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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#191

great update dear
loved it...chalo maan aur geet friends tu ban gaye
now they just have to realize their feeling for each other
update soon

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#192

amazing part

love it

thnaks 4 pm

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mahi.ve

@mahi.ve

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#193

lovely update...con soon

nd thanx 4 the pm

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 14 years ago

#194

Super awesom wow dey r now friends yepi

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nishi

@nishi_I-fian

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#195

wow luved d update...
Btw maan aur marai ek gun mil gyai...xm wali raat padhadnai wali...he he he

Omg dono taraf barabar chingari lagi h...lolz

Plz update soon

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Hafsah Qamar

@c00l_girl

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: geet06
wow luved d update...
Btw maan aur marai ek gun mil gyai...xm wali raat padhadnai wali...he he he

Omg dono taraf barabar chingari lagi h...lolz

Plz update soon

wese meri bhi yehi same habit hai only last day parhna..😆

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Hafsah Qamar

@c00l_girl

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#197

hey friends!! thank u sooo much for pressing the like button.. n thanks for commenting as it means alot to me..🤗
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n thanks to them too who have not written any comment but wrote res..🤣
love u all...❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Edited by dollie16 - 14 years ago

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Hafsah Qamar

@c00l_girl

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#198

hey friends!! im back...😆 thank u sooo much for ur precious comments as they r very precious 2 me..😉 so without wasting ur time, here is the update so read n enjoy:

PART-12
all were going to class.. both maan n geet were smiling n looking at each

other..

Naintara to friends: hey guys wo dekho maan aur geet ko! i think kuch to

chal raha hai..

Dev: han kuch kuch ho raha hai😆

maan n geet were watching their friends whispering..

Maan: tum logo ne kuch kaha kya??

Naintara: nothing..

when they entered the class, romeo ko yaad aya k history ki project report

submit krane ka last day hai..

Romeo: oh no guys!! aj to history ki project report submit krani hai..

all friends were shocked to hear that.. no one had yet started the report..

all friends: (shouted) what????

Romeo: yes guys! sir to kaccha kha jaenge..

Naintara: oh god! ab main kya karoon???

Dev: yar ab kya karenge??

Arjun: sir ka to tujhe pata hai na, kisi ki baat nahi sunte..

Geet: oh babaji! ab

main kya karungi?? babaji! plz koi rasta btao..

Maan: guys! tension lene se kuch nahi ho ga, abi b hamare paas chance

hai, report likhne ki try to kar sakte hain na!

at the sametime, history teacher entered the class..

Geet: oh no! es kharus ko b abi ana tha

Teacher: kisi ne kuch kaha??

Maan: no sir.. geet! tum b na, khud pe control rakho.. tension na lo..

Teacher: students! jaisa k ap sab jante hain k aj project report submit krane

ki last date hai, to jis jis ne b kia hai wo mere table pe rakh de aur jis ne nahi

kia , wo khara ho jaye..

all the friends stood up..

Teacher: mujhe ap logo se yehi umeed thi.. sara din masti karo ge to parhai

k liye time kahan milega!

Romeo: sir! wo wo..

Teacher: wo wo kya?? koi bahana nahi chalega.. aj sham 7 baje tak ka time

hai tum logo k paas, jitna ho sakta hai kar k de do otherwise u will get 0

marks..

Arjun: ok sir..

Romeo: thank u sir..

teacher went away..

Naintara: ab kya karein?? shaam 7 baje tak project kaise complete ho

ga??

Geet: hamare paas to topic b nahi hai..

Dev: ab to bas upar wala hi kuch kar sakta hai..

Maan: guys! dont worry.. kuch na kuch kar hi lenge.. agar hum ne esi tarah

baaton mein time waste kia to ban gayi report..

Arjun: han guys! maan is right.. chalo project start karte hain

they all started writing report.. when they were busy in writing, dev saw time

on his watch..

Dev: guys! its 4o'clock..

Geet: matlab sirf 3 ghante reh gaye, babaji ab kya ho ga??

Maan: geet! pareshan na ho.. ho jaega!

Geet: kaise ho jaega?? mere farishte pura karenge aa k..

Dev: ab guys tum dono es time jhagra matt shuru kar dena..

Naintara: han geet relax ho k kar, tension le gi to kuch b nahi ho ga..

Romeo: han yar! dont worry..

at 6o'clock:

geet was very worried.. maan was watching her tense n wanted to help..

Maan: mera to ho gaya..

Romeo: ho gaya??

Maan: han yar

Naintara: pura kia??

Maan: han yar pura kia.. ab plz guys! c.i.d ki tarah mujh se sawal jawab matt

poocho..

Romeo: ok.. naraz kyun ho re ho

Geet: oh babaji! mera to abi b boht zyada rehta hai, ab kya karoon??

Maan: main help kar doon??

geet started to think..

Maan: kya hua?? help karoon ya nahi??

Geet: (smiling) yeah sure y not!

Romeo: wo dekho guys! maan geet ki assignment banane mein help kar

raha hai..

Dev: jis ne khud kabhi book nahi kholi, wo doosre ki help kar raha hai.. ab to

pakka kuch hai..

Arjun: han yar ab to koi ullu b bta de ga k they love each other..

Dev: but us mein ek problem hai, ullu bechara bol nahi sakta..

everyone started laughing..

maan n geet both looked at each other..

Geet: inko kya hua??

Maan: lagta hai inhen shock lag gaya hai..

geet n maan were laughing.. all noticed them..

Naintara: haye rabba! main sadqe jawan! inhen kahin meri nazar hi na lag

jaye..

itni der mein 7 baj gaye..

Romeo: oh no guys! 7 baj gaye.. jaldi se chalo sab, es se pehle k sir

hamara murder kar dein..

Naintara: han chalo chalo

Dev: maan geet 7 baj gaye, jaldi karo es se pehle k sir aa jaen..

Geet: oh babaji! bas ye assignment sir ko achi lage..

Maan: dont worry! zaroor lagegi.. tum ne itni mehnat jo ki hai..

Geet: i hope so..

they reached staff room..

Arjun: sir! may we come in??

Teacher: yes. t tum logo ko yaad aa gaya, main to samjha k tum log phir

kahin masti karne chale gaye ho ge..

Naintara: sir! sorry humein ane mein der ho gayi but hum sab ne reports

complete kar li hain..

Teacher: mujh pe koi ehsan nahi kia..

Romeo: sir plz sorry.. plz hamari assignments check kar lein..

all friends to teacher: (forcing) sir plzzz...

Teacher: ok. ok.. but next time se ye nahi hona chahiye..

Geet: thank u sir!

thats all for now.. friendz!! dont forget to press the like button n also do comments.. if u wanna give some suggestions, u r most welcome..😊
thanks,
hafsah

Edited by dollie16 - 14 years ago