sajan ff***love finds its way***#2(last update:33)

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Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

hey

just read the past three parts

sorry am very busy so cant read as fast.....

anyways yeh sab kya hogaya

i wanted to cry throuh all thoes parts

sajan ke beech main itni bari misunderstanding

i know mayank ki fault nahi hai par im hating him right now

i just want my sajan to reunit

please do cont soon

eagerly waiting to see what happens next

love

tanzeel

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Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#162

hey gunjan
awesome part
but very emotional😭
hope everything becomes fine bet sajan
do cont soon
n thanks for the pm

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Sadaf Rizwan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#163

aw...that was a sad but lovely part

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gunjan mariya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

thanks alot frndz for all the appreciation.🤗.its just ur comments that motivate me to write further...i'll deffinately try to continue asap!
love,
gunjan mariya...

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gurpreet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

mindblowing update but it was sooo emotional.....poor sajan....i hope samrat listens to what gunjan has to say.....cont soon

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RICHA

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Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#166

edited my rp on pg 23

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gunjan mariya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#167

thanks alot frndz!🤗
ur comments means alotttttttttt to me..
will try to continue asap!!
love,
gunjan mariya...

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gunjan mariya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#168

here's the update…
part 52..
(gunjan lying on bed just like a dead soul who have nothing to say....mayank enters the room and seeing her state he felt very bad..so he thought to cheer her)
mayank:gunjan dekho main tumharay liye kia laya hoon...
(giving her chocolates)
tumhay chocolates buhat pasand hain na...ye lo have some!
acha chalo main he khilaata hoon...
(tears roll down her cheek..mayank saw that)
mayank:gunjan....
gunjan:oos ne ek baar bhi mera bharosa nai kia mayank...
ek baar oos ne ye nai socha ke main kabhi ooskay saath aisa nai kar sakti..
ek baar...
mayank:gunjan....
gunjan:main jaanti hoon wo mujhse buhat pyaar karta hai...aur wo bhi jaanta hai ke main oos se kitna pyaar karti hoon...
phir kyun mayank....kyun samrat ne mera bharosa nai kia..!
akhir meri galti kia thi mayank....yahi ke main oosay kisi bhi keemat par khona nai chahti thi...
oosay khonay ka darr har pal mujhe sattta raha tha..
kia y meri galti hai???
mayank:galti tumhari nai hai gunjan...
galti hai inn haalat ki...samrat ko galat fehmi hoi hai....jaldi he wo samajh jaye ga gunjan...aur sab theek ho jayega..!
gunjan:nai mayank wo nai samjhay ga!aur abb kuch theek nai hoga...
sab kuch bigarr gaya hai mayank..
maine....
