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anumol

@sweetanu2314

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#881

omg....i sooooooo loved this update and that too u didn't make us wait for long.......thank u sooo much for that...............i really don't hav words to describe this shot......loved it big time...........do continue soon...........thanks for the pm.......

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-DavneetKaur-

@-DavneetKaur-

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#882

hey i liked the part shru...but i dunno i feel u should also give a justification abt the pendant armaan gave to riddhima...or some surprise like that for riddhima....and even after all the justification i still feel kinda angry on him...and well riddhima ka BHAO KHANA IS WELL DESERVED FOR ARMAAN😆...KAMEENE ne bechaari ko kitna rulaya yaar....now he should make up all of that warna ill kick his butt🤣....waise i wasnt expecting an early update but a very good surprise...i liked how armaan gave justification...well uski side of story was also sad but still kameena kissed that blonde....i cant forgive him for that😡😆....do something about that too shru...but seriously it was awesomee confession with riddhima's ILU N armaan's ILU2❤️and about my hunch on this engagement thing being naatak was true😆...also i had a clue ki lagta hai poori baraat ko ye pata hai ki he isnt getting engaged to her....but still i dont forgive him😆....thodi mehnat aur karni padegi usko😆...kameena itna bada naatak kiya....but riddhima dint forgive him so easily so yaay😆

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Sunita Tandel

@KaJen_addiction

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#883

lovely update!
such a beautiful confession!
actually armaan waited 4 her since 3 yrs. my god! he suffered so much
he dated andrea n all that engagement thing was fake just 2 make ridz realise
he loved her since so long. we can't even figure this in whole ff. though i had doubts about his feelings 4 ridz
gonna c how armaan will propose her again. will he?
ridz is not going 2 forgive him soon
cont soon. wanna c whats in store for us
eagerly waiting!

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#884

Originally posted by: Dmg8594

I will obviously show AR romantic scenes! 😆 But they'll be more of the 'cute and adorable kind' much like the previous parts of this FF, I doubt there'll be many of the 'hot' kind, except a kiss or two...I haven't written stuff like that before, and I'm pretty bad at it as well I'm sure...But I'll still try! 😊

shru there is always a first time 😉

hehe

@red wud also b satisfactory😆

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Mrs.MSKForever

@Mrs.MSKForever

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#885

Wow!!!

So you listened to us....updated Armaan's confession sooner than we thought we would get!! The whole confession was great... reasonable I would say, but then the laalchi me feels there should have been a bone crushing hug to end the confession.... the one that they gave each other before Riddhima left Cali.

Superb writing... right emotions.... they were the over the top kinda couple so this set the tone right...an over the top frustrated crack-down n an equally over the top series of events that made armaan do what he did...

But then I feel bad for andrea now... even though I didnt feel no liking or hatred for her until last part of urs... she got involved in this mess and frankly armaan pretty much used her just coz he cudnt get Riddhima... anyway, she behaved like a sport n still helped armaan get riddhima to confess...

well, now I am waiting for the morning after effects...how the whole family would react and all... hope its fun to read and it comes much sooner than I expect... i.e I am hoping for maybe a teeny-tiny update with the morning after confession scene maybe this weekend....

Dont end this FF plzzz... you still have a lot to show in their lives now that they are an official couple! :)

Do continue soon!

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shonadesire

@shonadesire

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#886

comment on page 116...plz tell me hw was it???????????

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..Mira..

@..Mira..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#887

OMKSG..I nearly freaked out seeing that Riddhima had confessed yesterday, but I had to go out and therefore wasn't able to comment..and then lastnight when I was about to come back to your FF to reread Riddhima's confession..I saw that you updated Ch.23..YES the most awaited part, definitely for me atleast! haha. I honestly couldn't believe that it was up that soon, I honestly think I must have stared at the updated title for a couple minutes before realizing that you did number your chapter right..and that you really infact had updated..okie so let me get my thoughts together..and I promise I'll come back to edit my comment :P

Okay I'm back to comment on your part! Riddhima's confession was SO GOOD! I loved how she said that he can't be with andrea because that would mean there could be no them. There was such simplicity in the confession, a lot of emotions for sure since she was in such an emotional turmoil but it was still so simple! And I felt like it said it all, everything that she'd been feeling in the past month or so was in that one line..that she WANTED him. But I think my heart honestly skipped a beat or two when Armaan spoke up and asked her Why he couldn't be with Andrea..I knew right then that she was finally going to say the three words that he'd been dying to hear from her! The entire confession played out really nicely!

Now for Armaan parts..this has to be my favorite part, just because of the mere fact that it was ALL Armaan baby! It was his heart felt confession, and I've honestly been DYING to read something from his POV. I got the story half right..I had felt like he realized his feelings for his Munchkin after the night of the Christmas party, when he saw her in the state, but I had no clue he was crushing on her from DAY 1! WOW! Three whole years? He's definitely been through a lot of pain, so I guess somewhere..even though I'm not saying it was right of Armaan to lie to Riddhima like that about his engagement, I almost find that it's okay she went through that pain..for her it was only a month of the worst pain of her life, and for Armaan it was THREE years of on and off confusion, and pain! I felt like I understood Armaan a lot better after this part, but then again I would never not try to understand Armaan, he's always been a favorite, and always will be! Like Kashu said, he could murder somebody and I would probably just say "It's okay, it happens" aha. I'm obviously very bias towards him :P BUT OMKSGGGGGGGG they're FINALLY FINALLY together! And I'm so laalchi, I want more AR scenes already!! I honestly cannot wait for the next part now!! It's going to be so so so cute seeing how they act around each other now that they've both confessed to each other! Update as soooon as possible, I know you're probably really busy, so thank you so much for updating this part so fast! I honestly was really really shocked to see it already up last night! It made me so happy..and so did this part! I love love lovedddddd it!<3

-Mira

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#888

Hey dear........the update is just wowwwwwwww................the way Armaan said that she took whole 3 yrs to realize that she love him.......just too good..........Armaan is such a sweetheart yaar.............the way he explained each and everything to ridhhima.........chooooo chooooooo chwwweeettttttttttttt..............I wish I have someone like him............sigh........anyway........the confession is just superb.................this part is like the recap of whole story but through Armaan's POV😉............nd yesssssss he is in love with her...........from the starting......yeepiieeeeeeeeee...................... poor Armaan......he suffered SO MUCH yaar...............hope now he get every happiness he deserve..........waiting for more.........so do continue soon....thanks for the PM.......take care..........

Lots of Love

GEET

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558278

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#889

okay i just reread this part for the like 5th time...

can i tell you like everytime i get to this line:

"But what I realized was, that missing someone actually meant sitting right beside them and knowing you can't have them..."

i start like crying! it's so sweet and so powerful!

I can like totally see an entire ff revolved around this ONE LINE!

omg can i? like if you dont mind, can i like use this as the tag line for a mini/short ar ff? Obv. I'd tell everyone that it's your line :D i'd even give the link to your ff! please please pleasee pleaseeeeeeeeee

lol

anyways back to the part - woww again lol

i have like so many questions and such but im just going to wait for the next part :D ah cont super super super soon na pleaseeeeeeeeee