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crazyfriends007

@crazyfriends007

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Posted: 14 years ago

#231

lovely

update soon

waiting 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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Aaksha

@princess.rocks

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#232

waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting

waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting 😳

Edited by princess_aakshu - 14 years ago

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Angelic_mishty

@Angelic_mishty

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#233

IMP - i hav created new account for PMS...so dose who wants to be pmed for my maneet updates, plzz add me..

Those, who vil not add me...vil not gets pms for m any story from further on...

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Part 18

[note - its still d party scene so maan is still in mask..so dnt get confused...]

she slowly opened her eyes...
she was blushig wid his touch on her lips...
she whispered - mujhe laga aap chale gaye...
maan smiled..whispering - bina tumhari izazat...
she blushed more..she loved d way he made her feel special...
he moved closer...
tucking her strands behind her ear...
she was moaning wid his moves...
his another hand was still pinning her 2nd hand behind her waist...
he whispered in her ear - tumhe satane ka haqq sirf mujhe hai...samajhi tum...
she blushed like anything...

hiding d spark in her eyes...
...

suddenly she remebered she was angry...
she pushed him...
looked away making a big funny angry face...
maan looked at her face...
omg...for d 1st time he was glancing..ENJOYING her tantrums...
his heart missed a bit wid her baby angry face...
he was not sure if he could stop himself...

he was mesmerized...
his heart was pounding like a 18 yrs teenager watching her funny angry face...
she was still making a baby angry face...
watching him in between through d corner of her eyes...
n den again looking away making face...
he just loved it...he loved every bit of her...
her every single sec was making him fall for her more n more...
he slowly slipped his hand further resting on her shoulder...
she snapped it again making a face...
maan moved closer to her from back...not touching her but still enough close to whisper in her ear...
maan whispered - naraz ho...
she nodded in yes...maintaining her angry face...
maan smiled shooking his head absolutely loving her cute anger...
maan whispered - bilkul nahi manogi...
geet nodded for a NO...
maan - bina bataye chala gaya..isliye naraz ho...
geet looked at him in shock thinking...aye lo..ek me hu...na mujhe unka naam pata hai..na mujhe pata hai ke ye dikhte kaise hai...aur ye meri har baat kaise jaan leta hai...she was puzzled...
she just blabbered - aap jadugar ho...
he smiled again...enjoying her blaberring..
geet confusingly - mera matlab hai...woh...chhado..kuchh nahi..
again looked away making a face thinking.."har waqt patar patar karti hai..aur unke samne ek shabd bhi nahi niklata muh se...heyy babaji..meri madat karo na..."
...
maan moved a bit closer...
she almost shivered knowing he is near...
she was still trying to look away...
maan slowly slipped his hand in front covering his arms through her waist...
she almost missed her bit..wid his arm carrasing her waist...
she looked at his hand...he was continuously looking at her from back...
her angry face turned in a big smile looking at d gift n big choclate in his hand...
she took it in a sec without thinking...
was about to hug in happiness..as if she possesed him..
she remebred she was angry..she again tried to made her face...
maan just loved her being so cute...
his hand slipped over her stomach pulling her closer...
he placed a soft kiss on her hair whispering - ab toh izazat hai na...
...
she didn't like it...
she didn't want him to go...par unse kaise kahu...ek sawal to puchhna banta hai na...
omg...m so confused...goddd.
she just looked back...
he was disappeared...like alwzzz...
she shook her head feeling shy on his touch when he was around...
omg...how easily he drove her creazy..she wondered...
" gift yeppyyy..." - she was jumping...smiling...
gift...gift..gifttt...i love...she paused...blushed...again jumped in happiness...
omg..omg...
...
maan felt complete looking her happy wid his gift...

though he couldn't listen her words as he was a bit away in a corner gazing her...

but still felt relief..watching her so happy...

n left from dere wid a feel of completeness...

11:00pm

karan - btw annie...how hav u been here...london se kab aayi...
annie _ actually..colge ke baad aur wahan rehne ka man nahi huva..ghar ki yaad aa rahi thi..so ...
shweta - omg..matlab tum yahan permantly rehni aayi ho...dats osum news...v vil hav fun like our old days...
karan - yah..its quite time now...v didn't hav been together...
annie - really missing dose days...
...
mayank,ranbir,nisha and nupur joined dem...
mayank - can we plz disturb u...
karan - ohh plz..dnt b formal...
nupur - hooyyyeee...omg..karan tumhare dolle sholle to kamal ke hain..hayye wari javan...
karan cleared his throat - sorry...
mayank rolled his eyes...
nupur - sorry nahi thank you...
karan gave a strange look..wid a smile...
nisha - aap konse konse functions arrange karte hai..i mean genually...
shweta - all kinds of functions...even mr.brij handa ki wedding ka project b hume hi mila hai...dats how we came in contact in geet n arranged dis party...
ranbir - ohh dats great..sound interesting...par ye party host kahan hai..kuchh der pehle mujhe marne ke liye mere pichhe bhag rahi thi..par ab kahan gayi...
nisha looked down...
mayank - usse kisi normal cheeze exprect karna is nxt ti impossible...
nupur - haan..bilkul..geet ko samajhana matlab morela ke station pe giri huyi sui dhudna...hooyyyeee
...
annie almost laughed...
...dey searched for her...she was nowhere...
...
mayank called on geet's phone...
she didn't respond...
mayank called on rano's phone...
rano - hello beta...
mayank - hello aunty..ji woh geet...
rano - haan beta...woh ghar pohoch gayi hai...dnt worry...
mayank - ok aunty..v were just worried...thnq
...
annie - kya huva..where is she...
mayank - wo ghar chali gayee..
nisha - kisiko batakar b nahi gayi...
mayank - aaj kal bahot ajeeb behave kar rahi hai..kya hoga is ladaki ka...
ranbir - well...we shud also leave now...
nisha - kal colge me dekh lenge usse...
annie - ok...thnq for d wonderfull day...
...
all had a hug n left...

PRECAP : most tasty chocolate of d world...ahem ahem...

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nxt pt - part 19

IMP - reader, i need good response from u all...d lack of likes n comments every time in every update of any story makes me sad...n i dnt feel like updating...if u want more n more updates from me...dnt forget to like n comment..it takes a sec to LIKE n a min to COMMENT..dnt i deserve a min or ur time aftr d update ??...i request all silent readers to listen to my request !! THNQ !!

love

MishTy

Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago

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ridhisidhi

@ridhisidhi

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#234

mind blowing👍🏼................

luv every update more n more....

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shiffa

@shiffa

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#235

u r awsum as always............................👍🏼

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gunjar

@gunjar

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#236

Really awesome update angelic really love u a lot waiting for ur next update be fast ...........😊😊

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#237

Nice update. BAhut wait karaya. Detail me comments at night. Right now my daughter's dinner time.

Edited by anuandavi - 14 years ago

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Eva Shah

@maanujaanu

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#238

awesum update

luved it

do continue soon

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#239

thank u mishti for updating............loved the update...........oh geet maan per gussa kar rahi thi aur woh uss ada ko bhi pyar kar raha tha..............loving it........i just love the way he reads her mind..............waisey gift kya tha yaar.............r u updating the next scene?