A Mistake Of Our Life - Sajan SS... updt pg60

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

wow awsome upate

on one hand i feel sad for sajan

but on the other hand i feel happy causs sanu wont get married and sajan will 😊

do continue soon im waiting for next part

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gunjan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

Hey Radhii Lovely and Fabulous update👏👏........Each scene from Sanur scenes,Sam thoughts,Mom-son convo,Sajan scenes was well written....Atleast Sam accepts that he has betrayed nupur.and now after talk with his Mom sam has realised he is doing wrong with both Gunjan n Nupur....I loved this Mom n Son conversation....I feel Samrat mom she will realise the truth soon...Wow! All my guesses about further story line is turning correct😉.....Gunjan is pregnant --Well I had already guessed so I am not surprised😉.....I can Guess Whats Going 2 happen Next Sajan Marriage Right Radhii😉.....Well lets see whether what I have guessed about future story turns right or not😉.....So DO update soon n Thanks 4 Pm ....................

Love Gunjan😊😊...............

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kritika

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Sam will marry gunji...
what will be the reaction of sams parents, nupsi and her parents & benji...
plz coma vala sceret bhi jaldi revel karo...
cont asap.....

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

hey frnds here is the nxt part of this ss...
well i dont knw ye part aap ko kaisa lagega.. aaj mera
mood thik nahi haii ..fir bhi meine ye part likha..
hope u like it... n bas **fingure crossed**
plzz bear with my this boring part...
Anji diii i updateddd hope u r happy nw...

n n thnks to all my frnds who like my this ss...

