-truly magical- maaneet ff THREAD 16

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JayaR

@JayaR

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1011

i read this part late last night.....but dint get a chance to comment......

i was crying like anything...... Geet and Maan's conversation truly touched my heart...... but Maan's break down was ultimate.....

the way he was begging..... it was heart wrenching.....

till now he had only lost Geet but after this he has lost MK too.... the only hope for his survival..... though not exactly he has lost them....
but some where he has drifted away....

and as usual mera tube light late Jala..... so father daughter share the same B'Day....

no wonder dono ka gussa saathve aasman mein rehta hai.....

absolutely lovely update muskan.....
hhmmm 3 more to go.....im still counting....

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#1012

For the first time in this separation track, I am angry on Geet and not on Maan.

"he spoke meekly how I am to know it is her bday today?
Geet almost raised her hand to slap him.. who else is supposed to know then?? who else is supposed to know then?? she shook him & pushed him away in disgust..chi..."

I was angry on Geet with these lines. How the hell is he supposed to know MK's birthday when he was not there at all... I cried along with Maan. I felt so sorry for him the first time.

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1013

pls muski update soon........i knw over all maan ka fault hai bt bday ka kaise pata hoga jaise usko school ka pata nahi tha.........he is trying to do whtevr he can do..............his drawback is his anger.............he must control it..........

who is suppose to knw???? geet asked..............bt who is suppose to tell???????? geet u r suppose to tell him............u suffered dis much den let him knw dat...........

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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1014

Change d ffs name to how to make geet suffer. I mean damn yr there is a limit to everything. Nice part though:-)

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#1015

Can we get an update pls

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JayaR

@JayaR

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#1016

see....
all this time i was waiting for an update.....
and when im leaving you have come down to update......

sniff sniff!!!

i dont want to go😭😭..... i want to read this update.....😭😭😭
aarrrhgggghhh.....

anyways....will read it late night and will comment 2mrw....

muskan you better update a happy happy part..... coz my tear bags have dried up becoz of TM's last update........ so wont be able to shed any..... hehehehe....

me waiting.....
yipppeeee after this only 2 more to go.....

im still counting......

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--ANGEL--

@--ANGEL--

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1017

it was so beautifully written.....both mk and maan sad.....the last lines were so beautiful.....now i hope part 150 will be a dhamaka....i want maan to know that mk is his daughter....update soon

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#1018

muskan u wont believe i keep checking if u r updating or not 😃 adat se majboor ho gai hun..........esp for ur FF's..........they r so captivating, interesting, different n excellent..........saw d heading "updating" n came to thnk u..........

all 3 FFs r at such a point dat v cant wait to read more n which ever u update is a treat for us...........thnx dear.........keep updating till things r solved den v wont bother u much.......i mean not everyday 😉 hopefully 😆