Destiny's Play-Part XLVII,XLVIII (Pg 131,140)-10/3

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Opti

@Opti

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: dia_ditz
"I should warn Maan that however sweet his wife may be, he still can't go around chewing her up," she joked.🤣
wonderful update..........loved it!!!

Thanks dia. Manju can be very mischievous in her comments.

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

LOVED IT ! LOVED IT ! LOVED IT!

👏

Do CONTINUE.😳

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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Their is nothin pure n divine when 2 people bound wit unbreakable bond of marriage completly surrendr n remove all their barriers bet them n u hv amazingly pen down ths whole passionate moment.

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Opti

@Opti

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: monikaseth
maan sleep at auditorium hahahahah wow they become one geet and maan deserved this happiness after long wait ...glad to see them happy thank you so much for this part and pm..

Maan does not like ghazals. He took her there only because she loved music. Yes, they became one and are very happy now. Thanks monika.

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Opti

Maan does not like ghazals. He took her there only because she loved music. Yes, they became one and are very happy now. Thanks monika.

I want to thank you for this sweet FF and all your great work ..you are brilliant writer dear👏👏👏👏👏

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Opti

@Opti

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: panchjun5
OMG....Opti...That was a hot and passion-filled update...I'm still fannng myself after reading it....And my face looks like ☺️.....and I'm married for crying out loud.....😆...

Waiting eagerly for your next update.....Hope you are feeling better....Get Well Soon....🤗

What has being married got to do with your blushing?😆 Only unmarried ones are entitled to blushes, are they? Will try to post another update tonight. Am slightly better but the cold is still heavy. I may not have to work much on redoing the next update so I think I can manage it.