike in certain things...I guess the saying is right - every human being has a child inside.... Thinking himself as "joru ka ghulam" was ultimate 👏

Maan forgetting feeding bottles and expecting Geet to feed Durga was unimaginable...you have a great sense of humor 😆

Really, the earth takes 24hours to rotate - and your world can change in seconds....loved Geet's recollecting her life's changes over last few days...your writing makes things so real...as if its happening right infront of me...i can even imagine Maan's house 😊

Loved how they reacted to each other .... Maan's concern and Geet's needs...very nice ending indeed..

Looking forward to more...😊

Edited by mystique_girl - 14 years ago