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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Katie, I just finished reading the last few updates and they were all SUPERB!!!!! I really missed reading ur ff and others too... For now I can just say that I loved all the updates, I will tell u more after the next one!!! ;)
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Nidhi :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey guys abhaya n piya getting married in pyek



time to celebrate


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Posted: 14 years ago
pleas give us update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mijanur

pleas give us update soon



im so sorry.. i had been a lil busy with the starting of college and stuff.. i l update tomo.. by 6..!!!! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey guys im so sorry that i didnt update for a while.. i was kinda busy but well i am planning to give you guys a double update... wel should i give or not.?!? 😕


Chapter 23


She breathed a sigh of relief, as she sat down on one of the vacant seats of the bus.. the seat beside her was vacant.. so she put down her luggage next to her.. still catching her breath.. she looked out at the window.. as the green locket was hnging on her neck.. and the silver necklace painted with blood was clutched tightly in her hand.. going back to her memories...


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Piya was completely angry with herself and at Abhay.. how could he say that.. did he really mean what he said..? What had I done wrong.? Was I ever rude.? Why me.? she was filled with feeling of frustration, dissapointment, rage and mainly pain..! She could feel her feeling suffocate her.. making it hard to breathe.. her heart beat never settled, beating crazily.. her eyes sliding of the tears of pain.. she sat on the bed.. she had reached the hostel somehow balancing her herself. She never felt this heavy before.. she was luggaged with her emotions which were not intending to leave soon.. her heart was sinking, it felt like as though some one had placed a huge stone right down at her heart. Trying to calm herself.. she snuggled to the bed grabbing her bedsheet, closing her eyes.. she tried to ease the pain.. it took some time, after an hour or so.. she was peacefully sleeping.. snoring cutely and tugging her bedsheet closer to her face. Relief washed his face as he intently watched his angel sleep with no worries at all.. it was so calm.. he knew he hurt.. he knew he hurt her bad.. but he ws just trying to save from any disasters.. he very well knew her company would bring a million smiles across his face.. enough to illuminate the entire universe.. but it was not worth it.. when he will bring about great danger to her... she was innocent.. she was sweet.. it was not neccesary in her life.. he wanted her to distance herself from him.. if hurting piya for a while was the only path.. he would nt mind doin it..!! But it was extremely painful to watch her cry because of him.. no.. no.!! It would be too much for him to handle.. his heart would always melt whenever he watched her.. her laugh.. her smile.. her beauty.. ah.. breathtaking.! 'Wait a minute what am i doing.? narrating poetry again.. my mind is blocked with nonsense.. argh' he thought as ran the way back home..
The next morning.. Piya's eyes were welcomed by the bright sunshine piercing through the window.. she streched her arms wide.. shaking off her sleepyness yawning.! She sat upright on her bed, rubbing her swollen eyes.. which were looking tired due to the excessive crying she performed last night.!! She felt stupid for crying.. she hated the feeling of someone able to control her emotions.. make her sad.. no she should not be sad.. so she tried very hard.. to brush away all the bad memories of last night. Sighing loudly, she got out of bed and dragged herself to the washroom.. after an hour or so.. she was ready for college.