PART 4

sajan were in car nw...samrat was driving car n gunjan
was sitting beside him...she was crying...samrat again
n again looked at her...
S:gunjan me tume ghar pe drop kar deta hu...
bt gunjan was lost in her thoughts...
S(in mind):kya beet rahi hogi is pe...??? lagta haii muje
ab gunjan se humari shaadi ke bareme baat karni hi hogi..
samrat silently drove car...they reached to gunjan's house..
n samrat stoped the car.. gunjan looked up n saw her
home...n looked at samrat...
G:samrat tum muje ghar kyu laaye ho... hume office jaana
haii waha bahut kaam haiii...
S:andar chalo...
gunjan saw his face n didnt argue.. as she knew he is in
nt mood to argue...samrat came out of care n shut the
door n went to her side.. n opened the door of her side
...gunjan silently came out n samrat shut the door...
watch man opened the main gate seeing gunjan n wondering
she was nt at home...strange... both silently walked in.
they entered n saw benji was talking on phone...
gunjan was scared wat she said to him... benji turned
n saw them..
B:i will call u bbye n cut the call...
B:are aap log diii aap is waqt ghar pe ??? ye to chamatkar
ho gayaaa... benji laughed... n sw their faces...
n felt sumthing serious...benji went to gunjan...
B:di aap ki tabiyat to thik haii na kuch hua to nahi???
he checked her forhead...gunjan scared.. n samrat saw her.
G:nahi benji mein thik hu...
S:benji wo tumhari diii ko na sir me thoda dard ho raha
tha.. is liye meine socha ki wo drive nahi kar paayegi
to mein chhod ne chala aaya...
B:dii aap bhi na itna kaaam karti hoo ab aap rest karo
chalo... n sam thnks sam...
S:thnks kaisa...
B:ohkk chalo ab andar...
they went to gunjan's room...
n gunjan sat on her bed... benji askd servent for juce..
G:benji mein thik hu...
B:muje pata haiii diii is liye aap abhi ghar aayi haii..
n gunjan n samrat looked at each other...
n put his mobile on bed.. n made her drink juce...
G:benji mere sir me thoda dard haiii.. abhi rest karungi
to thik ho jaaungi...
B:accha thik haii aap rest karo.. mein chalta hu aaj meri
class haii...
G:ok bbye.. n smiled...
B:bbye dii bbye sam...
S:bbye n samrat too smiled...
n benji left the room...
G:samrat aaj nahi to kal benji ko pata chal hi jaayega
ki mein pregnanat hu...
S:ddekho gunjan... n they heard a voice pregnant...
they turned n saw benji...
G:benji... gunjan was socked she thought benji had left.
benji came in n went to them...
B:abhi aap ne kya bola dii aap pregnant ho????
tears were started to fell frm her eyes...
n she was scaring... n samrat was also socked n didnt
knw wat to do...
G:nahi benji wo.. benji..
benji went to her n sat beside her.. facing her...
n saw her scaring face... she was scaring n sweating...
B:mein apna mobile lene aaya tha aur meine suna aap sam
se keh rahi thi ki muje aaj nahi to kal pata chal hi
jaayega ki aap pregnant ho... dii ye...
gunjan couldnt met her eyes with him...
n benji understood... n totally socked to hell...
first he didnt believe on his ear...
B:diii aap pregnant ho???... asked in hard tone...
G:benji wo main.. benji ...
B:aap pregnant ho ya nahi...???? asked angrily..
S:benji tum aise kaise baat kar rahe ho...
B:ek minute sam mein dii se baat kar raha hu...
diii jawab do di...
nw gunjan totally scared... she couldnt utter a word...
B:jawab do diii... he raised his voice
fully... n samrat saw gunjan's condition...
S:haa wo pregnant haiii...maa banne wali haii wo...
he said in angry tone... n gunjan cried even more...
B:kyaa???????? par kaise????? diii aap bataoo...
aap ki to shaadi nahi huyi aap pregnant kaise ho sakti
ho...
G:benji wo...n was crying n crying...
B:god damn it benji ke aage kuch to bolo... kiska
baccha haii ye.. aap pregnant kaise huyi... kyunki
aap ki abhi tak shaaadi huyi hai...
S:benji tume gunjan par kyu chilla rahe ho...
B:to aur kya karu sam dii kuch bol nahi rahi haii...
sirf ro ye jaa rahi haii...kiska baccha haii ye.???
kyu pregnant huyi ye...???kuch nahi bol rahi haii wo...
S:wo mera baccha haiii benji... said without raising
his voice...benji again hell socked...
n gunjan's condition omg wt so say... totally broken..
B:tumhara baccha??? he asked confusingly...
S:haa gunjan is pregnant of my child.. mera baccha pal
raha haiii uske andar...
n benji became angry... as he knw abt samrat's love...
B:matlab ki tune meri diii ke sath n held him frm his
collor... n gunjan scared.. she stood upp ..
G:nahi benji isme samrat ki koi galti nahi haii...
benji meri baat suno ...
benji left his coller...
B:par dii samrat ne abhi bola ki ye baccha uska haii...
G:haa ye baccha samrat kaa hi haii... n nw again broke...
B:par dii samrat to... before he could complete his
sentence..
S:benji gunjan ko rest karne do tum chalo mere sath
mein tume bata ta hu...
benji was really angry... as he knw samrat loved nupur
n nw he his father of her sister's child...
Benji left the room in anger..
S:gunjan tum yaha rest karo main benji se baat karta hu..
G:par samrat wo bahut gusse me haii ...
S:janta hu meein uske gusse ko aur usko bhi... tum
fikar mat karo mein use baat karta hu aur wo tumse
gussa bhi nahi hoga... i promise main sab thik kar duga.
gunjan took medicine n layed on bed n crying...
samrat came out of room... n saw benji was sitting
there...
S:benji...
B:muje sach bataao sam... tum to nupur se pyar karte the
na.. to fir meri dii ke sath kaise...
S:benji wo sab humari galti ki wajase hua haii...
B:Galti???
S:haa galti A Mistake Of Our Life...
jab hum london gaye the...
n told everything...
us raat nashe ki wajase gunjan ne aur meine wo galti
kardi... aur us ki wajase aaj wo pregnant haii..aur
is liye wo baccha mera haiii...
benji was hell socked...
B:galti kardii samrat tum to nupur se pyar karte the na..
aur to fir kaise galti kar di tumne...
nw samrat was crying...
S:mujse wo galti ho gayi benji... hum doni main se koi
ye nahi chahta tha... par humse ho gaya...
B:sam galti ho gayi... tum jante ho iska asar kitna
hoga.. meri dii par kya beete gi...tumto nupur se shaadi
karke apni zindgi jee loge par meri dii kya karegi
