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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyyyy zeenia
yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy i m 1st to comment 🥳
such a beautiful update yaar ⭐️
luvd d way u described siddhima's situation 👏
ur dialogues wer apt for d situation 😃
finallyyyyyy Riddhima confronted tht psycho (naam lene ko bhi sharm aa rahi hai 😡) n how 😳
jst luvd d way she said "I am home" 😳
indeed Sid's arms is where her home lies ☺️
dis was my fav part
bst lines said by my Mrs. Riddhima Siddhant Modi 😍

The truth is that you make me cry, and Sid wipes away my tears. You left me to die, and he brought me back to life. You suffocate me, while he leaves me feeling breathless. Your selfish and he's totally selfless. The truth is I can live without you, but I would die without Sid.

pls cont soon n dnt 4gt d pm 😉
Veena
Edited by veena_rocks - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Edited 😳 😳 ❤️

Zeenie 🤗 🤗 🤗

Simply AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGG Update......❤️ ❤️ ❤️

U know What I actly Like the Riddhima in ur OS And that's Very much kind of a shock to me 😲 😆 Coz u know it very well how much i love to HATE her 😆 😆 😆

And coming to Dr.Mallik 🥱 🥱 I wish Riddhima cud have given him some Tight Slaps on his Face so that he wud come out of his Delusional world and Stop Ranting That Non Sense Right Away...That man is such a Disappointment He has to be the most selfish person i have ever come across...A real Creep n self centered Man🥱 😳 👎🏼

Aah Anyways even taking his name is Worthless.... He'll always be the same a Freaking Good for Nothing Loser 🥱

And coming the Terrace scene i loved the way Riddhima Ended this Never Ending Circle of Confusion and Once n for All made it Loud n Clear to Dr.Mallik he needed a Bad reality Check...

I loved these lines the most
.....😳

Enough Armaan enough! Why does everything have to be about you and what you want! Do you want to know the truth? The truth is that you make me cry, and Sid wipes away my tears. You left me to die, and he brought me back to life. You suffocate me, while he leaves me feeling breathless. Your selfish and he's totally selfless. The truth is I can live without you, but I would die without Sid.' 👏 👏 👏

And this Last part is just so Surreal loved it 😍 😍

Sid and Ridhimma didn't know how long they stayed in each others arms. Nothing mattered at that moment but the two of them being together where they knew they belonged. Ridhimma rested her face against Sids heart knowing that it beat only for her. And finally when she looked up at Sid, he saw the love radiating from her sparkling eyes only for him.

'Lets go home,' he said lovingly, stroking her soft,silky hair.

'I am home,' she whispered with a beautiful smile.

This is the Riddhima Siddhant Modi i loved but coming back to the harsh reality it pricks 💔....but Zeenie u are an Amazing writer i actually cud imagine the last scene of the OS And do write more OS n FF's in future as well....😳 😳 😳

Love Ya My Soul Sis.....🤗 🤗

Edited by kritishah3 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Zeeeeeeee 🤗

This is sooooooooooooooo beautiful 😳😳😳

tht hormaan 😡 the audacity he had😡 telling Sid tht his wife doesn't love him....yuckkkk😡 disgusting n shameless guy 🤢😡

But I'm proud of my Mrs.Modi😳
Her confession was so beautiful
I love love love this part

'The truth is that you make me cry, and Sid wipes away my tears. You left me to die, and he brought me back to life. You suffocate me, while he leaves me feeling breathless. Your selfish and he's totally selfless. The truth is I can live without you, but I would die without Sid.'

That's my Mrs.Riddhima Siddhant Modi😳😳

and this part is just PERFECT😳

'Lets go home,' he said lovingly, stroking her soft,silky hair.

'I am home,' she whispered with a beautiful smile.


and zee I would love to see more and more beautiful SR OS n FFs from you....u truly are an amazing writer 🤗
Edited by indian_beauty - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
EEEEK, Zeenia, that was wonderful!!!!!!! 👏⭐️👏🥳
Srsly, you made me feel GOOD 😃! As in, i felt HAPPY when I read this part! 😳😕
It just felt sooooooo right!!! 😭⭐️
I LOVE THE RIDZY IN YOUR STORY!!!!! 😃😆
My fav part was:

'Lets go home,' he said lovingly, stroking her soft,silky hair.