The college was well very quiet.. it was 8 am.. wel she was early.. she planned on spending some time in the library, reading some books.. to ward off all the painful thoughts. She reached the library, she put down her hand bag.. mumbling a song on her mouth.. she very happily ran to the ficton centre and started searching for some books which interests her.. her eyes popped open, she went to a state of shock.. her heart just stopped for a whole 3 seconds.. she just saw - Breaking Dawn book on the shelf.. and she was like.. "omg.. omg.. omg.. i cant believe it.. i was waiting for this book more than Raj waited for his Simran, i was more addicted to this series than tracker to her funny flowers on her head, i loved this book more than Abhay.." she bit her tongue on her mistake.. and hit her head.. " Argh.. what's wrong with me..? You knw what i dont care.. i have this book and that is all that matters.. yippee.." she said jumping her way back to the table.. flipped the pages happily and was intently reading the book..
"Wow..!" a voice hummed in the library which made Piya jerk, she realised whom that voice belonged to and just sulked in her seat.. continuing her intent reading wit 'i love this book more than heaven' expression on her face.. "How can you be so strong Piya.?", the voice said again coming into light.. and sitting across her. "Look Abhay.. i have nothing to talk to you..!" she said in determined voice.. she was in no way wanted to fall prey by his words.. cause if she did, she would just be whipped again.. so no point.! "Piya.. please, listen to me.. im sorry..!" he said hesitently.. with guilt spread across his godly features.. "Ok fine.!" she said with no excitement at all.. she was completely absorbed into the book.. Abhay was twisting his mouth in so many angles that he can even beat a protracter.. he pulled that book and threw it to the ground.! "This book is not more important to you than me..!" he said in gritted teeth.. stamping the book in the process.. which made piya burst in anger.. she clenched her fists trying to control her anger.. but she couldnt.. she went right upto him.. she punched him hard on the gut which made Abhay choke out air.. "Oww that hurts.!" he said holding his stomach.. with a baby face.. "Wel that's what you get for puttin the book down.. you know its not enough.. you should have this too.." she said raising her hand to place another hard punch on his stomach.. but he caught her hand mid air.. twisted it and brought her hand on her back.. she struggled with another hand.. hitting him on the chest.. "Leave me.. u moron.!!" she said in between her struggles, Abhay was twisting her wrist tightly.. which quickly developed rashes on her soft skin.. she yelped in pain.. "Oh God.. Abhay.. ok ok i wil do what you want me too.. i sware.." she said in the middle of her hoarse screams.. Hearing this Abhay scanned her eyes for a moment.. and then left her.. "ok.. fine.. i want you to forgive me..".. he was surprised when he was answered by a mocking laugh.. "Wow Abhay wow.. seriously.. i dont get u.. first you hurt me and then u ask for forgiveness.. n repeat the process a 100 times.. n u expect me to forgive you every single time.. what do u really think of me anyway..? Maybe you dont have the heart to feel.. to feel the hurt.. but i do.. and it hurts Abhay.. i try to know more about you.. help you out.. maybe in the process irritate you.. but in the end.. i really care for you.. but when my care for you is returned by your torturous words.. i feel like someone has stabbed right through my chest.. i sware you have the lamest mood swings..!" she said hesistantly, she was not very comfortable in saying that she was INDEED hurt.. she did not want to accept..
She bent down and took the book.. as Abhay was frozen hearing what Piya had to say.. reality had struck him.. it was always his fault.. and is now also.! She dusted the book, giving an icy glare at Abhay, she turned to leave.. "Wait.!!" he said abruptly without consious.. Piya stopped in her tracks and looked back..