samrattt?????????
S:main gunjan se shaadi karna chahta hu...
benji again socked...
B:samrat.. tum dii se...
S:haa benji mein gunjan ko aur humare bacche ko unke
saare hakk dena chahta hu...
B:aur pyar ka kya samrat.. wo to tum nupur se karte ho..
S:wo muje nahi pata ki mein ye kaise kar paaungiii..
par mein gunjan aur hamare bacche ko har khushi dunga..
saare hakk.. sab kuch dunga... aur py...aur un par
koi aach nahi aane dunga...plzzz benji muje maaf kardo.
plzzz... n he folded his hands...
nw benji calemed...he n went to him n gv him warm hug..
as benji knw samrat needed it...
B:par samrat agar tum dii se shaadi karoge to.. nupur
ko kya kahoge??
S:abhi sirf muje gunjan or apne bacche ke bareme sochna
haii or kuch nahi...
benji was sumhow happy on hearing these...
bt then again serious..
B:tumne dii se baat ki...???
S:nahi ki haii...or tum nupur ke baareme use mat
batana.. main use bata dunga...
B:to chalo use baat karo.. kyunki mein tum dono ki
shaadi jald se jald chahta hu... taaki kisi ko bhi pata
na chale ki dii shaadi se pehle...or thik haii mein
nahi bataunga... par meri dii ko us wajase..
S:aisa kuch nahi hoga... hum aaj shaam hi shaadi kar
lenge...
B:dii se baat karte haii...
n they went to room...n saw her crying silently...
n gunjan saw both of them...
G:benji wo bas hume galti ho gayi thi ...
benji went to her n hugged her..
B:bas dii ab or nahi.. wo sirf ek galti thi... me us
galti se nafrat karta hu aap ko nahi...
n they broke the hug...
samrat also came to them...
S:gunjan wo... gunjan mein ..gunjan mein tumse shaadi
karna chahta hu...
again gunjan socked... suddenly... bt she knw the
fact...
G:par samrat hum..
S:gunjan hume shaadi karni hogi...ise pehle ki tum par
ya humare bacche par ungli uthe...
G:samrat... n looked at benji...
S:benji maan gaya haiii gunjan... n gunjan felt relief.
B:dii mein chahta hu ki aap dono ki shaadi ho jaaye..
S:to bolo gunjan shaadi karogi mujse...
n gunjan nodded... she had to her her child...
B:thik haii mein mandir me pandit ji ke paas taiyari
karvata hu... sam tum dii ko le kar aa jana...
G:par benji mein...
B:aap ki shaadi haii diii taiyar ho jaao...
n left the room...
S:tum taiyar ho jaao mein thodi der me tume le ne aata hu.
G:samrat hum kuch...
S:kuch galat nahi kar rahe haii... ye sab sirf hum apne
bacche ke liye kar rahe haii... aur is shaadi ke baad
sab thik ho jayega...tum taiyar ho jaao...
n samrat left the room...
n gunjan went to washroom.. n washed her face...
n came out n wear simple red langa having light work..
she was being ready..
G(in mind):apne bacche ke liye muje ye sab karna hoga..
uske hakk ke liye.. agar maine aisa nahi kiya to use
pita ka pyar kabhi nahi milega... use mere pyar ke sath
sath samrat ke pyar ki bhi jarurat haii.. aur mein samrat
ko aur uske bacche ko ek dusre se dur nahi rakh sakti..
ye shaadi karni hogi.. jitna mera hakk haii is bacche
par utna hi samrat ka haii... aur agar wo ye hakk mang
raha haii to muje dena hoga... aur mein bhi to yahi
chahti hu ki mere bacche ko uske saare hakk mile...
n heard sound of door... n saw samrat there...
samrat looked at her ...n saw a beauty in red...
for sum moments samrat memorised.. bt soon come to
his sense...gunjan saw him in benji's simple kurta...
both came out silently.. n seated in car...
n soon reached to mandir.. n saw pandit ji n benji was
waiting for them... both were silent... both sat n
ritual started... pandit ji chatting mantras...
P:ek dusre ko jay mala pehna do...
n they did dess...
then they sad n benji did gadhbandhan n
P:ab phero ke liye khade o jaiye...
both stood.. up... n samrat held her hand.. n they took
seven pheras n in last Phera samrat was behind gunjan..
n phera's over...
P:ab dulhan ki mang me sindoor bhar de...
n samrat took sindoor.. n removed her tiny mang tika
n filled her mang n she closed her eyes... n felt the
moment...
P:ab dulhan ko mangalsutra pehnaiye...
n samrat tied mangalsutra around her neck...
P:aaj se aap pati patni huye... aap dono saat jamno
ke bandhan me bandh gaye ho.. aaj se aap logo ka jeena
marna hasna roka.. sab rk dusre ke sath hoga...
ek dusre ka sukh dukh sab mera tumhara nahi humara hoga..
aur beta apni patni ka khayal rakhana...
S:ji pandit ji...
P:bhagwan ji se aashirwad le lo...
n nw gunjan had tears... both went infront of
god's idol n both folded their b=hands. n closed thier
eyes...
S(in mind):god plzzz help me aap jante ho ki abhi me
kitni muskil me hoo plzz... mein sab sambhal saku
itni shakti dena muje.. mein apni patni aur apne
bacche ki hifasat kar saku plzz god...
G(in mind):bhagwan jii plzzz muje shakti dena apne pati
ke sath reh aku apne bacche ko sambhal saku aur uske ghar
ko jo ab mera haii.. plzz bhgwan jjiii... muje sakti
dena...
both opened theier eyes.. turned n saw benji was in tears.
gunjan went to him n both hugged...
as they were jaan of each other... both cried a lot...
both broke the hug...
B:dii aap mat jaao na.. sam humare ghar rahega kyu sam??
S:benji ro kyu rahe ho?? jab mann kare gunjan se milne
ka mann kare aa jana...
B:par mein diii ke bagair nahi reh sakta...
S:to mere ghar par aa jaao... dahej me...
gunjan lightly glar at samrat...
G:ab aise kya dekh rahi ho?? tum dahej nahi laayi to
dahej mang raha hu...
B:meri dii to tume de di...
S:thnks benji warna pehli baar lyf me mein tumse' dar gaya
tha ki agar tumne shaadi ke liye haa nahi kiya to...
bt finally u said yes...
B:abhi aap logo ke bacche ke liye muje ye karna hi tha..
every1 bacame serious.,...
n benji n gunjan again cried...
S:benji ab hume jaane do agar hum yahi rahenge to gunjan
ro ti rahegi aur uske liye rona thik nahi hai..
B:yahh i knw bbye dii n will miss u,...
again they hugged... n broke the hug..
G:i will miss u too...
B:sam dii ka...
S:khayal rakhunga.. warna tu muje maar dalega...
both smiled...
n sajan sat in car... n left for samrat's home..
G:samrat wo hum ghar par...
S:tum fikar matkaro wo main sambhal lunga...
they reached home... n samrat's mom shilpa opened the
door...
n sockeddd

