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Originally posted by: kajenkashkriya

Ok, so first of all, the promo was great! And then when I actually read the promo, I saw that you had updated the part, so I went back and read that too. It was so good too!

I'm so glad that her husband has decided to come finally! But I don't know why, but I have a feeling it is not Armaan. But then again, I could be completely wrong, right? Right.

I have a question. How did he (her husband) know where to find her? I mean it isn't like he knew who she was before when he filled her maang, right? And then, if it is Armaan, wouldn't he have told Billy about it? Then again, he may have not.

I still have a feeling that her husband has a very big secret hidden behind him. But that's just me and my crazy fantasies. You tell me, when are you updating next? I know you just updated, but it was so good that now I have no patience! No really, that update was really good, and I cannot wait till you update. The way you described their every move, their every emotion, evokes an image in my mind, and it's an image like no other. It's almost like a movie and that is what I like about reading. You can imagine whatever you want, and that's what you are letting your readers do.

I know, I know, most of my comments are like "aww, cute update" or "update soon, it was amazing!", but once in a while, when I feel like I have to say something, I do :) And today, after reading this part, I felt that I should commend you on your great writing skills. Carry on!

Update soon though! I can't wait!

Love,

Kriya <33

Originally posted by: sweety7395

Hey awesome ff...sorry I wasn't able to comment earlier but I have been busy with school...hate it but I have to do it

Anyway coming to this ff...I love the concept...it is so different and unique...really love the way you describe everything and your writing...it is really good

So Riddhima is an orphan and she doesn't know anything about her past and she has been through a lot in her life...I really do feel bad for her

Love Muski and MInnie...they were really cute

Wow so Riddhima is married and she doesn't know who that person is...thats horrible but she is waiting for him that is so sweet...I want that person to be Armaan but I don't know if it actually is him...But after reading part 3 I have a feeling that her husband is Armaan...I mean Riddhima went to the Mallik Enterprise for a job so Armaan has to be his son and he probably heard Riddhima tell her story to his dad or maybe his dad told him the story about Riddhima and now that he knows that she is waiting for him...he feels bad and therefore found her and told her to forget him and move on...but I don't know why he said that he is not worth it...I am so curious

Also the newspaper story...I think this will be a part of the story later on...cant wait to read the other parts to find out

So sorry for my rambling but I just needed to put down what I was thinking after reading the parts

By the way...love the title...it is so unique

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon...really curious to know what will happen next

Originally posted by: pari_044

hey the part was superb cant wait to read the next part...
plsss try nd update de next part sooonnn...

Originally posted by: araja1234

awesome part. The mystery man must be armaan. Update soon and thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Medzi_ARian...

OMG Amal! That was awesome! I totally loved the part!

Muski is hilarious! I just love her! I really liked the game though I loved the way you turned it.

I'm damn sure that was Armaan! Wasn't it? But I hate him for doing this! Taking full advantage of the blind fold. Ok, wait... say what? How on Earth does he know that Riddhima has been waiting for him?! Has he been stalking her or what!! And... uh... why is he telling her to move on? And why does he think he's not worth it?

You better update SUPER/MEGA soon because I'll die with curiosity! And mujhe PM kyun nahin milla?

-Medzi

Originally posted by: -Trish-

Forget the part Amal..I am warning you you will NEVER trouble me with your PM's I love you and this FF.And I love fast updates okay <3

Hmm now we come to the part I am so like Riddhima I love window shopping..Shopping for hours and hours is not my cup of tea..and OMG Muski is such a chapad chapad queen yaar..She's tooo cute..Oh BTW I love The Last Song by Nicholas Sparks..I love the Minnie , Muskaan , Riddhima part and now the major thing I can bet it is Armaan..It HAS to be Armaan but why on earth does he want her to move on and how the heck does he know she hasn't moved on..Amal this is not fair yaar..so many questions !! Urrggghhh..Jaldi jaldi update karo..and hey keep 'troubling' me with your PM's :) <3

Originally posted by: ammy_ka_ashu

wow that was super amazing! omg so armaan has finally entered! yay! haha i know u never said its armaan, but it has to be :D

Originally posted by: ksg_farhan

OMG AWESOME PART DEAR.