Sr Os-When A Heart Breaks(Part 4:Pg.12)

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Lennie

@Lennie

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Glad that Sid got his own angel, and love again and i liked that he left Ridz not in darkness but light etc

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Nikita

@nikita_88

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Firstly - Thanks for replying to my comment only 😆 Makes me feel so special - of course I only love you for Dumbly quotes - I mean why else would I? 🤣

I can't believe the irony here, but I hated the ending 😆 Despite being a SidShi fan 😕 ( I swear I am going to come off as a confused soul but I have my reasons!)

Ok reason 1 I really expected this to be an SR OS despite hating farzy the bit that got to me was her leaving the house with that flashback I never expected her to walk out of the house live there for years to come or something her way of punishing herself or something, I don't know but I was looking for some Sid and Riddhima - but she walked out closing the doors!

Anyways I did love what you wrote - with him taking her to the moon light very significant, Sid and Shilpa the happiness they gave each other really well written!

Anyways nice work!

Want to see more writing from you!!!

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petrichorr

@petrichorr

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#93

Prgzu,

You writing is absolutely beautiful!

It was a neat ending. Love the way you had potrayed SId's pain, the way he decided to move on in life.

Awesome!

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-Harshu-

@-Harshu-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

From d vry 1st day I knew dat u'll not bring SR together 😆 but still I was hoping for some ' karishma ' 😆😆
SidShi & A----------R married
I really don't know what to say abt dis 😕

Though I am a SidShi fan but I didn't like d ending & my reasons r same as Nikki's
Seriously after dat flashback I was expecting Ridz to stay in d penthouse ( heaven ) forever

But I loved what u wrote abt Sid & how he didn't left her in d darkness 😳
SidShi scene was beautifully written

EDITED -

After all what happened I don't think SidShi & A----------R can b normal wid each other . I can't see dem talking so casually just my POV 😊

Anyways I am happy for Sid ,atlast he found his happiness 😊

I love ur writing Pragzuuuu & want to see more OS's from u 😳

Edited by sidma_love - 14 years ago

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Veena

@-veena.shona-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

wowwwwwwwww pragzie

jst luvd d part 😃

thnk god u didnt giv it a sad ending 😉

i luvd d way u described sidshi relation 😳

luv des lines wer u described sidshi bonding superb yaaar 👏

"Sidhant and Shilpa realized that in a course of one and half years their feelings towards each other had changed . Sidhant were reluctantly accepted the fact that he had fallen in love with his angel,Shilpa. The next day Sidhant proposed Shilpa and told her that He loves her . Shilpa blushingly told him that she loved him too . Sidhant loved Shilpa and Shilpa loved Sid.Shilpa and Sid were alike in nature so they got along well.Though Sue thought that they both were too immature for each other as all they did was look at each other and burst out laughing for no apparent reason and they fought like little kids. They threw pillows at each other and ran after each other screaming all the way but when their eyes met both of them would fall down laughing . They kept on playing pranks n each other . Sid gave Shilpa roses which on sniffing squirted water on her . Shilpa colored him red with her lipstick while he slept .Various other pranks played kept their relationship playful. There was no tension in their relationship. Sid and Shilpa brought happiness to each other's life . They helped each other survive. They mended each other's broken heart . Finally they both got the one that they deserved the most,true love . "

opposites do attract, but similarities attract more 😳😳

pls write moren pls cont ur previous siddhima ff 😡

dnt 4get to pm me 😛

Veena

Edited by veena_rocks - 14 years ago

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malvika

@monty22

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#96

pragzie baccha........🤗

i knew it u r not going to S & R together............😆 i know how much you love sad endings.....but you tried to make happy ending for all............i m evill kind of person.....😈 i want to see riddhima suffering like hell...........

but anyways my siddy deserve better then farzy maiyya........

you had potrayed last departation of SR scene amazingly......why do i feel you r best at writting sad part..........😆

keep it up !!!!!!!!!!👍🏼

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samreena

@144128

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#97

hey thanx for the PM
sid shilpa part was nice
but i don't like arman
so mere ko acha nahi laga k riddhima us k paas chali gayee😡
sorry for the rude comment
except that i loved every bit of it👏

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Sayani

@-Raindrops-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#98

i like the ending Pragzu. you united Sid and Shilpa......that's really nice, as Ridz definitely didn't deserve Sid.

but u made Ridz a happily married woman...it just didn't go down well with me. i so hate that woman. according to me she should burn in hell fire forever.

apart from that i liked it.

keep writing more FFs and OSs.🤗

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StarshineHues

@StarshineHues

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#99

Awwwwww !! This is over already !! This part was beautifully written, so full of emotions and depth, like you always write. I LOVED that scene where Sid left Riddhima in the light-in many ways, he was the light of her life. And she, right then, recognizes and realizes that. The way you showed her broken heart when he was leaving-you rightly said, it was like a part of her had left with him. You wrote that so beautifully, even I could feel her sadness, and you know what I feel about Riddhima 😆. I love how Sid and Shilpa healed each other, and saved each other. They were all goodness and sunshine, and you showed that beautifully.

Like Niki, the only bit I didn't totally agree with was when Riddhima went back to Armaan, coz her reaction when Sid left was that of the realization that he would always be her knight in shining armour, and that somewhere, she did love him. And after that, going back to Armaan willingly, somewhere it didn't sit right with me. But that said, I do see how she decided that she couldn't be unfair to Sid anymore-but I would've preferred if she'd sufferred alone (yeah, I'm evil that way 😆).

But honestly, I LOVE this OS from the bottom of my heart-you have this rare sensitivity and sensibility that touches me with every word you write. So yeah, I love this, and I love you baby !! 🤗 🤗