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'Wake up in the morning feeling like P Diddy.. grab my glasses' her phone kept buzzing alerting Piya her caller... Piya recieved her call.. her eyes were swoopy with tiredness with a combo of sleep.. "Hello..!" she said weakly..







Wel guys tell me what you think of the update and if you like it.. press the "like" button..!!! thnks..!!! and tell me whther i should update now or not.??!

Edited by katiehiwatari - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
what kind of question is that.? of cource u shud update and update real fast, or the mystery will kill us.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

what kind of question is that.? of cource u shud update and update real fast, or the mystery will kill us.



wel lol.. okiee..!!! updating..!
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Posted: 14 years ago

that was a gr8 update..

continue soon :)

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Chapter 24


'Wake up in the morning feeling like P Diddy.. grab my glasses' her phone kept buzzing alerting Piya her caller... Piya recieved her call.. her eyes were swoopy with tiredness with a combo of sleep.. "Hello..!" she said weakly.. "Piya.. Piya.. are you okay..? What happened to you.. Why are you sounding so weak..? Piya answer me.. Piya Piya..".. "Arrey.. aise Shatabdhi express mein jaathe ho tho.. mein kya karoon.. bolne ka maukha hi nahi diya..!! mein teek hu Abhay... just a little tired that's al.. what about you..? where are you..?" she said in her edgy sleepy voice.. "Thank god ur fine.. Mom told that she sensed the presence of a wolf and also heard a howl of a werewolf.. so i was worried if any trouble would come to my angel.. you are ok na.?!" he asked again worried.. 'kya kahoon Abhay.. mein to uski khatharnak daantho se bach bachke nikli hoon..' she thought.. "Ya.. im fine.. tum khamokha pareshaan ho jaathe ho.." she said in the most happiest voice possible.. "Tum se itna pyaar jo kartha hu.. i love u a lot.. so of course i get worried baby..!" he said.. in whispers... "Ah.. Abhay why the hell are you whispering.?", she asked confused... "Chaand is right next to me.. i dont want him to listen me telling all the koochi koo stuff.. anyway he is making weird faces at me from that time.." he said like a cute innocent baby.. "Hahahahaha.. he is.. haha.. making weird faces cause he did hear you.. even if you whisper he can hear you Abhay.. remember..!?" she said in the middle of her soft laughs.. she was careful not to wake anyone up in the bus.. Abhay hit his head.. 'Oh man.. of course he can hear me.. living with humans.. i ve lost it.!!' he thought seeing Chand and gave his daddy a big smile showing his teeth.. a funny smile.. wel let us say that Chand was not at all entertained by Abhay's lovey dovey stuff... he groaned thinking 'kids.!!! God..!!'..
Abhay continued.. "Hey we are just 134 km away from Fatepur sikri cool na..?!" he said excitedly.. "Hmm ya.. wow.. u covered a lot of distance in the night.. good..!!!".. "Yup.. i know.. hmmm thn.. you getting ready to college huh.?" he asked still excitement flowing in his words.. "Ha.. yes.. Abhay.. i have to go to the college now.. bye ok..!!" she replied wittily so that he wouldnt get doubt of any sort.. "Hanging up so fast.>?!" he mumbled.. "My baby.. i have to college ra.. so gotto go ok..".. "Hmmm okiee.. ok give a kiss through the phone and then hang up.." he said winking.. and smiling to himself.. as he turned around he met the his father who had a disgusted look plastered across his face.. 'yikes..!!' Abhay thought thinking what his daddy must have thought.. where as Piya was blushing like hell.. "Abhay..." she whispered.. "Do it fast.. dad is giving me the strangest looks...!!" he said whispering.. "Haha.. fine... 'muah'.." she said shyly.. she was so embarressed and feeling awkward.. it was the first time she had ever done anythin like this.. "Abhay u ther..?" she asked gulping in her shyness.. " Yup.. but that kiss has gotten me flying..!!" he said dreamily.. looking in the sky as he lowered his gaze down to the earth.. he looked beside him to find Chand's eyes popped open, fist tightened.. mouth twisted, nostrils flared and finally head exploded bearing 'why the bloody hell am i stuck here..?' look stuck to his pale face.. Abhay just blinked at Chand's expression,and was staring at his features, Abhay continued to look by pouting his mouth.. "Arghhh... what the heck is wrong with you Abhay.. first you speak all lovey dovey stuff like angel.. love.. watever crap.. and then you ask her to kiss u..??! kiss u through the phone.. and then you blink at me with the most innocent expression on earth.. look i know i m an old man.. but this is disgusting..!!!" Chand said it all in one breath.. with his face cringed... "Ah.. hehehahah.. wel dad.. lol.. omg..!! Sorry..!!"Abhay continued to laugh holding his stomach.. Piya who heard the whole Ramayan also was laughin.. softly of course.. "Ok.. Abhay.. thanks for making my day.. by yur call and do tel Chand uncle a big thanks for the awesome joke..!!" she said drowning in the laughter.. on the other side Abhay was roaring with laughter.. by Piya's words.. and Chand did hear Piya.. and he was telling himself.. "They are kids.. breathe in.. breathe out.. i have a good sense of humor.. breathe in.. breathe out.. when my irrtation is a joke.. breathe in breathe out..!" he continued keeping a stone face.. slightly turned towards the right.. it was completely hilarious.. "Ermm.. Piya..!" he saidly softed swallowing his laugh.. "Ahuh.. *cough*.. "Piya said on the other side.. "Then any news in college..?" he asked trying to distract himself.. "Ahem.. i have to go to college Abhay.. im getting late.. msg me okiee..!!" she said cutting the phone.. Abhay smiled placing the phone in the pocket.. turning towards Chand.. "Lets go Dad..!" he said..



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"Wait..!!" Abhay called out to her.. taking in a deep breath Piya stopped in her tracks clenching the ficiton book in her hand, "What now..?




ok as promised... double update.. will update next on tuesday.. thnks guys pls 'like' both and comment on both.. thnks..!!!
Edited by katiehiwatari - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...
plz do cont soon...

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