PLZ.MAKE ME RIDDHIMA MALLICK (OS)

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PLZ.MAKE ME RIDDHIMA MALLICK (OS)
Mumbaai,the dreamland!!...where everyone comes to fulfill their dream!!...and mumbai does not dissapoint anyone...fulfill everyone's dreams!!...

as soon as the flight touched the land...I remembered everything,which happened in my life..my childhood,college life...my papa--dr.sashank,mom,anji di ,my friends...muskan,rahul ,sanjana,priti and someone----who is the most important and loving person in my life.. ..."ARMAAN"...

now i am settled in Haward...i am a famous" neuro-surgeon",which was my dream since childhood...i am a doctor and a professor too...my research about "neuro- surgery "...has brought an amazing revolution in medical field...and today i will get award for this invention...which was held in mumbai.. in my native land...so i had to come mumbai for a few days ...

i came outside from airport...papa said to pick up me...but mom came ...I hugged my mom with moist eyes...mom caressed my hair and said .." how are you my bachcha?"...

me :" fine mom...where is papa?..he told me to receive...

mom :" ya...actually your papa is attending an accident case...which is occured early morning...

me : " ok...where is di?..."
mom : " she is also in the hospital...actually the victim is her friend and the most famous doctor of "SANJIWANI" in pune..

me : "how is he now?"
mom : " critical...seviour hemorrhage in brain..."..
me " so sad...what is the name ?..and how di knows him?...

we came near aur santo...driver kept my luggage in dicky...I sits near my mom in back seat...

mom : " you forgot ,anji is now in "PUNE SANJIWANI"...as a senior doctor...this guy is his best friend...his name is " DR.arman"...

'DR.arman!!!!!!!!!!!...I felt that I had fallen from a highbuilding!!!!...

mom was continuing .." I like him so much...your papa thought to make him son in law..but he always refused for it...but he always used to come with anji in our house...'

mom was looking sad and talking a lot about him...

but I could not hear anything...coz I remembered everything which was happened in my life...actually I didn't forget it...only trying not to remember...

...

'ARMAN MALLICK!!"...the most handsome hunk in our medical college ."JNMC..in delhi"...mostly girls were crazy for him...but I used not to concentrate on him...coz i came to complete my internship in this college to achieve my goal...the 'neuro' department of that college is the best in india...so papa sent me this college...i didn't want to waste my time in these nonsense matter ...

one day,when I was taking my lunch in college canteen...he came and sat on the chair in front of me and said.." hello,dr.riddhima gupta,hope you know me..."

i was surprised to see his courage...said," yes..you are 'dr.arman"..so what???...

arman : " i like you..."
me (angrily) : what do you mean?...
arman : "means...I want to friendship with you"...
me :" but I don't...
arman (surprisingly) :" sure..."no"...
me : "ya...no...
arman (confusinly) : "what wrongs yaar!!...each and every girl wants to friendship with me".

me:" I have no time for these nonsense,and its our important time for teaching ...so plz don't waste time you too ..."

arman : " making friends is the wasting of time?...very peculiar!!!...
me : " for me...its wasting of time..."..

suddenly arman caught my hand.." hey,you are rare... I need you...

me (angrily) " plz.leave my hand...and plz.don't disturb me..."

arman left my hand,looked at me a minute and suddenly stand up and make a 'v' sign in his chest ..." no...arman never lose courage...as long as you don't say 'yes'... i will send you "white rose"...".the sign of friendship"...

...

after that,he never came in front of me...but used to sent me everyday 'white rose' through ward boys...and one day getting irritate...I came in the recreation room...where he was sitting with his friends ...

me (angrily) : " I want to speak with you..

arman said the girls to go from there ...

me : " why you send me roses?...

arman : " you know ,its answer...

I did not want to any drama,so said.." ok...but just friendship...and if I will not want...you will not call me or meet me...

arman : " ok..I agree...thanks ...

and at once he took out a bunch of 'white flowers' from his guitar box and bent down his head and said...' the name of our friendship..."..his antics made me smile...


