Journey of life Mayur wedding Climax

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Journey of life Part 1

Vasundara:
Was a good singer.Due to health problems instead of her,its her daughter Kesar who takes music classes for students now.Her husband Gopal left her long ago.Nobody knows about his whereabouts.


Kesar:She is a calm lady who is Vasundara's eldest daughter.She is a good singer and takes music classes.Her husband Shakti left her for another lady.

Geet:She is Vasundara's second daughter.She is a good dancer.She is a dance student.

Mauli:She is the youngest daughter of Vasundara.She is physically handicapped.Her legs are weak.

Though they belong to the family of artists they suffer from poverty.They have debt.

Part 1

Geet arrives home.
She is irritated by Kesar's music class.
Vas:Why are you irritated?
G:These students never pay fees properly.Still she takes classes for them.
Mauli:Why are you angry with the poor students Geet di?
V:Though Mauli is sick she understand things.Music is not only to make money.You mus understand that.
G:I feel upset.That's why i said like that.For how long can we live like this?
Kesar hears it.
She:Children..today's class is over.You all can go back.
They go.
Kesar goes near them:We can't blame Geet.We need money for Mauli's opearation.
Mauli's tears fall down.
M:Don't worry about me.I don't want any opearation.I'm happy with what i have.
G:No,that's not enough.My classes will get over soon.I will join some insititution as a dance teacher.With the money i get i will conduct your opearation.You should walk like us.I will not let your life destroy.
M:But our debt...?
G:I have a solution.
V:What solution?
G:I'm sorry.Without consulting you all i did something.
All are shocked.
V:What did you do?
G:There was a dance test in our college.I and Purva got selected to do dance programmes outside.I thought twice to accept the offer.Today the programme organisers will come.I will sign the contract.I will get advance.After doing the show i will get more money.We can get rid of our debt slowly.Did i do anything wrong?
V:You are not wrong.
Geet is relieved.
V:I will be happy if you do programmes outside and grow as a famous dancer.But we don't know the programme organisers are.
G:Don't you know me?I enquired about them before taking the decision.Don't try to make me change my decision.
Nobody said anything.
G:Today i saw Shoba.The vamp who snatched your husband from you.
All are shocked.
G:I did'nt slap her.I controlled myself.I don't know why Shakti jeeju left kesar di for her.She is not as beautiful as Kesar di.Her voice is not as sweet as Kesar di's.
Kesar's eyes become wet:We can't blame Shoba alone.Shakti knows how to attract women.He attracted me with his tongue.Only Shoba can adjust with him.She supports him always.


G:Shakti jeeju should have only one wife.That should be Kesar di.
K:No,i don't want to live with him.He had a lot of bad habits.I tried to change him.But there was no use.He brought Shaba home.So i threw my mangalsuthra on him and left the house.I could'nt adjust there anymore.Though we are divorced i don't want to live with him anymore.

G:I liked your strong nature.But you should not be confined to this house.You should grow as a singer.You should atleast work as a music teacher in an institution.You should do a lot of shows.

Geet is dancing in her room.Mauli is deeply immersed in her dance.
She wanted to learn dance from Geet.But fate was cruel to her.Her legs lost the strength to dance.
M:Di...can i wear your anklet?
Geet gives her the anklet:You wear it.In future you will be able to wear it and dance.
Mauli hugs the anklet and cries.Geet becomes upset.


The owner of the house Shakunthala visits them.
Vasundara hands over the money to her.
V:Geet got a dance show.She got advance.
S:Why should Geet do shows?An artist has got a bad image in the society.This family's name will be defamed.
Geet comes out of her room with anger:If so i will leave this house with others.Because of me you won't have any problem.You don't want an artist to live in your house.Right?I don't think that all artists are bad.
V:Geet...stop it.Talk with respect to elders.
S:Don't shout at Geet.I'm not angry.
Geet goes inside.
S:I know you all very well.Geet won't suffer like your other daughters.She will get a good proposal.Because she is the most beautiful among the three daughters.

Dance show..
Geet and Purva dance.Geet looks stunning in her blue costume.Her dance movements attract everyone



Vasundara sheds tears in her room.All her daughters are with her.
G:You are thinking of our dad.Right?If you miss him so much why did you both split?
V:We got married at a very young age.We kept fighting with each other.When all the misunderstandings got over it was too late.He left us with our daughter Nupur.
M:Nupur..?
V:Yes.My third daughter.Still i wait for their come back.
She weeps.Geet and Kesar hug her.

Another house...
A beautiful slim girl enters that house.A cruel lady named Chandrika shouts at her:Where were you?Were you chatting with someone?
N:I'm on time aunty.Then why are you angry?
Chandrika's husband Shekhar:Why are you shouting at Nupur unnecessarily?
Chandrika looks at Nupur.She is looking down as she does'nt want to see Chandrika's angry expressions.

C:Nupur..go to kitchen and finish the pending work.
She goes to the kitchen.
S:Why are you always make her work?
C:Who is she to you?Why are you so bothere about her?She is just the daughter of a man who stayed in our rented house.That man Gopal died.Then why are you making her stay here?Do you know what people are talking about us?
S:Yes,i know.All the gossip makers will shut their mouth with Nupur's and our son Mayank's wedding.
Their daughter Komal comes there hearing it:That's really good.I'm looking forward to their wedding.
C:If they get married you may not even get a good proposal.
Komal gets angry:Oh!Just stop it mom.Don't irritate me by talking about my wedding.I'm too young to get married.I want Mayank bhayya and Nupur to get married.That's it.
C:Why are you sending Nupur for studies?She should stop her studies.We should send her back to her mother.We will search for them.
S:Chandrika!Nupur is like my daughter.I don't want her to leave this house.
C:Nonsense!I don't want her here.
She goes inside.Shekhar and Komal are upset.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good start do continue soon n thanks for the pm
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nice start.. looks interesting.. continue soon n thanx a lot for the pm...
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Hey dear
very beautiful start
really interesting
i loved the story line and i hate chandrika
waiting for boys entry
so cont it.
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very beautiful start
really interesting
do cont soon
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wowwwwwwww nice start like d different images of all d lead heriones its totallllyyyyyy different frm wt thy hv in their shows
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very nice n interesting story
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love it interesting pls do cont soonnnnnn pls do pm me
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Hi, Looks pretty coll. Whta is your plan dear? to bring all the elad charecters of TV seriels together in one FF? That would be nice. BUt poor lady Vasundara is waiting for her husband and daughter to return, but sad part is her husband is dead!!!!!!!!😭😭😭😭 but please tell me Nupur is Gopal's adopted daughter and her father is still alive somewhere.........
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Interesting one.... Thanx for the pm

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