'I am home,' she whispered with a beautiful smile.


Haayyyyeeeeeeee ☺️!

Thanks for the PM yaar! 😃 🤗
Keep it up!
Anushka 😎




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Posted: 14 years ago

This is BEAUTIFUL😊 really beautiful😳😳

Love u sooo much Zeenia for this🤗
that that that stupid psyco😡 he even had that audacity to tell Sid that his wife doesn't loves him!!!!!😡😡
but u knw what m proud of this Mrs. Modi of yours😳
her confession was really beautiful😳
and as zarqa me too loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this part
'The truth is that you make me cry, and Sid wipes away my tears. You left me to die, and he brought me back to life. You suffocate me, while he leaves me feeling breathless. Your selfish and he's totally selfless. The truth is I can live without you, but I would die without Sid.'😳😳
and this too

'Lets go home,' he said lovingly, stroking her soft,silky hair.

'I am home,' she whispered with a beautiful smile.'😳
That's our Mrs.Modi😳
Zeenia this OS was really beautiful...nikammi kaha thi itna din!!!😆
yaar plzzz write more of such OS/FF in future coz u became one of my most fav writers😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Zeenia ....................... Can I say this ..................????


I LOVE YOU FOR THIS UPDATE

Superb.................. and I LOVE THIS RIDDHIMA ..............

These words sum up what SR is and will be and A........................ R were

The truth is that you make me cry, and Sid wipes away my tears. You left me to die, and he brought me back to life. You suffocate me, while he leaves me feeling breathless. Your selfish and he's totally selfless. The truth is I can live without you, but I would die without Sid.'


Wonderful update


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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update so finally SR r together n Armaan is out of their lives
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG Zee!
Where were you all these days!
I had stopped reading SR F's or OS"s cause it only reminded me of the murder committed by thr CVS to their story..
But somehow couldnt help reading this one and OMG! Wonderful.
Beautiful piece......Am off to read it one more time!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Zeenzie 🤗🤗🤗

I love love love dis part <333

I can so feel Sid's pain
And look at d audacity of dat Hormonal creature
he is telling Sid dat his wife doesn't love him 😡😡😡
Uhhhhhhhh I feel like pushing him from a hill 😡😡😡

Loved how Ridz confronted dat psycho
The dialogues were PERFECT

And her confession Haiyeeee 😍😍
I love ' your ' Ridz 😳

My fav part was -

' Lets go home ,' he said lovingly, stroking her soft ,silky hair.
' I am home ,'she whispered with a beautiful smile


Haiyeeee my Siddhima 😍😍😍



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Posted: 14 years ago
*edited*

zeenieee u r simply amazing!!!

fabulous part👏 👏 👏

the way u always potray sid's pain is too good

Sid simply nodded and lead the way. His face was impassive not revealing his true feelings. But if Ridhimma had cut open his chest she would have seen his heart bleeding.

👏 👏 👏 but i m glad its over n now no more pain 4 sid

n hormannnnnn 😡 😡 😡 he is juss so disgusting bt i hope he is finally gone n never comes back!!!!

n ridhimma was on a roll her confession was so damn beautifull n this was d best part 😳 😳 😳

The truth is that you make me cry, and Sid wipes away my tears. You left me to die, and he brought me back to life. You suffocate me, while he leaves me feeling breathless. Your selfish and he's totally selfless. The truth is I can live without you, but I would die without Sid.'

n d end it could nt get better 😳 😳 😳

'Lets go home,' he said lovingly, stroking her soft,silky hair.

'I am home,' she whispered with a beautiful smile.

awww sidhimma 😍 😍 😍

zeeeniieee keep writing more u are juss fab!!!
Edited by subia-17 - 14 years ago

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