precap:
dont want to telll...wink...

Hope you like the part.. if you like it dont res do comment..
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Love'😉
Radhi...

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Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 years ago

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RICHA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#115

😆

luvvv u 4 dis sW*Hrt...🤗

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Ekta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG............!!!!!!!!!!!!

wat an update.....????!!!!! mind-blowing, terrific, awesum, amazing, just luvd it........

YAY! YAY! my guess was rite........SaJan married........its PARTY time.......🥳........

MAZZZZZZZA AA GAYA YAAR.......!!!!!!!!!!!

but m feeling bad 4 samrat's family & nupur.......

& sam hasn't told gunjan abt nupur??????

ye gunjan tyaag naa krne lage........😭

thnk god benji came 2 knw abt this & he'z with them.......

bas ab w8ing 4 life after marriage..........

hope sam falls in luv with gunjan........

thnx 4 the awesum update radhi di........luv u.......🤗

CONT SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GET 2 PM ME........

w8ing eagerly 4 next update.......cont soon......😊

Edited by ekta_monaya - 14 years ago

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: ar_sajan4evr
ressssssssss

hey bhagwan richu ko thodi akkal deeeeeeeeeeee😆😆😆

sabse pehle ressssssssss

par cmmnt kon karegaaaaaaaaaaa😡😡😡😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

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445892

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Posted: 14 years ago

#118

hey radhka
Hmm phely tm ny sajan k marge ko boring bola?how dare u hun han bolo bolo i wl kil u if u ever again used ths word in anY SS
Now 4m starting...
I was so hapy reading samratz desicion..m glad he understandz her condition...
Then benji omg i was so so so sacred i hopd that he wl undrstandz n my hapnez knew no boundz 4 surly reading benji sam convo so so so so awesme mindblowing
Then i was on 9 cloud hearng yes 4m gunjan....itz gud that sam didnt tel gunjan abt nupur otherwse she surly wl nt alowd him to sacrifce hope they soon fel in luv W*H each other ..
Feeling bad 4 sam parentz n nupur.hope so his mom wl undrstandz them n acept their relatnshp.n nupur 2 dont harm gunjan or their baby....lovd sajan s pov..awesme mindblowing update..cant w8 4 nxt.do continue soon.
Long coment deny k attempt the lol
Love u mystry master cant w8 when sajan fel in love
Meri

Edited by meerrii - 14 years ago

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: ekta_monaya
res...........

hey bhagwan ekta ko bhi thodi akkal de denaaaaaaaaaaaaa

res kar diya or cmmnt nahi😆😆😆

ab main bhi aisa hi karungiii

res kar dungiii par update nahi karungiiiiiiiiiiiii😆😆😆😆