...

and i don't know when and how we became intimate friends...perhaps I had fallen in love with him...he always used to call me 'shona'..and I liked it so much' now everything would be seemed lifeless without him...and gradually i understood that he became my life...i could not live without him...

but one day ,i made the great mistake,which changed our life...arman brought me in his home...coz we had joined a late night party ,and my hostel's gate was closed at 10 o'clock...we had totally drenched in rain on the way...we spent that night together in his house...


...
after 2 months I got that i was pregnant...when i said it arman...he told me.." riddhima, why did not you take a protection?...you know,its our important year...

i was stunned on his reaction!!!..."arman , its our love...you are saying like just we committed a crime...

arman hold my hand.." i know riddhima...but coming years are most important of our life...there is no place for a baby...

me : " please marry me arman...then I will manage everything...you not love me?...

arman (pressed my hand to assure ) : "you are my life,shona...but i can't marry that time...i want to concentrate myself on my bright future in coming years...plz. come with me in hospital..where dr.simmi will help us to abortion the baby...


i could not say anything...i felt that i didn't know this new arman...he is not my love...he is a cheater,who used me...

...

in the evening ,i went his house to tell my final decision not to aborting...but i saw from the window that arman hugged a beautiful girl and said.." I love you nikki...my jaan...arman loves you most in this world."...

i came back my hostel...and that night left delhi...i had completed my internship...so i decided to do my PG in" haward university"...

now i live in howard with bua and my 4 years old naughty son " riddhan"...who is the carbon copy of 'arman'...

my chain of thought broke hearing mom's voice.." beta...we reached home..'


...

After 2 hours papa and anji di came home'.I saw that they were very tensed'.perhaps anji di cried a lot'.she hugged me and said.." sorry ,riddhz'.i am not able to welcome my sweet sis'I am very depressed now'my best friend'(she cut the words and started to crying)..

Me : " how is he?"'
Anji di : " he lives on life support system'.he is in coma'

I felt that my breathe was also stopped'.papa told.." he wants a major surgery now 'his nervous system is not working'.

Me( at once).." papa,can I do this surgery?'..

Papa was surprised'"you,beta!!!..but its very risky'.
Me : " and I accept this challenge'
Papa : " but why??...you don't know him'.
Me : " he is my di's best friend papa'it's a great mean for me'
Papa : ' ok'but we need a permission of his relatives'.


''''''''''.
In the evening,we came in the hospital'where my love was kept on life support system'..just then,I entered in the cabin'.a girl ran towards me and hugged me tightly'.she was crying bitterly using these words .."bhabhi, its too much late'.bhai is leaving us'"..

I was surprisingly saw that she is that girl, whom I had seen with arman''

Me : " you know me??...how??..
Nikki : "arman bhai always speaks me about you' there is only your pics in bhai's room'.he loves you so much'why you left him??'..

I was totally speechless!!!...

Nikki was continuing : " bhai searched you a lot and he came to know that you are dr.sashank's daughter'so he joined sanjiwani'he always loved to go your mumbai house as its would make him remembrance you'but he knew that you will not forgive him'..

Nikki stopped for a minute to have a breathe'and again continuing her words in her sob'" last night he knew that you are coming mumbai'so he did his night duty and after that he moved off for mumbai to meet with you'and he got this accident'

She fell down on her knees'" plz.bhabhi,save my bhai's life'plz.bring back him..i know,only you could do this miracle'

I caught nikki's hand and said'" yes nikki,I have to do it'.i can not lose him'.

Next day, a medical team was ready for the surgery'.in the meanwhile,I phoned bua to come with 'riddhan''..bua reached direct in the hospital with "riddhan"'I took riddhan in arman's cabin'.riddhan was surprisinly looking at arman'he knew arman is his 'papa' coz I told him it before and he always loved to see our album which was full with arman's pic'.

