Dil ka rishta 4 Kshitij-kumud

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-1.... kSHITIJ & KUMUD r neighbours.both r rich.kUMUD is the pet &nb sp; &nb sp; of her parents.she is a medical student,but & nbsp; dances,writes poems,paints.kSHITIJ sings her poems in his &nb sp; &nb sp; college & wins prizes.both of them have feeling 4 each &n bsp; &n bsp; other.but they hav'nt revealed it.but they no that they &n bsp; &n bsp; luv each oher.sIMRAN;KSHITIJ'S sis supports it.she is the &nb sp; &nb sp; best friend of kUMUD.
kUmud's mind is full of &nbs p; &nbs p; superstitous things imposed on her by her dadi.dadi &nb sp; &nb sp; tells her the stories of a handsome prince who rides a   ;   ; white horse to enter the heart of beautiful women.she &nb sp; &nb sp; draws that prince & gives it to kshitij 4 his b'day.he &nbs p; &nbs p; cares the painting very much.
Unexpectedly kumud's parents die in an accident.
kumud was screaming heavily   ;   ; that she can't make herself believe that her beloved parents r no more.
k gets shifted to her dadi's house.
Kali;the rich spoilt girl comes to stay in the hostel nearby Ks's house.she always fights with kshitij.Ks hates her.
4 a succesful beat,kali dances at the verandah of Ks's house.Ks comes out &nb sp; &nb sp; angrily.Kali kisses on his cheeks.
Ks loses his control & slaps her.kali was shocked.
Ks:how dare u?u thought our life will become a typical hindi film story?after fight falling in luv?never...it will never happen in our life.let me go & take a bath,bcoz u touched me.
he goes.kali felt defeated.she cries.

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Piku_S thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great starting
i wonder what happens
plz write soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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good beginning only 1 thing what is nbsp
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow gr8 start!!! šŸ‘but yes wht is dhis &nb sp; ????😔 plz remove next time... spoil whole mood of story....😔

besides dht best luck 4 "Dil ka rishta.." šŸ‘sweet like u....šŸ˜›šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 19 years ago
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just lemme know that what is nsbp? and anyway a nice start...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: dilwali_sshh

just lemme know that what is nsbp? and anyway a nice start...

oh its a error when u put a space thats what it shows up

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-2.... Kali challenges that she'll make kshitij fall 4 her.she
pretends that she feels guilty.Ks 4gives her.she wins
Ks's friendship.kumud's dadi fixes her wedding with
karan.he belongs to a famous business
family.actually now they r poor due to the business
failure.karan decides to marry kumud 4 money.4 that he
sacrificed his luv.dadi finds out that kumud is not
happy about that marriage.finally she reveals her secret
luv 4 ks.dadi decides to meet ks.kali asks ks
to giv her a lift on his bike.he agres.dadi sees ks
with kali & misunderstands him.she tells this to
kumud.she does'nt believe this.she goes to meet
ks.she goes there.but she cud'nt see any1.she sees
kali there.kumud:who r u? kalti lies:i'm ks's
fiancee. kumud's heart broke.she leaves the
place.Ks was
shocked to no that kumud's marriage is fixed.simran
tells Ks:i can't believe thT Kumud IS READY 4 THE
WEDDING.how cud she? Ks:but simran , hav never told
her that i luv her.its not sure that she luves
me.she:but i always felt that she luves u. the wedding
day comes.pammi comes to meet dadi.she claims
that she is the gf of karan & is pregnant with his
child.every1 was shocked.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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good...keep writing!!!!!šŸ‘ so many loves so many!!!! šŸ˜‰sounds really funny...šŸ˜† but its ok..dht's why its call fiction!!!!!!šŸ˜›

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Arre wah jesmine....Mere anne tak yeh bhi shuru,...
šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜†
Fantastic jee, abb main aa gayi hon na so fikasr not.. šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART-3...Dadi puts Pammi out of the house thinking that she is
lying to break kumud's wedding.the wedding takes
place.tht day during night time,kumud dresses like a
rich modern girl.she talks like another grl named Dimple
Rozanio & Karan cud'nt enter her room.the next mornng
she becomes ok & 4gets her change in the nite.that nite
she dresses like a kathak dancer & goes out as if she
wants to do stage performance.karan brings he
back.every nite she started becoming another
person.kshitij undestands tht kumud's dadi did'nt allow
her to marry him due to some misunderstandings.he
becomes upset.kali becomes sad seeing the lost
Kshitij.she becomes guilty since its bcoz of her the
wedding plan broke up.she confesses to dadi &
Ks.Ks does'nt 4giv her & hates her like
anything.dadi tells Ks that still kumud is a
virgin.he was shocked.k's problem continued during
night.they take her to a psychitrist.thru hypnotism he
finds that due to her luv 4 kshitij,she can't accept asmit
as her hubby & thats why in her unconscious mind she's
becoming another person everynite.the psychiatrist tells
Karan that they shud start a FLY life only after some
months.karan goes abroad.finally ks 4gives kali
her good change.kumud comes & stays in the hostel nearby
Ks's house to continue her studies.finally Ks gets
compelled to marry kali.this disturbed kumud's
mind.then comes kali's e-bf nakul to blackmail her.1
day kali gets killed.evry1 thinks that nakul is behind
her death.but gets proved tht he is not the
culprit.every1 suspects kumud.bcoz she is jealous of
kali's luck.she gets arrested.but then Ks comes &
reveals that he is the real killer.he tells them that he
always hated kali.but kumud cud'nt believe it.she
decides to save him.

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