Hey Amal!!
Finally finished catching up...it's frikkin awesome <3
I LOVE this FF! I can't believe I didn't read it till now...to tel you the truth somewhere in my mind I remembered this as an ArSh FF and I don't read any other FFs apart from AR tee hee...But, thanks so much for your PM today :)
Coming to all the updates they were all really good!!! But there's one or two things I couldn't relate to...firstly, I don't understand how Riddhima's already in love with the Mystery guy...sorry for that but I just can't relate to Love at First Sight...in fact I don't believe in it at all but that's okay you wrote well nevertheless and don't wory I'm not gonna abandon this FF...I quite like it ;) <3
Secondly, I can't understand why Riddhima didn't scream when he kidnapped her and came that close...I'd have probably kicked him where it hurts most 😆 But then that's me and as much as I love love stories, I'm not romantic myself so meh.
Apart from these two inconsequential things, I ADORE this FF :) Really, I do! Every character is so engaging and the story so far is beautiful <3 I love Riddhima's description of Muskaan :D And I like Sid too although I will personally murder you if you make this a SidMa FF :D Riddhima's mental voice is quite refreshing and I like the way she thinks...it makes for an intriguing read :)
You write really well for your age! You can't tell from the FF that you're that young! I admire your writing style a lot because it isn't overly dramatic :)
Coming to the latest update...OH MY GOD. I never thought of that twist mahn!!! "Amihdir" wow :D I can't WAIT to read what happens next...is her mystery guy [who I presume is Armaan] the smuggler?? Is that why he said he wasn't worth waiting for? Gosh I have a plethora of questions...which I assume you'll answer with coming updates :)
I'll comment regularly from now on! :D
Continue real soon :)
xoxo
Aanya
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