Riddhan hold arman's hand with his little finger and said.." what is happened with my pa"'

Me : " he got an accident ,beta"'
Riddhan : " when he will be fine?"
Me : " when you will tell him to be fine'plz.tell him.."

Riddhan went close to arman and said.." pappa'.plz.open your eyes'I love you'I need you'"
Me : " say him to come back for you'"

Riddhan caressed arman's hair.."pappa, I came from Haward for you'you know haward?.(he streched his little hands)..it's far far away 'plz.come back for me'".

I called nikki and said riddhan'" your bua'"

Riddhan was very happy'.he said pointing at my bua'" its your bua..(and towards nikki )..and its me..

He went into nikki's arm and kissed her.."I love my bua"'
Nikki hugged him tightly'" love you too riddhan'
Me : ' nikki,I am going for arman's surgery..plz pray to god for my love'
Nikki said with moist eyes.." plz.bhabhi'bring my bro back'.
Me " sure'.

'''''''''..


After 15 days'..

Arman was talking with riddhan'.

Riddhan : " papa..will you come with us in howard?'I will meet you with my friends'.

Arman : " if your mom gives permission'.
Me : " who am I going to refuse?...

Arman (smiling) ' you are my riddhan's mom'.and and'
Riddhan quickly said'"you are pappa's shona'

I rounded my eyes.." who told you!!!'
Riddhan smiled .." my pappa'.

He got off to arman's bed and said'" I am going to my bua'plz mom'make my dad your friend again'"

He left the room'I understood that its nikki taught him'.

I knew that arman was staring at me constantly but I showed as if I was busy with the files'arman broke the silence'." Plz.forgive me'.you are rare 'I need you"..

Me (with fake anger) " I have not time for these nonsense''if you marry me,then I agree"'.

Arman sprang with joy and cried with pain.."AA-AA-HHH!!!!!!!!"'

I ran towards him and made support to sleep in the bed'.and sat near him'. '.

Arman hold my hand ,kissed and said in tears'"I have been punished for a long time shona'.plz don't leave me'I love you'.

Me : " I love you too'riddhan need you arman'plz.make me 'riddhima mallick'''

Arman kept his head on my lap and closed his eyes'.."sure shona'.my riddhan's mom'I have been waitng for it since 5 years'"'


love u all
punam
HEY FRIENDS,HOPE YOU LIKE IT...PLZ. FEEL FREE TO COMMENTS...IF IT TOUCHED YOUR HEART,PLZ.MAKE A COMMENT AND PRESS THE TAB ALSO...THANKS A LOT..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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just awsum.....beautiful....lobed it 2 da core...
well done!!!
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hey punam
the story of this Os was simply very beautiful n extremely touching...but jus one prob..u have made quite a lot of grammatical errors..if u cud jus make them correct..otherwise..i loved it

do write more n pm me :D
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Originally posted by: ashi.loves.ksg

hey punam
the story of this Os was simply very beautiful n extremely touching...but jus one prob..u have made quite a lot of grammatical errors..if u cud jus make them correct..otherwise..i loved it

do write more n pm me :D

HEY FRIEND...actually mai ek hindi writer hun....mujhe english mein likhna aata hi nahi...but try kar rahi hun...aur try karne se hi sikhungi na...so ,its request for all readers.... plz.ignore my mistakes....and if possible,plz,pm me where i did mistakes ....it will help me to a lot....thanks... punam
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hey amazing OS anamika .................. plz update ur another OS
love u
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hey Punam...........
awesome OS 👏⭐️👏...........
loved it soooooo much...........
thanks for pm...........
plz write more😃
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wow this was just so amazing! i loved it!

omg pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee write more!
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heyyy dear,
nice OS
do write more



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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was so touching and wonderful ff
lovd it
thanks for pm
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was simply awsum di.............

really amazing.............

loved it.........

thnx for the pm.....................

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