maine oosay kho dia mayank...maine oosay...(she starts crying)
mayank:gunjan plzz ro mat...dekho plzz stop crying..
(and he hugged her...and she cried even more)
mayank's pov:gunjan agar issi tarha roti rahi toh wo beemar parr jaye giii...ye sab meri galti hai...na main mumbai wapis aata...aur na gunjan aur samrat ke beech main koi misunderstanding hoti...aur nupur...
oos bechari ki bhi kia galti hai...yahi ke wo mujhse pyaar karti hai...
maine oos ka bhi dil torr dia...
its all just bcoz of me....all bcoz of me....(and tears starts forming in his eyes)
SAMRAT SITTING IN HIS ROOM...
(his cell phone rings)
samrat:(wipe his tears)heloo
mom:hiii my son....
samrat:oh hiii mom...kaise ho aap?aur dad kaise hain?
mom:mom ke bachay do din se na phone kia na milnay aye....
kahan ho tum log?
samrat:kuch nai maa wo buss thoda busy tha....
mom:acha meri bahu kahan hai...hows she?
samrat:(he dont wana let his family know...)wo...wo bhi theek hai maa...
mom:kahan hai...meri baat toh karwa....
samrat:wo washroom main hai maa...
mom:oh ok...
samrat:dad kaise hain....?
mom:wo bhi theek hain...packing kar rahay hain...!
samrat:packing?dad kahin ja rahay hain?
mom:sirf tere dad nai...main bhi jaa rahi hoon..!
samrat:par kahan maa?
mom:actually tere dad ki meeting thi...toh maine socha main bhi saath thoda ghoom aaon...
samrat:oh..ye toh achi baat hai..kab ja rahay ho aap log?
mom:kal subha...tu aur gunjan airport aao gay...
samrat:subha...ohk...i'll be there...
mom:ok then beta..mujhe thoda packing karna hai main wo kar loon...tum subha time se aajana ok..!
samrat:jee maa...byee...
mom:byeee...
(and he cuts the call)
NEXT MORNING...
(samrat and his parents on airport)
mom:sam tu bhi na...akela he agaya...meri bahu kahan hai?
samrat:mom wo actually ooski tabyat theek nai thi...iss liye maine he oosay mana kia aanay ko...
mom:kiaa...wo theek toh hai na...
samrat:haan maa theek hai bas ooskay sarr main thoda dard tha...
iss liye maine kaha ke thoda rest kar le..
dad:agar tu pehlay bata deta toh hum aatay huye raastay main oos se mil letay...
samrat:its ok dad...aap ki taraf se main he oos se haal chaal pooch loonga..
haan wo keh rahi thi ke aap dono apna khayal rakhna..aur na aanay ke liye sorry bhi keh rahi thi...
mom:awww meri beti...hope she gets well soon..sam tu ooska dehaan rakhna haan...
samrat:jee maa..
dad:i think abb humay chalna chahye...
mom:haan chalo...
(and she huggs sam...tears starts forming in his eyes....then he hugged his dad and said bye...he came out of the airport and started towards his place)
SCENE SHIFTS TO GUNJAN....
(she is sitting on beach,wearing a simple black anarkali suit...in bg song started)
Bichhde abhi to ham bas kal parson,Jioongi main kaise, is haal mein barson(she is sitting there just like a statue)
Maut na aayi teri yaad kyon aayi,Hay lambi judai(as if she can't feel anything)
Chaar dinon ka pyaar ho rabba(the pain is hurting her badly but she can't do anything)
Badi lambi judai, lambi judai(she closes her eyes)
Honthon pe aaye meri jaan duhai(tears started to roll down)
Hay lambi judai(when she tried to wipe her tears)
Chaar dinon ka pyaar ho rabba(her eyes fell on her ring)
Badi lambi judai, lambi judai(tears again started forming in her eyes)

