Destiny's Play-Part XLVII,XLVIII (Pg 131,140)-10/3 - Page 19

Awwwww. I hope Maan understands that she does mean bad. And what is wrong is she tries to pitch in. It is not wrong for a girl to have a job and a career. So is it Maan's contention that Manju works because Venkat is unable to provide well for their family?

Nice update plssssssssssss continue soon,

Really liked the fact that you touched upon the awkwardness and clumsiness that comes with first time intimacy..simplicity and honesty are the hallmarks of your writing

opti di awesome finally they became one loved t... maan slept in the auditorium... di water playing the cupid for maaneet here

Originally posted by: Opti

What has being married got to do with your blushing?😆 Only unmarried ones are entitled to blushes, are they? Will try to post another update tonight. Am slightly better but the cold is still heavy. I may not have to work much on redoing the next update so I think I can manage it.

What I meant was I shudn't get so affected but....😆.....Nah....I still blush red when I see intimate scenes on TV or read about them in books and my hubby loves to tease me abt it...and then I turn ☺️....😆😆.....

Will look forward to your next update....😊...BUt do take care dear....🤗

last two parts were amazing....bt i wonder if maan has really lost his job.....i hope not.......

nice update

Hmmm...Sad but interesting.....The question is why did Maan lose the job in which he was doing so well??? I think you will answer that in the next update....🤔

Maan's reaction to Geet's mention of the job offer when he himself was unemployed was a typical male reaction....

Men always feel that they have to be the providers and protectors of their families...they feel complete when they work and it gives them self-confidence....and when this is taken away from them ....they feel deprived and get irritated very fast....Even in this day and age this is true as this is the basic characteristic of men. Its in their DNA.....😆

And Maan's reaction was understandable coz he has always been insecure and has always felt that he has not been able to provide well for Geet and now he is jobless and she comes and says that she got a job offer...it hit him where it hurt the most and that's why the knee-jerk reaction....

Poor Geet unaware of what has happened inadvertently poured salt on his already festering wound....But I am sure she will apply the salve to heal his wound and his ego in the next update and Maan too will understand her POV and will support her in her decision to work....

I hate Mrs. Shukla....I know so many women like her....😡...I hate her and them...😡

Sorry for rambling on your thread....😆...

Lovely update....And I love how you outline each of the character in this story with so much detail....👏