Toote zamaane tere haath nigode, haath nigode(she remembers their engegment)

Dil se dilon ke tune sheeshe tode, sheeshe tode(she cried evenmore)
Hijr ki oonchi, hijr ki oonchi deevaar banaayi(she stands up)
Hay lambi judai(and starts walking)
Chaar dinon ka pyaar ho rabba(tears still rolling down her cheek)
Badi lambi judai, lambi judai(she was all losted..)

Baag ujad gaye, baag ujad gaye khilne se pehle(her eyes fell on a couple)
Panchhi bichhad gaye milne se pehle -2(the guy was continuosly teasing his gf)
Koyal ki kook, koyal ki kook ne hook uthaayi(she remembered moments when samrat teased her)
Hay lambi judai(she sits on her knees and again starts crying)
Chaar dinon ka pyaar ho rabba(she recall some beautiful moments)

Badi lambi judai, lambi judai(more sajan moments)

Honthon pe aaye meri jaan, duhai(all the love scenes)

Hay lambi judai(she closes her eyes and let the pain came out of her eyes)
Chaar dinon ka pyaar ho rabba,Badi lambi judai, lambi judai(she wipes her tears..stands up and starts walking)
(and the song ends gunjan reached home...and mayank saw her condition...her red and swollen eyes..he knew she must have cried alot...)
mayank:gunjan tum kahan gayi thi...u know i was so worried...kam se kam jaanay se pehlay mujhe bata yoh deti..
chalo abb tum ja kar shower lelo...main breakfast laga deta hoon...
gunjan:sorry...mujhe bhook nai hai...tum kha lo...
mayank:but gunjan...
(gunjan left)
mayank's pov:akhir gunjan kab tak yun he samrat ke liye roti rahay gi...
oos insaan ko toh iiski zara si bhi parwa nai hai...par gunjan...wo oos se kitna pyaar karti hai...
mujhe samrat se baat karni hogi...
akhir aise kab tak main chup chaap saara tamaasha dekhta rahoonga....mujhe oos se baat karni hogi..
aaj he....
SCENE SHIFTS TO SAMRAT....
(he is sitting in his room...)
samrat:oos din jo bhi hua ooska baad humari zindagi kitni badal gayi hai...
gunjan....maine socha bhi nai tha ke gunjan mujhe aise dhoka degi....
aur nupur...
wo naajany kahan hai...wo theek toh hai....
oosay abhi call karta hoon...
(he dialed nupur's number)
samrat:hey nupur...
nupur:oh sam...hii..
samrat:kaisi ho?
nupur:kaisi ho sakti hoon samrat..
samrat:............
(he had nothing to say...as they all were suffering equally...)
nupur:sam....
samrat:hmmmm....
nupur:kia hum aaj mil saktay hain....
samrat:ok kab milna hai...??
nupur:main shaam ko aati hoon..ohk...
samrat:hmmm...byeee...
(and she cuts the call)
nupur:main jaanti hoon sam...iss waqt tum bhi ootni he takleef main ho jitni main...
(her cell phone again rings)
nupur:hello...whoose there?
girl:acha toh abb mujhe batana parega ke main kaun hoon...
nupur:im sorry maine aapko pehchana nai...
girl:nupur ki bachhiiiii...main bol rahi hoon...
nupur:kon....?
girl:sheetal yrrrr.....!!
nupur:oh sheetal....hiii kaisi hai yrrr...
(yes thats sheetal...DR SHEETAL...she is mayank's doc and nupur's frnd)
sheetal:main bilkool theek hoon yrr...tu bata tu kaisi hai...
aur karan?hows he?
nupur:theek he hoga...
sheetal:theek he hoga matlab??
nupur:arey chod na ye bata...aaj mujhe kaise yaad kar lia..??
sheetal:arey bas...main mumbai ayi thi toh socha tujhse mil loon...
nupur:ohhh tu mumbai main hai....??
sheetal:hmm....abb jaldi bata mujhe kab aur kahan milegi...?
nupur:tu abhi kahan hai?
sheetal:main airport ke paas jo hotel hai wahan...
nupur:theek hai main tujhe thodi daer main milnay aati hoon..ok..
sheetal:ok see yaaa
nupur:bye
sheetal:byeee...(and she cuts the call)

ok frndz thats it for today...hope u all liked it...
precap:nupur in sajan mansion...she is shockedddd!!!
do comment..😊😊😊
love,
gunjan mariya...

Edited by gunjanmariya - 14 years ago

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KuchBhiMatBol

@KuchBhiMatBol

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#169

hey gunjan!!!!!!! awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update!!!!!

well i am not at all liking the seperate sajan!!!!!!!!!!!

please unhe jaldi milwa do yrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

but this part was beautifully written!!!!!!

loved the song sequence

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gunjan mariya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: RadhikaBhushan
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Dear gunjan,

i have also read this part......

sabse pehle to gussa hu itna short part kyuuu?????????????😡

maar khani haiii kya????😆

well agar tuje teri jaan pyari haiii to

aaj ke baa muje long updates chahiye or wo bhi time par...

n i knw gunjan humari rqst ko avoid nahi karregi ryttttttttttt😉

abt this part.................

omg omg yaar.....

kitni buri haalat thi gunjan ki.....

samrat uspe believe nahi karta or mayank ke paas wo jaana nahi chahti...

bt wo mayank ke sath gayi kyu??????????????????????????????????????????

plz i want to knw more as i knw tune kuch na kuch to accha rakha hoga humare liyeeee

so i cant wait for nxt

n plzzzz mere se aisi umeede mat rakha kar ki me

res jaldi edit karu....

well long cmnt nahi karungiii xms haii u knww

Do cont asap m waiting

Love😉
Radhi...

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lolzz😆 mujhe meri jaan buhat pyaari hai radhi par this hectic schedul yrrr😒....main buhat mushkil se updates ke liye time nikaal paati hoon..sorryyy....and about ur question...wo mayank ke saath iss liye gayi coz she had no other option....she was all alone...and heartbroken toh iss liye when mayank asked her..she did'nt said anything...aur wo ooskay saath chali gayi..
and yup ye toh abhi shurooaat hai...picture abhi baaki hai jaani...lolz😆
keep reading im sure u'll get what u want!
thanks for ur comment...
love,
gunjan mariya...